Classic Tease #399 A week of torment Please write the rest..

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Sat Sep 30, 2006 7:21 am

if you want to peek go ahead, im updating them all the time though so you wont be seeing the final product

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Sat Sep 30, 2006 12:42 pm

no idea, i did them on my other pc so i don't have the link, next time i log on there though probs tommoz, i will post the address i got it from

doink · Post by **doink** » Sat Sep 30, 2006 8:27 pm

Howdy.

The teasers are great. The blonde in day 3, especially. But it's too much WORK to get through the tease on Day 3, because of typos, misspellings, bad syntax. The dialogue reads as if it's "canned." Sorry.

I don't mind a rather long tease, but each slide should add to the thrill. I cheated on this one before getting half-way done, just enjoying the pics.

I'm not asking for REFINED knowledge of the English language. I'm not asking for perfection. But this one surely needs to be proof-read and corrected. I gave it a "1" when I voted: not because the girls were ugly. The girls are HOT. But the way in which the tease proceeds is rather "limp." ---Doink.

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:34 am

thx for the input. i read it through it seems fine to me and i am an english literature student

but thats not to say a good one $:\'-($

i would be happy for anyone to read it through, make corrections and send it back to me, i will re-post it afterwards.

let me know if any more of you think this or any other general feelings about the teases.

Post by **dark** » Sun Oct 01, 2006 3:50 pm

Maybe it's just the difference between english and american?

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:46 pm

ok day 5 is now up and running, this is a day i dont like because its too short, i just couldn't find any good images and this day has been changed about 5 times, still hope you enjoy it.

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Mon Oct 02, 2006 3:02 pm

ok i have just gone through day 6, i have to say i love this day, the girl is so hot but not fake air brush hot just plain beauty hot.

i hope you like it will be posted at around 10-11 o'clock uk time, happy stroking

doink · Post by **doink** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:18 am

No, Dark.

Honestly, the problem is not the difference between English and American. Even though there are some words that are just plain DIFFERENT, both still use (or we are SUPPOSED to) the same grammar and syntax rules.

Two examples:

a) When you're speaking to someone directly (DIRECT ADDRESS) a comma ought to be used.

"Ralph, let me see your schlong."

b) "to" is not the same as "too" or "two."

You all get the idea. This is a pet peeve with me. Spelling is fundamentally important so that other people can simply RECOGNIZE the words. That's how communication happens.
---Doink.

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:38 am

i think dark is right, there are huge diffrences between american and english, whilst in the U.S it took me half an hour to explain what i meant by saying cheers after the guy gave me my food.

there are of coarse grammer issues.

by the way i posted the wrong day for day 6, the day i posted was unedited, i was supposed to post the other day 6 i had, after day 7 ill post the other day 6.

right no now i have some editing to do.

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 7:59 am

ok i have edited it, i can't believe i posted the wrong one but at the same time and happy that i posted it, the other one i felt was to short, oh well you can see for yourself when i post the alternative day 6 at the end of the week

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:33 pm

ok there ya go the last day of the tease, have to post it now cause the mrs is coming round and she doesn't know about my fetish----yet

hope you will enjoy, i think i have edited it fully if not i will have to tomorrow

backstrokin · Post by **backstrokin** » Mon Oct 16, 2006 3:07 am

Sorry to interupt but I will. The Week of Torment teases were not finished because of a censorship issue that happend at OD about two years ago. Someone posted a few pics of ladies in Nazi garb and the pics were taken down. So in protest to that I believe his name was "Iceman" said the he wouldn't finish the teases because of people the people complaining. Side note he was also the one responsible for all the "Sadistic" Teases.

Post by **seraph0x** » Mon Oct 16, 2006 9:14 am

backstrokin wrote:Sorry to interupt but I will. The Week of Torment teases were not finished because of a censorship issue that happend at OD about two years ago. Someone posted a few pics of ladies in Nazi garb and the pics were taken down. So in protest to that I believe his name was "Iceman" said the he wouldn't finish the teases because of people the people complaining. Side note he was also the one responsible for all the "Sadistic" Teases.

Umm, o... k..., didn't know that. Interesting to hear some webtease history.

Just to be clear: This site doesn't allow this kind of content either! Sorry, Iceman.