Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

[hentaiAddict12345]

#FattsDynamoSet
#WBhentaiAddict12345

Before set

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Beware that even though I've been lurking for a while, I don't know much about your history with all the characters. So please let me know if one of them acted "weird" or not how you expected them to!

PS: You *might* need your vibrator for this.

If you need to know the length:

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About normal, i.e. 4-6 scenes

Set

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Fatts! Congratulations! You made addict very happy!


Amazing work from someone who's retired from the game! *wink*


He called me and practically begged me to give you a reward!


He said that if you feel just a fraction of what he felt that day, he'll be happy!


So sit back, relax, and enjoy yourself, you've earned it, babe!


You know, me and the others missed you around here.


We get it, real life can get busy at times, but that don't make it any less painful...


Even worse, nobody seems to be around these days anymore. The thread almost died! Then the forum died!


But then addict and Edgeslut revived it, and now you're back too! Feels like we're entering the golden ages again!


Which reminds me... Edge for your favourite part of me, Fatts!


Anyway, I'm really glad you're back to me! Back to everyone!


Girls were basically fighting over who should greet you first...


But you know I'd win, I'm your babe after all~


Anyway, it's been real fun seeing you again, Fatts! Cya later!

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OH MY GOD, FATTS, YOU'RE BACK!!!


I missed you so much, and you must've missed me so much too!


I'm so glad you're finally back to me, your one and only girlfriend, uh-huh!


I knew it, you still love my butt, babe


We can do so much now that you're back! There's so many things that I wanted to try with you!!!


I can feel it, you've missed me so much as well, babe!


So how about you come over here and give me that D!


Okay Fatts, here I come!


Give her your D!

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Mmm, I knew you couldn't resist, come here Fatts~


Alright, Fatts, are you re-


Everything suddenly goes black...

Run!!!

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WTF??? You're so going to reg-


Everything suddenly goes black...

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You wake up, with your legs tied, and a vibrator attached to your cock. It's currently off...

Hey, you, you're finally awake...


You didn't think you could simply come back here, and everything was going to be back to normal, now did you?


Oh no, no, pet. You should suffer for abandoning us and all the others! *vibrator turns on to 2*


Now, watch what we're doing to your oh-so-pretty girlfriend:
39:40 to the end: https://vk.com/video-178074282_456239078


*vibrator turns off, resume normal stroking rules*
Oh, you want to save her? That's so cute!


Tell you what, you do what I say, when I say, and I'll call Sonya and tell her to let Nancy go. Deal? Thought so.


Then let's get you into Torment mode, shall we? I heard edging is way more intense that way~


Go on, otherwise, your girlfriend will suffer because of you~


I have to say, you're really good at this! Nice work!


But I'm not sure how much longer you can hold on...


Okay, okay, I'll call Sonya, give me a minute...


Yeah, let Nancy go, he's done what he needs to do, for now.


But give her a few more orgasms meanwhile. You can use the you-know-what. Bye! *grins*


Go on pet, check on your girlfriend~

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Going somewhere, pet?


Aww, you're going to save your girlfriend! How cute! What about me?!


Do I not deserve a "welcome back" present?


Come over here and lick me! I deserve a nice "welcome back"!


Keep going, pet! I didn't tell you to stop!


Mmm, you're as good as I remember, a-almost there...


Aaand, stop. Fuck, your tongue is still very good, even if you are out of practice...


I know, you'd like me to return the favour... Maybe some other day.


For now, I want you to cum for me soon. I really don't care about "saving yourself for your girlfriend", fuck that.


Get ready pet, any minute now...


Go ahead and cum all over my ass. Mmm, good boy! *Take as long as break as you need here*


Well, that was fun! Go see your pretty girlfriend now!


Cya, Fatts!

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What took you so long???


I have to admit though, that did feel pretty good...


Hope you don't consider all that cheating babe, we're in an open relationship after all...


Either way, thanks for saving me!


Now, I assume my knight in shining armor wants a reward, no?


You're predictable, if nothing else. But me and the other girls were talking before, and while we don't mind letting you cum all the time...


It does get pretty stale if all sets end the same way, don't you think?


Aww, don't give me that look, Fatts. I'm still letting you cum. I'm just asking you to consider giving us another choice every now and then~


Don't you want to feel the thrill of not knowing if you'll cum or not? Not knowing if it's even full orgasm or ruined orgasm?


If it's not for you, that's perfectly fine! As said, I love watching you cum, and so do many other girls!


But sometimes, I do wonder what we could be doing otherwise...


Anyway, I'll be letting you cum all over me soon, Fatts, so get ready...


Almost there...


And cum all over my pretty face! Hope you enjoyed that, babe! Cya later~

After set

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Let me know if you liked it! I really have no idea if it was enjoyable or not for you, so I'm very curious about your feedback!

My rules (update after Fatt's set - changed "tits squished" rule, removed videos entirely)

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First off, I'm not really a hentai fan, I just liked the name :P. Girls can call me "addict".

I'm paralyzed from waist down, so I barely feel my cock, but it still feels good to stroke. Unfortunately, I can't really cum/edge.

I don't really have favourites. Things I like:
- solo girl
- brunettes
- A to C cup breasts
- humiliation/degradation
- nipple play
- story-based sets

Dislike:
- tattoos (I don't mind a small tattoo here and there, but I'm not a fan of whole hand/body tattoos and such)
- anal (I unfortunately don't feel anything down there)
- milfs/older women
- fake tits
- big lips

Please no videos. I get easily bored.

I recently enjoyed stroking to metronome a lot! So I'll integrate that into my rules (girls can pick speeds if they want to)

Some base rules: (base metronome speed: 30, +Xm means metronome speed on reveal. Resets when girl changes.)
brunette/redhead/blonde - 30/20/10 strokes
tits - +20 strokes (+30m)
ass - +10 strokes (+30m)
pussy - +10 strokes (+30m)
tits squished together - clothespins on nipples for the rest of the image set. After, release and flip 90 degrees.
masturbation - +10 strokes (+30m for image only)

Girls can alter the rules/add new ones if they wish.

[EdgeSlut0828]

#HentaiAddict12345 Set:
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Well look who is finally awake.


My favorite stroker Slut Immediately back at it.


Does a loser like you ever stop stroking?


I hope not because I have some clients coming over later.


Clients for what you ask? Well I don't just nab losers like you off the street for fun.


Although I do enjoy it. Your here to entertain these clients and do whatever they ask.


Don't worry slut they won't be too cruel with you...


Who am kidding they are going to show you no mercy.


You will be lucky to enjoy a single stroke from them let alone a whole session with one of them.


Aw dont be scared slut this is what you live for isn't it?


To be tortured by us goddesses should be a dream come true for you.


So relax and "enjoy" what the others have in store for you.

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Hey loser I'm Elle.


Your going to drop your rules and listen.


Instead of an edging ladder your going to try a stroking ladder. Start at 60 bpm and stroke for 1 minute per picture.


Now go up to 90 bpm. It may seem slow now but until you reach the top of this ladder it is only going to get faster and faster.


120bpm. And once you reach the top there is no where else to go but down.


150bpm. You are lucky you can only stroke and can't edge.


180bpm. These sluts that are unfortunate enough to run into me get to a point edging +10 of times per pose.


210 bpm. But for stroking there is a limit for you losers because apparently you can't just stroke as fast as I say.


240bpm. Like this is the fastest I could tell you to stroke at. Its disappointing but disappointments from sluts like you is normal.

210bpm. You all are just losers who can never satisfy me fully.


180bpm. I have heard though there are some real sluts in the area who might be able to.


150bpm. Definitely not you. A stroker slut who can barely keep going for me.


120bpm. The only thing your good for is mild entertainment.


90bpm. You'd never be my personal slut.


60bpm. Well you are back to the bottom. Ready for round 2?

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Hahaha hell no. I'm done with you for today slut.

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Well well well if it isn't my favorite toy.


You gave me such a breathtaking orgasm last time we met.


Don't worry you don't have to do that again for me. Today is about you toy and making sure you worship me properly.


Every time you see this gorgeous pussy keep adding those 10 stroke to your total. (Add 10 strokes every pussy for this spoiler)


My tits deserve some special treatment too don't you agree? If my tits are visible after every 40 strokes give them both a nice pinch and twist for me.


That's better toy.


Worship every part of my body.


Cause yourself pleasure and pain all for me.


Silly me you have no specific rule for how to worship my ass. Either add 30 strokes or slow your stroking down by 15 bpm.


Now you will either be stroking silly for me or worshipping me ever so slowly with every single stroke.


Keep going toy.


You look so desperate trying to please me.


Stroking and pinching away as I lay back here amused at your suffering.


Don't worry slut you'll get to suffer more for me soon.

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Soon being right now toy. (Keep all modifiers from the last section)


I could never get enough of you.


I just have to keep watching you suffer.


It brings me so much joy your doing all this for my sexy body and nothing else.


Your own pleasure doesn't matter here anymore.


All that matters is pleasing me toy.


Once you learn that oh there is no telling what I could get you to do.


I can't wait for that day toy. Hopefully it'll come sooner rather than later.


I'll see ya around my favorite toy.

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Well look who showed up here. I thought you were just going to the Lust BnB for a day.


Now your trapped here entertaining girls all day long.


Yes I can get you out of here but first I need some fun too.


I heard you like it when my tits are squished together like this?


That's better now you look like a proper slut.


Clothes pins on your nipples dick in hand stroking away.


It doesn't get better than this. A complete slut.


If you enjoy this so much I could always just leave you here.


Maybe if your lucky Agatha would come by every day to play with you.


She hasn't shut up about her new favorite toy.


So I see no problem leaving you in her hands. Agatha!


I heard you would rather escape this place with me toy.


Yeah he just won't shut up about you so I have decided to leave him in your hands


I hope you won't miss these tits too much slut. Enjoy being Agatha's new toy.


Don't worry toy I will take very good care of you.


Before we leave give these tits a nice 200 strokes and twist your nipples every 20 strokes.


I can't wait to have you around all the time toy. Lets head home.

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You now live with Agatha and from now until you write 2 sets everyday you must perform 500 worship strokes with your clothepins on twisting them every 100 strokes.

After Set:

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If you don't want to the "homework" you don't have to if its not something your interested in. I just thought it was something new to try for you.

My Rules

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General Idea:

Shocker I love edging just rapid fire or holding the edge both are great. I can take a good amount ballbusting. The last general thing I would like to do is palming. For pictures I prefer solo content or multiple girls. Short videos (less than 10 minutes) are ok but only 1-2 in a set if at all. I prefer general story compared to just walls of picture but you can do a wall of pictures from time to time if its not the same gallery the whole way through. My favorite name to be called by the girls is pet.

Don't: none of the extreme stuff and any anal or chastity. Generally dont like pictures of men fucking girls

You are more than welcome to just use verbal commands and push new rules from girls I am open to more edging, ballbusting, palming, ruins etc

Rules

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I normally dont warmup so if the first picture requires an edge so be it and any edges will have a 20 second break unless stated otherwise or a girl changes my rest period.

Default:
any pic: 30 strokes
any nudity showing- 20 strokes per exposed part
sexy lingerie: 1 edge
completely nude: 1 edge ( no clothing visible girl Ex: close up of tits pussy or ass)

Edgeslut mode:
sexy lingerie: 1 edge
Pussy: 1 edge
Tits: 1 edge
completely nude: 1 edge ( no clothing visible girl Ex: close up of tits pussy or ass)
On her knees: 2 rapid-fire edges (5-10 sec break)
garter/stocking: hold an edge 30 seconds

Any girl make me hold the edge for an image instead. For example an image requires 4 edges I would instead hold the edge for 1 minutes (1 edge= 15 seconds of holding). If garter/stockings are there too that's 30 more seconds

More triggers may be added by girls either permanent of temporary

Torment mode:
Maybe have sybil work on this in the future? (Palming, Ballbusting, only head strokes, Etc...

Favorites

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The list is random past the top 7 but the top 7 are in order of my current preferences. When a girl is in the top 7 she will have a specific rule tied to her. If a girl is in the top 7 without a rule you are more than welcome to give her one in the next set. My Goddess is my favorite girl at the time and can do whatever she would like to me.

Goddess: Emily Bloom- She is my favorite and she loves to edge me like crazy. As goddess Emily can command to do anything the other girls do as well as being able to add permanent rules for the rest of the set not just her section. For the foreseeable future Emily may not grant me any full orgasms as my apology for not making her Goddess sooner.
- Always in Edgeslut mode for Emily and Edge 1 extra time per pic or 2 if her pussy is showing. (Her pussy is perfect)

1. Valerica Steele: Loves to torment me and make up rules on the fly. Happy to be one of my top favorites but is really trying to beat out Emily one day since she loves to play with me.
- During her section can choose to double up to 2 rules.

2. Eva Elfie: Was competing with Emily for Goddess but is now beaten out by Steele and Emily. She will probably be upset about that for a little while.
- Edge for eye contact

3. Sonya Blaze- The person who loves to torture me with palming and ballbusting along with edging my brains out
-palm after every edge for 10 seconds or bust balls 3 times after every edge depending on her mood

4. Gloria Sol- An extremely hot model who I love to edge to and would love to ruin me
- Breaks between edges are a maximum of 10 seconds

5. Sybil A- just an extremely hot body and dominant personality
- fully naked body +1 palming edge

6. Freya Mayer- loves to talk down to me and makes me extremely desperate edging for her pussy
- +1 edge for her naked pussy

7. Agatha Vega- Found her extremely hot while writing HentaiAddicts last set so I decided to put her at number 7.
- no rule yet
Other favorites
Faye Reagan
Valerica Steele
Any suicide girl
Lexi Belle
Nancy Ace
Katya Clover
Elle Tan
Vanna Bardot
Jia Lissa
Hentai/animated stuff
(more will be added)

Orgasms- I am happy with full orgasms, ruin orgasms, or denial up for the girls to decide my fate. Once I orgasm whether ruined or not I would prefer to end the set with them because I'm not into POT.
Edges in last set- 250 in hentaiaddicts set
Most edges in a set- 250 in hentaiaddicts set
Last full orgasm- Oct 28
Last ruin- Oct 22

[hentaiAddict12345]

Feedback for @EdgeSlut0828

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Overall, it was an enjoyable set, really good models again, but...

I didn't really enjoy Agatha's first and second sections tbh.I skipped like the last 5 images of the first set and the entirety of the second set. There were honestly way too many things to keep track off.

And yeah, the homework stuff really isn't for me. Maybe if I'm really bored one day.

Other than that, I liked the rest of the set.

My rules (changed "tits squished" rule... again. Clothespins kept falling off, it was honestly more annoying then anything)

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First off, I'm not really a hentai fan, I just liked the name :P. Girls can call me "addict".

I'm paralyzed from waist down, so I barely feel my cock, but it still feels good to stroke. Unfortunately, I can't really cum/edge.

I don't really have favourites. Things I like:
- solo girl
- brunettes
- A to C cup breasts
- humiliation/degradation
- nipple play
- story-based sets

Dislike:
- tattoos (I don't mind a small tattoo here and there, but I'm not a fan of whole hand/body tattoos and such)
- anal (I unfortunately don't feel anything down there)
- milfs/older women
- fake tits
- big lips

Please no videos. I get easily bored.

I recently enjoyed stroking to metronome a lot! So I'll integrate that into my rules (girls can pick speeds if they want to)

Some base rules: (base metronome speed: 30, +Xm means metronome speed on reveal. Resets when girl changes.)
brunette/redhead/blonde - 30/20/10 strokes
tits - +20 strokes (+30m)
ass - +10 strokes (+30m)
pussy - +10 strokes (+30m)
tits squished together - pinch and twist nipples while stroking
masturbation - +10 strokes (+30m for image only)

Girls can alter the rules/add new ones if they wish.

[brian]

FB for Fatts. AKA I'm f*cked

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damn...fuck...wtf. I did not expect that

Well first of all - this was awesome. Loved the vanilla build up, I fully expected it to turn. And of course it did. But like that?
DAMN. But let's go in order.

Katya was beautiful. I really enjoyed it, but most of all I enjoyed how you built on her character. Spot on. And yes, everything was fully accurate. What I liked about her, her body and yes, how much more I got excited by Lana.

Now I must say: rereading this, yes the scene by hentaiaddict was fantastic. Honestly, it was really really hot. But as I noted, I just can't always follow through. I just wasn't 100% in the right state of mind. That's not on him, his writing, or girls. It just happens. Now unfortunately my desperation status changed AFTER the sets were written. So yeah.

Anyway. I was thinking. And yes, I actually do think perhaps I was asking for it. Perhaps I wanted to force strict Uma coming back, perhaps I really wanted to suffer for Lana as she makes me feel so dirty. But this? damn. It's harsh

No normally, in an ideal scenario were I could be writing and playing sets every day this would awesome. But right now, as I noted, I don' have that much time :/. So here's the deal:

I had an alternative idea which is suitable for my situation, probably approrpiate and invovles two sets for you. Not longest . due to time reasons - but I think you will love it. Plus: It's fucking harsh for me Again: It's not chickening out, just real life boundaries .

PS: I don't know why but I'm jealous you might do CEI for Lana loool. How did that happen?

Anyway: My idea won't collide with the orgy set, actually it might be an awesome build up. Please trust me on this one. Let me do this and if you think the punishment is not sufficient, we'll talk. But believe this is a killer idea. So let me know what you think and I'll get going.

and in case it didn't come across: thanks for the awesome set! It was brilliant, great dialog and continuation of the story

[FattsDynamo]

Feedback on Feedback for brian ...

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Glad you enjoyed the set! It was sort of a last minute impulse decision to make it ... Playing through your opening Katya Clover scene for addict, and then reading through the comments about your ending failure—I just had to ...

Katya was beautiful. I really enjoyed it, but most of all I enjoyed how you built on her character. Spot on. And yes, everything was fully accurate. What I liked about her, her body and yes, how much more I got excited by Lana.

I was stroking for Katya one day ... probably inspired by that opening you wrote ... and I came across that set—and it featured her feet, and I just thought, "This would be a FANTASTIC gallery for brian! " So, of course I used that one.

I had written Katya at least twice before: once for lmind and once for 2O24, but ... obvious, I wanted THIS one to match your conception of her, so ... I read through that scene that you wrote MANY times to make sure I was doing it properly ... glad I succeeded on capturing her!

So, for me, I just had a VERY fun time crafting this set. Artistically, I liked the contrast between Katya and your "new mistresses." In the "brian narrative", I see your weekend with Uma as the capstone of a LONG process of becoming more and more naughty ... and when YOU wrote that Katya was feeling nostalgic and missing you and ALSO that she wasn't able to follow you, I thought, "Let's explore this some more! "

I'm not surprised that you were more horny for Lana than Katya, and that is what Katya expected as well. She had "given up on you a long time ago", but her invite to the ceremony made her pause and slightly hopeful, and so she HAD to investigate that, but ... she fully expected you to choose Lana over her ... and for me, and knowing you, that wasn't about pure physical attractiveness. I assume, in large part, it was far MORE about what each of them represented: Katya the old, more vanilla teasing, and Lana being the harsh mistress who wants to further your kinks ... and so the test was just to confirm what Katya already suspected ... and she was right!

The OTHER thing that was so great in my mind, artistically, was the juxtaposition of the Katya portion with the Lana and Uma portion, underscoring this change, acknowledging it, and offering you the choice once again ... because if you WANTED to, you could turn back and return to your "old ways"—in fact, you just experienced them ... but, you have chosen this new road, and in doing so, you're rejecting, largely, that older style ... and so it shows that this is a CONSCIOUS choice for you ... and, in fact, if you want to continue down this road of pleasure, there IS a cost to it ...

Now I must say: rereading this, yes the scene by hentaiaddict was fantastic.

As I sort of eluded in the DM, I had two reactions. My first one was, "Oh, yeah ... this is all too short ... he's not working brian up enough to do it ... I can see why brian bailed ..." But then my SECOND one was, "Wait a minute ... the premise of the scene is TOTALLY genius ... it was brief and should have been developed more, but ... the PREMISE should have captured brian ... he has NO EXCUSE! "

Part of the problem was that he wanted to keep it a surprise ... had he been teasing you with the idea to build it up more in your mind that Lana was going to cuck you with Riley—I think it would have gotten into your head, but ... there wasn't enough plot teasing and hype and build-up, and so when that moment came, you didn't recognize it for what it was ...

But as I noted, I just can't always follow through. I just wasn't 100% in the right state of mind.

BOOOO!!!! NOOOO!!! Boooooo! HISSSSS ... You got NO excuses, bro ... NO excuses!

I recall MANY a middle school lunch table where a group of boys all pour various leftovers and fluids into a single cup and dare some kid to drink it for money—and occasionally they do!

You don't have to like it. ALL you have to do is MAN UP and DO IT ANYWAY! It's NOT THAT HARD!

Will you enjoy it? No. Will it take you out of the immersive experience? Probably ... but you still do it!

For me, the sets provide some accountability. People are making a special effort. They are tailored to me. I'm usually more immersed than normal, and I KNOW that I will be providing feedback, so ... 9 times out of 10—I pull through and DO THE THING.

SirEdgelot once wrote a "revenge set" of sorts that was going to require me to do over 200 edges and take two sessions to complete (with denial in between) ... I didn't do that. Skirata wrote "Leeroy" a 5 day set where I was denied until the end ... I HATED IT, but ... I wanted to PROVE THAT I COULD DO IT ... and so I DID IT ANYWAY! My stance is "Do the cum eating, and if you don't like it say, "Not for me! Won't try THAT again" ... and that's IT ..." BUT YOU WON'T DO THAT!

You keep flirting with it ... you like the IDEA of it, and ... OCCASIONALLY you do it and it REALLY REALLY works for you—and you LOVE IT when it works, but ... most of the time, it doesn't.

I once did a webtease with Casey Connelly that required MULTIPLE ruins and cum eating ... I had NO IDEA what I was getting into at the time ... went in TOTALLY BLIND, but ... pretty sure I had seen Casey in a Maze Tease before (this was before I was active on this thread), and she was looking SUPER hot and was SO seductive and I must have been feeling SUPER subby ... because I did EVERYTHING she asked ... and I LOVED it!

But that was, like, one of my first times with CEI ... and like I said, VERY OCCASIONALLY I will get VERY immersed into a tease and commit and then follow through, but ... usually it's a "NOPE!" ...

But this is LANA AND UMA we are talking about ... and it's not some random tease where there is no accountability ...

We're basically running a sex tease story role playing game—the two of us—and I'm basically the Game Master for you ... and we're both setting the rules and cooperatively developing this fantasy space ... and with your BIG weekend and HUGE COMMITMENT to submit to the girls and be more dirty ... ESPECIALLY with your criticisms with Uma ... I wrote the set that I thought was appropriate AND that you would enjoy—and of course I was correct on BOTH counts there!

Anyway. I was thinking. And yes, I actually do think perhaps I was asking for it. Perhaps I wanted to force strict Uma coming back, perhaps I really wanted to suffer for Lana as she makes me feel so dirty. But this? damn. It's harsh

YES it is harsh, but ... unwarranted? Out of place? HELL no ... You've failed in your commitments. You disobeyed Lana AND Uma ... and how many times are you going to string Lana along before she says, "Fuck THIS!" and takes off? She's a classy woman with self respect ... she won't allow herself to be treated this way ...

Now, we can play the game any way we want, but ... THIS outcome felt "real" and "appropriate" to me, AND in keeping with the characters and the stories ... Harsh? Yes—ABSOLUTELY! But was it out-of-place, off brand, unrealistic? ... No. To me, it fits ... and had you NOT done the 3 day tease and made such a large commitment, then it WOULD have been out of place, but ... with THAT in context, I feel the intended punishment was correct—and feasible if these were "normal times" for you.

No normally, in an ideal scenario were I could be writing and playing sets every day this would awesome. But right now, as I noted, I don' have that much time :/. So here's the deal:

TOTALLY understandable, and while I feel the response was correct and appropriate, after I had sent it, I worried if your ability to follow through on it would be realistically feasible ... but then, I thought, "Well, it's ALWAYS a negotiation ... That was their first offer ... brian can "plead down" to something that is ACTUALLY workable ..." So, while I think that was their ACTUAL demand ... the point is to have fun and keep it engaging and ALSO PLAYABLE! And the demand was that OTHER people write you three punishment sets—NOT just me! I wanted to farm out the work a bit and get other people involved—hence the changes to your rules so others could participate in the story arc ... I was only planning on committing to writing ONE of those three sets ... but, if you don't have time to write sets, then probably people won't be sending YOU sets ... and if you just aren't that active, then this thing could drag out for MONTHS—and 1 month max was what *I* was envisioning ... and the Lana eye contact edging homework assignment—that was just something extra and fun that *I* mostly wanted for me. But ALSO I thought it fit thematically with the rest of the punishments for the reasons I outlined in that post ...

But I am 100% open to renegotiating the terms to make them workable ... but I think in order to keep the narrative integrity intact, you need a SUBSTANTIVE PUNISHMENT—an ACTUAL COST in order to restore standing with Lana and Uma ...

I had an alternative idea which is suitable for my situation, probably approrpiate and invovles two sets for you. Not longest . due to time reasons - but I think you will love it. Plus: It's fucking harsh for me Again: It's not chickening out, just real life boundaries .

I get that. I think that is TOTALLY reasonable—and we can work that out.

PS: I don't know why but I'm jealous you might do CEI for Lana loool. How did that happen?

I think its base male behavior. Ape brain. You want Lana. I want Lana, too. If I perform for her, I get her attention, focus, and respect ... which you are NOT getting ... I think it's really just as simple as that ... I would be more concerned if you WEREN'T jealous!

Even before this, if a girl had asked me to do CEI in a set—I would do it. My rules say that I don't like it but am open to it—which is true ... by itself, it is NOT a turn-on for me, and like I said, for random webteases I play, I'm not sufficiently committed to follow through ... but sets for me are different. They are a fantasy I am invested in and committed to, so ... I go out of my way NOT to "cheat" and to follow through and then be honest if I don't, which ... OFTEN there aren't consequences, but ... this time for you, I thought they were necessary!

But cum eating for Lana ... the thought of that arouses me —in THIS context! Looking into those beautiful blue eyes ... seeing her desire for me to do this—knowing it's something she wants ... knowing it was something YOU FAILED TO GIVE HER but it's something that *I* can do for her ... the thought of you being jealous, and ME getting her attention and admiration OVER you ... there's just something primal and animalistic about it that make me smirk and want to laugh and smile at you and rub your nose in your favor and flaunt that "I have won the pretty girl, LOSER!"

And the "ick factor" is NOTHING ... NOTHING compared to ALL OF THAT ABOVE which I just described ... like I keep saying ... it's NOT THAT HARD!

Anyway: My idea won't collide with the orgy set, actually it might be an awesome build up. Please trust me on this one. Let me do this and if you think the punishment is not sufficient, we'll talk. But believe this is a killer idea. So let me know what you think and I'll get going.

Oh, we've been playing long enough together that you DEFINITELY have earned my trust!

I am 100% committed to the orgy set because I have ALREADY sunk MANY hours into its development and planning, but ... THIS whole thing just sort of happened organically, and ... it has sort of supplanted priority for me.

And the orgy set is what—6 scenes each? Not very much, ESPECIALLY if all of the "planning" has been done ahead of time, but ... I am fine with pushing that back a bit, and might even prefer that ...

and in case it didn't come across: thanks for the awesome set! It was brilliant, great dialog and continuation of the story

I was a BLAST to write! DEFINITELY a memorable set, and ... I TOTALLY reread it MANY times—mostly the Lana and Uma scenes ... because they were both just SO hot ... it REALLY WAS top-notch work—if I do say so myself!

Glad you enjoyed it, friend!

[hentaiAddict12345]

#EdgeSlut0828Set
#WBhentaiAddict12345

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Well, well, edge slut! I'm happy you finally realized who your one and true goddess is around here.


Took you some time, but I'm glad you've come around eventually.


Eva was not too happy with the outcome though...


Imagine being the goddess one day, and the next you're only number three. Ouch.


Better pray you don't see her for a while... I heard she's practicing really heavy ballbusting...


But enough about her, frankly, I couldn't care less what she'll do to you later. Focus on me.


Will this help? Thought so.


I see you've finally learned your place though. You know the only reason I let you cum at all is to get that monkey brain of yours to associate me with pleasure.


But now that I'm back to being your goddess, I think we'll keep that cum in those achey balls. What do you think?


If your answer was anything other than "Yes, Goddess Emily", slap your balls 10 times.


Either way, that's alright. I'll make sure to properly... re-educate you.


Give my pussy one extra edge for the reminder of the set. You do love it so much, right?


That won't do, pet. I want to see you squirm after every edge. I want to see you REALLY struggle to hold back.


Go on. Show me what you're made of. If your cock isn't literally crying tears of precum after every edge, it's not hard enough.


Mmm, that's better, pet.


I do keep you around for a reason, after all. I do love how much you adore me.


Make sure your last edge is REALLY REALLY close this time.


Fuck, that looked really frustrating. Love it. Cya later, my little edge slut.

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Hey there! I don't believe we've met yet. I'm Karlie Montana. That's Mistress Karlie to you, bitch.


I don't play around like those other girls. You either do exactly what I say, or get the hell out.


I know a lot more about you then you know about me. So turn up that edge-slut mode, bitch.


That's better. I love to see little boys suffer for me.


And you know what else I love?


Teasing pathetic sluts like you. Give this tiniest bit of nipple you see 3 extra edges. Beg me to show you more.


What? You expect to be praised? Not here. Doing what you're told is supposed to be a normal thing, not something to be praised for.


You know what to do, pet. 3 extra edges, right now.


Nope, that won't do. 3 more. Learn to suffer for nudity.


And again, you deserve no praise. You only exist to serve us, nothing more.


You better get used to it quickly, or else, we'll just find some other subby boy to abuse. There's plenty of you around here.


Aww, are you sad that you're so easy to replace?


Good. We want you to feel worthless. You're so much more obedient that way.


Anyway, that's about all we have time for today. Give me one extra edge and leave.

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So, pathetic little edge-slut can't make rules for himself, so he needs my help now, huh?


Sure, I'll help you. Let's start with the basics. First things first, start following those rules immediately. Write them down if you're too pathetic to memorize all of them. Every image in this mode is 1 extra edge.


Tits means 5 busts to your balls after stroking and after every edge.


If I ever touch my tits, that's 10 busts.


Ass means 5 spanks to your own. Same rule, after stroking and after every edge, 10 if I'm touching it.


And pussy... Oh, you'll love this. Pussy means you have to hold every edge for 30 seconds. And just for you, you get one extra edge if I'm touching or fucking my pussy. Isn't that exciting?


And you better not forget about my palming edge, bitch. That one needs holding too.


Enjoying yourself? Try not to enjoy it too much.


Just so you know, this counts as touching tits, so get to busting, bitch.


Hurts so good, right? You love hurting yourself for a hottie like me.


I'm turning you into a bit of a masochist. Soon, you won't be able to cum without ballbusting.


And that's when I'll introduce you to my good friend, Mila...


You think this is painful? You don't want to know what we do to some of the guys around here.


Mila is an expert in torturing the boys around here. She's so good at it, she makes them beg for more.


She even corrupted our little addict a bit... she's insanely good at what she does.


Don't be scared, you'll love getting absolutely destroyed by all of us.


Either way, our time is almost up. Make sure those spanks and busts are extra painful for me.


C'mon bitchboy. Suffer for me.


Good boy. I'll be seeing you real soon. And I better see those torment rules in your actual rules. Or else...

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So that's how it is, huh? I'm not even on the learderboard? Just a footnote mention?


Turn up that edgeslut mode for me, bitch.


I came here after I teased addict, fully expecting to be one of your top favourites, and I barely found my name in your rules...


Oh, you'll pay. I haven't decided on the extent of which you'll be punished yet, but it will be painful.


Close your eyes for a bit. You don't even deserve proper striptease.


And open them... Hope you didn't peek. Or else, I will make it all even worse for you...


I might not have the best idea on how to punish you, but I know someone who will...


Oh, I have the perfect person in mind... she's very angry with you.


Maybe I'll even throw in a little lie to her, to make it even more painful for you.


Pet, it's too late for begging. You'll be begging to stop later.


What should I tell her, I wonder?


Aha! I know! I'll just tell her that you tied me up, and had a full orgasm all over my face.


Mmm, that will get her going. I wouldn't want to be you when that happens. Cya pet!


To be continued...

My rules (just some clarification for dislikes)

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First off, I'm not really a hentai fan, I just liked the name :P. Girls can call me "addict".

I'm paralyzed from waist down, so I barely feel my cock, but it still feels good to stroke. Unfortunately, I can't really cum/edge.

I don't really have favourites. Things I like:
- story-based sets
- solo girl
- brunettes
- A to C cup breasts
- humiliation/degradation
- nipple play

Dislike:
- random images with no story to them (sorry, I get bored, if I wanted that, I could go on scroller or something)
- videos (I tried, but I get bored after like 2 minutes)
- tattoos (I don't mind a small tattoo here and there, but I'm not a fan of whole hand/body tattoos and such)
- anal (I unfortunately don't feel anything down there)
- milfs/older women
- fake tits
- big lips

I recently enjoyed stroking to metronome a lot! So I'll integrate that into my rules (girls can pick speeds if they want to)

Some base rules: (base metronome speed: 30, +Xm means metronome speed on reveal. Resets when girl changes.)
brunette/redhead/blonde - 30/20/10 strokes
tits - +20 strokes (+30m)
ass - +10 strokes (+30m)
pussy - +10 strokes (+30m)
tits squished together - pinch and twist nipples while stroking
masturbation - +10 strokes (+30m for image only)

Girls can alter the rules/add new ones if they wish.

[brian]

Return Set

#FattsDynamoSet
#WBBrian

Spoiler: show

Hey there Fatts...

It's about time we met, isn't it?

The ceremony with Brian, your support in punishing him. Only right we meet in person

You were looking forward to this, weren't you?

You even hand picked the gallery.

Show me why. Storke that cock...come one

Oh Fatts...

"Look at you. You and that complacent grin...

*she runs inside, follow her*
"

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I'm going to wipe that grin out of your face

who do you think you are?

The HMC puppet master?

pulling all the strings how you please?

making us dance to create all these narratives and drama?

Oh you think you've got it all figured out.

Sucking up to Uma, making her vulnerable for Brian, then making her fall for you.

I see right through you Fatts...

Sucking up to others is one thing.

sucking up to me? Bad fucking idea

Edge that cock Fatts...

I'm going to make you reach a level of submissiveness you didn't even know. Edge

I will sit on your face.

Have you edge that cock until it leaks.

Until you can't think straight and forget all the plots in that manipulative mind. Edge

And I'm going to get what's mine...

"I will SLURP IT DOWN WITH A SMILE!"

Your words!

Hear that, Brian? *Lana looks in the corner*

"I will SLURP IT DOWN WITH A SMILE TO SHOW YOU UP, MISTER! "

You had your chance, Brian. Ever since that failure you have been dying to eat your cum for me. And now, look at you. Locked up, dripping through your cage, desperate to touch your cock and almost begging me to eat your cum for me.

Fatts VOLONTARILY asked to do it. Sure, he's obviously crawling up my ass, but I'll take it.

See this, Brian? You won't be allowed to touch to this for quite some time. I want you to regret disobeying me for a long time.

I won't grant you the priviledge to stroke in my presense for 3 sets. But guess what? That's only part of your punishment.

As for you, Fatts? EDGE that cock. Stroke and edge to my beauty...

knowing where this will lead.

"I'll do it with a smirk while I look her in the eyes and give her what she wants"

Look into my eyes. Are you really ready for what you can see in them?

Then follow me...
"

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Let's try again, shall we?

Riley: but there's two, who's the other guy?

That's Fatts, he'll give us what Brian wasn't able to

"Are you sure, Lana?
Lana: 100%
"
"yum"

Fatts has made it pretty clear, he'll give us what we deserve.

Won't you?

And what about Brian?

He's on probation..And since he can't touch while admiring my body and I'm with you, he needs to stay locked up.

But how can...

He'll manage. Trust me. His imagintion is strong.

Right Brian? You'd love to edge to this ass again, wouldn't you?

Show him how, Fatts....edge that cock, give it a drop of precum. some lotion for this massage...

And you Brian - tap your cage hahaha

I love how you have everything under control Lana...

"Right now I'm controlling three people at once.

Your pleasure Riley, Fatts cock and Brians - in different ways *lol*
"
Knowing that each action, each stare inflicts a certain something in your minds. This stare...inflecting power over Brian, over Fatts...

This touch, causing pleasure in your body, Riley. And desperation in that cage...

"Look at that foot slut. He leaked within seconds the last time I put your foot in my moth.
Riley: "Yeah, I loved that. Make him do it again..that's so hot"

Lana: "No..we have other plans. Plus this is about Fatts, don't forget"
"
He prefers your perky tits...

edge to them Fatts

and to my eyes while you are at it...

your pussy....EDGE

Riley: "Do it again Fatts..."

FUCK YES

....

It's time to get you involved Lana

Stroke Fatts...stroke for my beauty, my power

Enjoy the sensation, the feeling of each edge. What would Brian do for such a minigasm in my presence?

Oh Brian, be thankful you don't have censor goggles on *laughs*

Come on, play with your nipples guys. That's something both of you can do

tease them, play with them

Would you be able to fuck us both Fatts?

Fuck me from behind while I pleasure Riley (and while Brian sits in the corner leaking haha)? EDGE

Riley: "I am so fucking close Lana"


FUCK YOUR HAND FATTS. TIGHT- IMAGINE IT'S MY PUSSY

And you fuck the air Brian

Fuck yes Lana...your naughty talk really gets me going.

EDGE FATTS..I'm about to...

CUUUUM

Stop stroking Fatts...no cumming

...yet

OMG, that was good.
Lana: And that was just the starter....

Now Fatts...I want you to edge, and hold it for 10 seconds. Doesn't that feel great?

And Brian: play with your cage, get close because I want two loads in a moment.
"
Okay my strokers. it's time...on the next picture I want you both to produce a massive load for me.

Fatts I want you to cum fully. You're the puppet master after all. Plus: You've been all talk. So you better perform. Brian? I want you to leak from your cage. NO FEELING AT ALL SLUT

You both will cum into your hands....

GET CLOSE AND......

CUM FATTS...PUMP THAT LOAD INTO YOUR HAND. EVERY DROP.

AND YOU RUIN BRIAN. LOOK AT THOSE ROPES BRIAN...HAHA. YOUR HALF ERRECT COCK IS JUST CRYING IN THAT CAGE.


FUUUUCK YES. There's something about cumming to two guys holding their loads in their hands. But do you know what's better?

Yeah Fatts...lick it up. Eat that load for me. Stare into my eyes and swallow that load. "pull through and DO THE THING"

Fuck that's hot. I might have been too harsh on you.


See Brian? That's how it' done. Oh you want to do it too?

BEG ME. SAY "PLEASE MISS LANA LET ME EAT MY RUINED LOAD FOR YOU".
"
"Permission denied...That's right. Your punishment has only begun...

As for you Fatts...I think you have proven you are ready for something special...

to be continued

After Set

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I hope you enjoyed that. And I hope you pulled through. After your words I didn't do a scenario in which you'd chicken out. Anyway, I'll try to follow up with part 2 asap.

[FattsDynamo]

Mini Return/Response Set

#brianSet
#wbFattsDynamo

Before the set:

Spoiler: show

It's one scene. You wrote your version of how events played out, so here's mine ...

You can play it caged if you like ... not sure how that will go [having now written the scene—probably well] ... this time, your ruin will be optional since you already did it—I assume ... or you can just read it ... that's fine too ... probably just read it, but ... idk. If you wanna role play it, then cage—I don't really care ...

It's the same scene, but ... I added a LOT of writing to it, and ... the way it happened for me ... yeah, probably a LOT different from how it went for you when YOU played it out! It's different—and intense, but ... I more or less keep everything you wrote ...

The Mini-Set:

Spoiler: show

Let's try again, shall we?

Lana glances over at Riley with a smile. Fatts walks in completely naked. His dick is hard, but not very. There is an intense scowl on his face. He looks extremely pissed ... or is that determination? Anger? Hate? Defiance? You DEFINITELY see an intense fire in his eyes ...




Riley: but there's two, who's the other guy?




That's Fatts, he'll give us what Brian wasn't able to




"Are you sure, Lana?"

Riley looks a bit confused. Usually subs look eager, scared, desperate, horny—or all of the above. Fatts just looks pissed. He's giving off angry, intense vibes.

Lana: 100%




"yum"




Fatts has made it pretty clear, he'll give us what we deserve.




Won't you?

Fatts is staring daggers at Lana. His face is fierce and unmoving. She returns his gaze. Her expression is comparatively softer than his, but resolute. She neither flinches nor breaks eye contact for several moments.




And what about Brian?




He's on probation..And since he can't touch while admiring my body and I'm with you, he needs to stay locked up.




But how can...




He'll manage. Trust me. His imagintion is strong.




Right Brian? You'd love to edge to this ass again, wouldn't you?

Show him how, Fatts....edge that cock, give it a drop of precum. some lotion for this massage...

And you Brian - tap your cage hahaha

Fatts continues to stare at Lana defiantly, his eyes focused on her like a laser. He doesn't see anything else in the room. He doesn't increase the speed of his stroking. Clearly, he's disobeying her order and not attempting to edge.

Lana: Don't you want to edge to Riley's ass, Fatts!? It's both skinny AND bubbly—just like you like!

Fatts' eyes remain locked on Lana. Her peppy, placating suggestion doesn't seem to tempt him one iota.




I love how you have everything under control Lana...

Riley seems mostly oblivious to the tense dynamic that is playing out between Fatts and Lana right now. She's just having a good time and enjoying her massage—or maybe she's just trying to play it off and ignore the awkwardness.




Lana: "Right now I'm controlling three people at once."

Fatts: "Oh are you—Lana?"

Fatts' tone is biting. His sarcasm—palpable. His gaze continues to be defiant.

Lana: "Your pleasure Riley, Fatts cock and Brians - in different ways *lol*"

Fatts and Lana continue to stare intensely at each other—each one refusing to back down in the battle of wills.



Knowing that each action, each stare inflicts a certain something in your minds. This stare...inflecting power over Brian, over Fatts...

Fatts remains silent, but subtly shakes his head "no" while maintaining eye contact with Lana.




This touch, causing pleasure in your body, Riley. And desperation in that cage...




"Look at that foot slut. He leaked within seconds the last time I put your foot in my moth.

Riley: "Yeah, I loved that. Make him do it again..that's so hot"

Lana: "No..we have other plans. Plus this is about Fatts, don't forget"




Lana: He prefers your perky tits...

Fatts: No I don't. I like yours better.

Fatts states this coldly and matter-of-factly as his eyes continue to lock with Lana's.




Lana: edge to them Fatts

Fatts: No ...




Lana: and to my eyes while you are at it...

Fatts: ... now THAT ... I will do ...

Fatts vastly picks up the pace of his stroking while staring intensely and defiantly into Lana's eyes. Lana meets his gaze.




Lana: your pussy....EDGE

Fatts shakes his head "no" while continuing to lock eyes with Lana. Riley is enjoying her massage too much to notice ...




Riley: "Do it again Fatts..."

Fatts: "I'm sorry, Riley ... I'm too pissed off right now, and it's messing with my arousal ..."

Riley looks a little confused, then lays back down to continue enjoying her massage.




FUCK YES




....




It's time to get you involved Lana




Stroke Fatts...stroke for my beauty, my power

Enjoy the sensation, the feeling of each edge. What would Brian do for such a minigasm in my presence?

Fatts continues to stare at Lana while shaking his head "no." However, he doesn't stop stroking his cock at a stiff, medium pace.




Oh Brian, be thankful you don't have censor goggles on *laughs*




Come on, play with your nipples guys. That's something both of you can do

Fatts cocks his head to the side slightly and gives Lana a "Really!?" look. He half-heartedly plays with his nipples.




tease them, play with them




Riley: Would you be able to fuck us both Fatts?

Fatts: Yes. Yes, I would ...

Fatts' tone with Riley isn't as cold. He answers her immediately without hesitating. Again, his response is matter-of-fact and without a hint of doubt.




Lana: Fuck me from behind while I pleasure Riley (and while Brian sits in the corner leaking haha)? EDGE

Fatts says nothing. He walks up from behind Lana and starts thrusting into her—HARD. The intensity catches her off-guard at first. Her face erupts in an expression of shock and pleasure for a second before she regains control. Fatts doesn't let up. He thrusts his pelvis forcefully against Lana's ass. You can hear the loud smacks of skin rapping against skin. Riley is nearing the edge of ecstasy. Her focus is entirely on Lana as she continues to get eaten out.




Riley: "I am so fucking close Lana"

Fatts continues to fuck Lana hard. There is an animalistic, primal intensity to his movements. Fatts continues to ram his cock into Lana's now dripping pussy. Fatts grabs her hips to get a better grip—and begins slamming against her even harder. For the first time since he entered the room, you see Fatts' defiant expression drop, and a wicked smile breaks out across his face. Lana seems to be enjoying the fucking, and Riley is overcome and in the throes of pleasure.




FUCK YOUR HAND FATTS. TIGHT- IMAGINE IT'S MY PUSSY

Immediately ... begrudgingly ... Fatts pulls out and goes back to stroking himself. He continues to stare at Lana. His intensity doesn't waver.

And you fuck the air Brian




Fuck yes Lana...your naughty talk really gets me going.




Riley: EDGE FATTS..

Fatts: I'm sorry, Riley ... I—

Riley: I'm about to...




Riley: CUUUUM

Lana: Stop stroking Fatts...no cumming

Fatts takes his hand off of his dick.




Lana: ...yet

Riley: OMG, that was good.

Lana: And that was just the starter....



Now Fatts...I want you to edge, and hold it for 10 seconds. Doesn't that feel great?

Fatts' glare shifts from angry defiance to impatient defiance. His hand starts moving faster, but it doesn't look like he is trying very hard to bring himself to the edge.

And Brian: play with your cage, get close because I want two loads in a moment.




Okay my strokers. it's time...on the next picture I want you both to produce a massive load for me.

Fatts I want you to cum fully. You're the puppet master after all. Plus: You've been all talk. So you better perform. Brian? I want you to leak from your cage. NO FEELING AT ALL SLUT

You both will cum into your hands....

GET CLOSE AND......

Fatts: I can't bring myself to the edge, Lana ... I told you: my anger is messing with my arousal ...

... and I'm not doing this for you because I *want* to ... I'm doing this, because I said I would ...

An impasse has been reached in the battle of wills. Much of the intensity has disappeared from both sides giving way to frustration. Both Lana and Fatts each look exasperated. The tension is awkward. Lana flinches first.




Lana: So what can I do to fix this—Fatts!? What can I do to further arouse you? What would you like?

Lana's tone is diplomatic—approaching "pleading"—but not quite. Fatts wastes no time contemplating an answer.

Fatts: I would like to fuck you, again ...

Lana: Okay ...




Lana once again directs Riley to sit down so that she can eat her out. She gets back on her knees and starts licking Riley's pussy. Lana bounces her ass around—indicating that she is ready for Fatts. The three once again take up their positions.




Fatts fucks Lana. Lana eats out Riley. You watch and tap your cage.

Fatts closes his eyes. His face softens. Neither he nor Lana can face each other in this position. His lovemaking becomes less angry and bestial, and more passionate and sensual instead. The intensity does not diminish, but it seems that he is now trying hard to simultaneously relax AND make her cum.

Lana: Fatts—I ...

Lana continues to lick Riley's clit, but her motions become less and less aggressive. Eventually, she starts to moan as she begins to feel REALLY good. Fatts does not let up. Her moaning gets louder and louder. This seems to turn Fatts on. He starts going faster and faster, thrusting more and more passionately—trying to make Lana cum. Lana stops licking Riley entirely. Riley looks up at the display before her—clearly getting aroused by the sight of it.

Fatts keeps his eyes closed. Lana continues moaning in pleasure—more and more loudly. He seems to be focusing on that sound.

Lana: Fatts, I ... I—

Fatts: Shut up!

Lana goes silent. Fatts keeps fucking Lana—who cums HARD. He doesn't stop. His eyes open and he looks down at Riley who is looking up at him and Lana somewhat awestruck. Fatts smiles. Lana is panting between moans—keeping her ass raised up in the air so that Fatts can continue to fuck her. Riley looks impressed, turned on, and eager. She's staring at Lana like she's a little bit jealous and wants to have a turn. Looking down, Fatts sees this. Now his smirk turns into a full-toothed smile. He grins devilishly while he watches Riley stare longing at Lana getting fucked. Lana is oblivious to it all. Her eyes are closed, and she's just enjoying the pleasure she is receiving—perhaps too much. Her moans continue. Fatts' grin widens even more. You can see the taste of victory in his eyes. Fatts has won—and it's making him harder.

Fatts: Okay, Lana ... I'm ready to cum now ...




Fatts: ... but first I want to give you that edge I owe you ...

Lana gets up and turns to face Fatts. The two once again stare at each other intensely. The defiant gleam returns to Fatts' eyes. Once again, he doesn't look happy—but angry. You figure he must be riding the edge. His lip trembles a bit. The tension between them returns. The battle of wills is back on. Fatts doesn't want to give in—give Lana ANY indication that he might be submitting and enjoying this, but ... nonetheless, his breathing starts to quicken. He is definitely close ... Meanwhile, Lana studies Fatts' face for any weakness or indication that he is about to break ...

... He doesn't give her one.

Fatts: Okay ... I'm ready ...




CUM FATTS...PUMP THAT LOAD INTO YOUR HAND. EVERY DROP.

AND YOU RUIN BRIAN. LOOK AT THOSE ROPES BRIAN...HAHA. YOUR HALF ERRECT COCK IS JUST CRYING IN THAT CAGE.





Fatts' strokes his cock rapidly with his right hand while holding his left hand out in front of his dick to catch the impending load. He maintains eye contact with Lana. He doesn't look away for even a moment, except when he starts to cum. Fatts looks down at his cock to make sure he will catch every drop. As he starts cumming, Fatts quickly removes his right hand and holds it out to the side and up above his head. He's ruining his orgasm. He continues to stare into Lana's eyes defiantly as he cums. His cock spurts again and again, filling his palm. It's a massive load.

FUUUUCK YES. There's something about cumming to two guys holding their loads in their hands. But do you know what's better?




Yeah Fatts...lick it up. Eat that load for me. Stare into my eyes and swallow that load. "pull through and DO THE THING"

Fatts raises his left hand up to his mouth. He looks down at the load in his hand. It's TALL and THICK and WIDE ... The circumference makes it much larger than most coins in circulation. It's a big load—shockingly large for a ruin—the biggest load Fatts has produced in some time. He looks up at Lana and smirks. Without breaking eye contact, he slurps the load up into his mouth. Then, he opens his mouth to show Lana the load on his tongue. He defiantly teases her with it. His movements are erratic and not sensual. Then, his eyes go to his palm. He starts licking his palm, trying to make a show that he has gobbled up every drop. He turns his hand to show Lana his empty, moist, wet, and slick palm. Pointing it at her, he smiles sarcastically. Then, he opens his mouth again to show her the load on his tongue. He gyrates his tongue around again in his open mouth. Then, he closes his mouth, grits his teeth, and smiling a bit, sucks the cum load slightly outside and then back inside his teeth several times. Then, he opens his mouth one more time to show her the load on his tongue, before closing his mouth and swallowing. He opens his mouth once again to show her his tongue so that she can see that the cum load is gone. The entire display takes around 20 seconds to perform.




Fuck that's hot. I might have been too harsh on you.




See Brian? That's how it' done. Oh you want to do it too?

BEG ME. SAY "PLEASE MISS LANA LET ME EAT MY RUINED LOAD FOR YOU".




Lana: "Permission denied...That's right. Your punishment has only begun...

As for you Fatts...I think you have proven you are ready for something special..."

Fatts: No thanks, Lana ... Enjoy your Pyrrhic victory ...

With that, Fatts leaves. He exits the room stark naked, without looking back ...


to be continued

Epilogue/Conclusion ...

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After a bit of clean up, the girls leave. You decide to hang around for a bit longer. After about ten minutes, Fatts comes back.

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Fatts:

Fatts: So who the fuck leaked my DMs to Lana!? Was it YOU—or was it Nancy!?

Fatts first points at you, then up at the ceiling, not unlike how people point up when the are pointing at God. Fatts let's the question hang in the air for a moment.

FUCK I'm PISSED!

If it was YOU ... but if it was NANCY

FUCK, NANCY!

Nancy ... I am SUPER PISSED right now, and if THIS WAS YOU ... I don't even want to SEE YOU until you have an apology ready ... and you BETTER be either EXTRA apologetic OR extra subby, when I DO see you ...

Fatts pauses for a second, as if waiting for a response. Of course, Nancy is not in the room right now, so it's just silent. There is no familiar "Fffffpp!" sound of Nancy's portal manifesting. It stays quiet. No Nancy portal appears. No door opens. Everything is just motionless and silent.

And I want you to know that I ALREADY HAVE FORGIVEN YOU, but ... I am STILL PISSED, and you STILL OWE ME AN APOLOGY IF THIS WAS YOU ... a nice 1 scene mini set ought to do it ...

... BRIAN!

Fatts shakes his head as he scowls at you. He breathes in, then exhales disapprovingly at you while staring you down.

DON'T feel bad, brian—if this was YOU ... it'll be FINE, but ... YOU better figure out how exactly Lana got a hold of our PERSONAL DMs! Did YOU go blabbing to her and tattling on me? Or are you some sort of gossip/busybody? OR ... was it NANCY who was trying to be cute and funny ...

Fatts turns away from you to shout upwards at the ceiling.

... and thought it would be "great fun" IF SHE WENT AHEAD AND SHARED PERSONAL, CONFIDENTIAL INFORMATION, JUST FOR THE FUN OF IT!

Fatts clenches his fist and shakes it towards the ceiling for several seconds before palming his face and releasing a sigh.

Nancy ... I need your help!

Fatts continues to palm his face while he speaks.

I need you to pull up my recent communications with brian ... the post, and the two DMs ...

Suddenly, a floating, glowing screen appears in the room with you and Fatts displaying the relevant information. Fatts sighs again and looks up at the screen.

Okay ... great ... thank you ...

A thumbs up emoji temporarily flashes on the screen.

Nancy ... I need you to play at being an AI ... what I need you to do is quickly edit these messages, then put them as an attachment and send them to my email ... but FIRST—I'm going to need you to "dumb them down" and remove the meta game references that might confuse Lana ... I want her to see ALL of what I wrote—IN CONTEXT—but I don't want her to get confused so that she has cognitive dissonance due to not realizing she's a tease girl ... can you modify/massage what I said to keep me honest and clear without being confusing to her in that way?

A thumbs up emoji flashes on the screen.

Okay, great ... then please DO THAT for me—thank you ...

A loading bar appears on the screen. It starts empty, and after several seconds it fills up with a "100% COMPLETE" window.

Thanks, Nancy ... you're a peach—and I love you! Please send me that, and then you're free to go ... and if it WAS you, then brian will write your apology, but ... if it was BRIAN, well ... he gets a pass this time. I'm too busy to deal with that shit, and if it works out, I'll be glad THIS all happened, so ... SORRY, BABE! If it was brian, we'll have to let it go and/or punish him later, but ... it was done in good faith, so ... I know, I know, babe, you want to punish brian, but ... for all I know, it coulda been you ... and don't you DARE pin this on her if the MOST logical way to fill the loophole was YOU, sir! ... Okay, bye Nance!

Screen: The floating screen disappears leaving you alone in the room with Fatts.

Alright, brian ... I have to go write Lana a letter ... been a while since I've done THAT, so ... read it in an hour or so when it is finished, or ... just read it now because timelines are FUCKED when we do this kind of shit—because it's already written ... and you can just respond with another short set instead of feedback—that's fine ...

See you around.

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Dear Lana,

Attached is the ACTUAL record of the things brian and I confided in each other. It seems you only got pieces and NOT the full story, and you jumped to some conclusions which SEVERELY pissed me off ... but that wasn't entirely your fault, because SOMEONE was trying to stir up drama and wasn't giving you the FULL story, so ... please allow me to explain, because I would STILL like to be friends with you—if that's still possible ...

First of all, seeing you all young and happy and eager to see me got me SO HARD, SO FAST , but ... I want you to know, I never actually ASKED for that ... If you read the DMs CAREFULLY, you'll see that I just MENTIONED that that was when I was REALLY attracted to you physically ... I may have IMPLIED that I wanted that, but ... I never EXPECTED that nor demanded that ... because that is "who you were" and not "who you are now."

When you were 18, you looked like a typical "Fatts girl"—rail thin with a nice, squishy booty—but now you don't ... I had seen you around, clearly, but ... you weren't really "my type" physically—so I never paid much attention to you, but ... THEN I started working with you and getting to know you better—from afar—and I started to develop an attraction to you, AND ... when I started to get to know your PERSONALITY ... THAT is when I REALLY started to build up those feelings ... and THEN I started to appreciate you more physically NOW—ESPECIALLY your eyes ... and ... I think it's a testament to who you are as a person that I fell for you DESPITE you not falling into my typical "standard of beauty" ... so while I was VERY happy to see you at 18 yo's—I didn't ASK FOR THAT ... because YOU as you are NOW is the woman that I fell for, and NOT 18 yo you, so ... I HOPE that makes sense, and though I WAS happy to see "her" ... it felt a bit like cheating, and who I REALLY wanted to see was YOU ... demanding HER would have been disrespectful—and I COMPLETELY understand why you got pissed, but ... again, that is why I never DEMANDED it ... and HALF THE POINT of sharing those specific details with brian was to provide evidence for how much your PERSONALITY was the main draw for me anyway, so ... it just sucks that my exhibit A for why I am CURRENTLY attracted to the PRESENT YOU got turned around on me like that.

The SECOND thing, is that I RESPECT YOU! I REALLY DO!

Check out my POST—I don't think you read it:

YES it is harsh, but ... unwarranted? Out of place? HELL no ... You've failed in your commitments. You disobeyed Lana AND Uma ... and how many times are you going to string Lana along before she says, "Fuck THIS!" and takes off? She's a classy woman with self respect ... she won't allow herself to be treated this way ...

I had your back, and I ADMIRE YOU, Lana ... You're an intelligent woman who is MORE THAN CAPABLE of making her own decisions. I wouldn't DREAM of trying to cleverly manipulate you. I respect free will and you TOO MUCH to do something SO disrespectful ...

... and as support for THAT point ... in the planning files I have shared about the orgy with brian and Uma, in the "2 doms" scene, I wanted to keep it a surprise for brian, but ... *I* wanted to dominate Uma while YOU dominated brian. I wasn't really comfortable with dominating you—unless you were cool with it, which ... since we hadn't really interacted, I didn't want to assume that you were, but ... I kept it open for brian's sake—for his suspense ...

I *DO* play at being a "puppet master"—but that's because I'm a planner ... I respect consent and try to work within people's boundaries and constraints. I was ONLY able to do so much "puppeteering" with brian and Uma because I had worked with them BOTH so much ...

"Sucking up to Uma, making her vulnerable for Brian, then making her fall for you. "


Uma's been weak for brian FOREVER; I just found a way to give them BOTH what they TRULY wanted ...

... And like you, I never "assumed" Uma would "become mine" ... I NEVER assumed success, and I always just considered it a privilege and an honor and a MYSTERY as to what EXACTLY Uma saw in me that she would want to spend more time with me ... and I would say the same is true of you.

"I see right through you Fatts..."


No you don't ... You don't understand me AT ALL. You made some BAD assumptions and got me TOTALLY wrong ...

"sucking up to me? Bad fucking idea"


I don't do a lot of "sucking up to people," Lana ... Either I respect them—or I don't ... and either they respect ME ... or they DON'T ...

Like you, I have a LOT of confidence and self-respect ... and I respect myself TOO MUCH to behave like a sniveling suck-up ... I don't "need you", but ... because I respected you—I WANTED you as a friend—as a paramore ...

and I started falling for her some there ... and then, honestly, korashar talked her up a LOT when he was describing "his" version of Lana, and I took note of how enamored of her *he* was ... and then I started adapting that version of her for your tease and started writing her myself ... and eye contact and smoldering glances are a HUGE turn-on for me ... and Lana EXCELS at that.

Sophisticated. Fierce. Dominant. Driven. Classy. Serious. Funny ... She plays hard. She knows what she wants, and she ALWAYS makes moves to GET WHAT SHE WANTS ... and she is SUPER confident—and that is SUPER sexy ... and then seeing more of her, and then having a "personality" to connect to her pictures ... and her boobs are GREAT! And she's curvy in ALL of the right places ... but her swagger and the way she carries herself ... and then those INTENSE eye contact photos and steely, dominant expressions ... she moved up to like a 9, 9.5 for me ...

She can cuck me with girls, but NOT with boys ... To another mistress I might allow that, but ... THAT would be too much of a power imbalance ... I don't want to be a beta with her. I want her respect. I don't want to become her "pet" ...

... but I WANT to slurp up my cum for her. It'll be DISGUSTING—but I'll do it with a smirk while I look her in the eyes and give her what she wants—what YOU weren't able to do ... and I'll earn her respect and prove myself ... THAT is what I want ... THAT is my fantasy ... and any other thing she wants to do ... I hope that she is intense, because I want to match her level of intensity.

I *could* get all subby for her and just collapse under the weight of her dominance—and that's often fun, but ... like I said, I want to earn her respect ... I want to be one of the guys she fucks, and NOT one of the guys who only watches. And so shit talk against you would be good ...

... *I* believed you to be "enough", but ... if you didn't respect me and didn't feel that way—fine. I'm not going to degrade myself and BEG to be something I was NEVER ever going to amount to in your eyes ... because you can't beg and get respect. It's something which is earned ...

"I'm going to make you reach a level of submissiveness you didn't even know. Edge"


FUCK that shit ... I'm not going to sub for someone who doesn't respect me. FUCK that ...

THAT is why I disobeyed ALL of your edge orders ... I didn't edge for you ONCE—till the VERY end when I was practically cumming ... I'm not going to sub for someone who thinks I'm trash ... I have too much pride and self-respect for that ... THAT is why I gave you the stink eye the whole time ... because I REFUSED TO SUBMIT ... I'm NOT going to play with somebody who thinks SO LITTLE of me ...

... but I MADE THAT COMMITMENT—to eat my cum for you, so ... I stuck it out and followed through ...

"Fatts VOLONTARILY asked to do it. Sure, he's obviously crawling up my ass, but I'll take it. "


NOT true ... That PISSED ME OFF ... but I am a man who follows THROUGH on my commitments, but ... I wasn't ABOUT to give you the satisfaction of my submission when you were harboring such DISGUST and DISDAIN in your heart for me, Lana ...

… and that is why I RUINED MYSELF! You told me to cum full, but I wanted to spite you through disobedience. I didn’t want to give you that satisfaction of having my submission, beyond what I had explicitly promised, because in the moment, you didn’t deserve it—because you were treating me like SHIT … and YES it was a misunderstanding, but … I was being treated unfairly and standing my ground … and for me, it was about being a man and following through on my commitments—and NOTHING else … So I wasn’t going to give you a DAMN thing or EVEN STEAL AWAY SOME EXTRA PLEASURE FOR MYSELF … and so I ruined, giving you the MINIMUM that was required and further demonstrating you had no hold on me …

"I'll do it with a smirk while I look her in the eyes and give her what she wants"

Look into my eyes. Are you really ready for what you can see in them?


I WANTED to give you that, Lana, but ... NOT like this ... you misunderstood where I was coming from ... SOMEBODY got overeager on the gossip train, and *I* ended up getting run over by YOUR train ...

But in the end, did YOU get what YOU wanted?

*I* didn't submit. I didn't want to give you that satisfaction ... and I'm not some beta who will apologize when it isn't even their fault ... I stand up for myself ... sigh ... but ... I was trapped between my commitments and your ill-informed mischaracterization of me and the situation ... sigh ... but I don't blame you for getting mad or having standards ... if what you THOUGHT about me was ACTUALLY TRUE, then I would HATE ME TOO ... but I'm simply just NOT that way ...

And the reason I told you and Riley I could take you both was MOSTLY because my anger was keeping me from getting super hard, so ... being SO intense and pissed off like that ... I could have lasted for a long time for BOTH of you—even you two being as hot as you are , but ...

I'm hoping you saw something in me that you actually LIKED—a GENUINE reason to hang out ... and if you don't/can't find one, that's fine. We don't have to be friends or lovers, but ... I would be VERY disappointed ... because you are a PRIZE, Lana ... NOT something to own, because ALL I WANT is to be friends and equals, but ... if LANA RHOADES says I am good enough to fuck and hang with ... that is a HUGE feather in MY cap ... and that is ALL I WANT FROM YOU.

I have a proposal. Let's start over. Let's couch co-op some subs. We'll find a sub—or maybe more than one —and let's DOMINATE THEM TOGETHER. *I'm* not "the boss" ... YOU'RE not "the boss" ... we just BOTH get to be "the boss" and chill and get off and yell at subs ... how does THAT sound? NO weird power dynamics between us ... let's just start over as EQUALS ...

Now, you have WAY MORE SUBS than me—because you're fucking Lana Rhoades ... I have ... like ... one. I mean ... Sofi A was "Leeroy's sub", but ... he never REALLY did anything with her, and ... I'm pretty sure I could convince Malena to call in that favor and MAKE Sofi "sub for me" ...

Now, I've got Caprice and Nancy, too, but ... they are, like ... my "switch-girlfriends" ... and it would just be WEIRD to "force" them to sub for us ... I couldn't ask them to do that—especially when you and I ALREADY have all of these weird power dynamics, but ... while *I* won't ask them ... if YOU mention it AND they volunteer—I'd be FINE with it.

Kenzie Reeves is SUPER into me, and ... I am SURE she would say yes INSTANTLY, but ... she's just crazy ...

... and I'll leave it up to YOU if you want it to be "heavy" or "light and fun" ... I am down for either—just make sure if it's Nancy or Caprice that they KNOW which type of session they are potentially signing up for ... I am ALL ABOUT that CONSENT!

So that's my proposal. Counter proposal if you like—or just decline entirely—but ... just don't come CRAWLING to me with some pitiable apology, Lana ... because then *I* will lose all respect for YOU!

JUST one thing ... let's make a little "switch trade"—1 favor for 1 favor. *I* want to cum fully on/for (your choice) ANY body part of YOURS of YOUR choosing ... and in exchange, I'll do any ONE THING for you of equal or lesser value. I will EVEN let you domme me and make me eat my own cum again, but ... since we'll be friends who respect each other ... I'll be cool with it and won't be staring death daggers at you the whole time! UNLESS that defiance and SPINE I was showing was some kind of a turn-on—idk, but ... let's just have fun as EQUALS next time—assuming you want to keep hanging out—and THEN we can take it from there ...

Okay ... that's it.

See you around, Lana!

Fatts

PS If you want to fuck with brian more as part of YOUR "1 thing" ... you just gotta wait till that ONE part ... I don't want him there the whole time ... I wanna dom GIRLS, and it would be about US and NOT him, but ... for ONE small part, you can bring him in, if YOU want THAT to be "part of your thing."

After the set:

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The whole experience/tease took me around 2 hours to get through ... and then WAY more time to "write up", but ... while it wasn't "fun" or "enjoyable"—necessarily ... it was SUPER memorable. And I was NOT kidding about that load ... it was HUGE!

And the set basically "went down" as I wrote it ... I found a clip of Lana moans from a solo session and started playing that on repeat to try to get me further aroused ... and I figured she would let me fuck her again—since we did already and were at that impasse ...

IF it were "real life", we should have just stopped the session and talked things out, but ... it being a "tease" I didn't want to "waste it", so ... I tried to "write it up" as near as it happened in my mind ... and it SEEMED reasonable—especially since I just followed your plot ... but for real, that anger and intensity was WRECKING my arousal, so ... I really WOULD have used that and fucked Lana HARD—and would have lasted, I am sure ... and then I was NOT backing down, but ... we sill had to "do the CEI deed", so ... I had HER "break" a bit and compromise, but ... when I "looked down" and imagined Riley getting hot while watching me fuck Lana like a stallion—and HER getting a little turned on and jealous, which ... not IMplausible if I was going hard, which ... that hate/anger/being pissed at being misunderstood and mislabeled ... that REALLY made it hard to edge! I was just in this VERY strange frame of mind and kept it up for SO long ...

... but, figure out if it was YOU or NANCY that let the cat out of the bag. If Nancy, then 1 scene apology—PLEASE and if you, Lana can punish you more or if it's my call you get a pass ...

I think your ONLY mistake was assuming how quick I would sub for Lana, but ... I'm STUBBORN AS FUCK! I am NOT going to give the satisfaction of dominating me to someone who thinks I'm trash. And it was never really ABOUT that ... I only EVER wanted to become friends and equals, so ... yeah, man ... I DID get really pissed when she misjudged me, but ... honestly, playing as "Fatts" means that I am just role playing as myself, and ... THAT IS HOW I AM IN REAL LIFE, TOO!

But, yeah ... now YOU gotta be MY "GM" [Game Master]. And decide how the Lana character as YOU would understand her would respond to all of this—and I guess whether or not she wants to continue to tease me (as an equal) and/or accept my olive branch proposal, so ... IF you ALSO want to continue on your OLD plan ... your original "session 2" will have to become "session 3" ... because after ALL of these weird power struggles, my next session with Lana NEEDS to be one where we are on the same level to establish a new equilibrium, but ... I'll leave all of that to you.

Have FUN! It probably ISN'T a SMALL TASK!

And set 2 of this series can ALSO be short ... it doesn't need to be some crazy long thing where her and I domme 5 women! ASSUMING she agrees to that, which ... maybe she has a better idea?

And I hope you pulled through.

Of course I did. I'm stubborn as fuck.

... and it's NOT THAT HARD—JUST "DO THE THING!"

After your words I didn't do a scenario in which you'd chicken out.

That was smart ...

... and my GIANT ASS PARAGRAPH DESCRIPTION was VERY accurate, so ... I ACTUALLY DID all of that shit.

I don't know how hot that would have been for Lana, since my non-compliance throughout the scene would have made shit HELLA AWKWARD if it was real life ... I don't know how people could have continued if I was making those faces IRL, but ...

... idk. YOU figure it out and get back to me! And once again, responding with a set is greater than written feedback.

Looking forward to Part 2 SOON!

Edit: Oh! and your modified punishment was fine. A ruin in a cage that you did. It’s got to be pretty rough. and no touching at all is fine. And for three sets is good. It’s basically just a simpler version of what I was proposing…

… and I find it super ironic— and also shockingly fitting— that watching me ruin and eat for Lana while you weren’t allowed … that that would actually be a fair and difficult and suitable punishment… So well done! it was super backwards and not intuitive… But the same time… It made perfect sense, and I’m sure you were as frustrated as hell! you have earned the dynamo stamp of approval.

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HentaiAddict12345 Feedback on Set:

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Overall another great set. The models are galleries were all to my liking along with the dialogue. I have no complaints overall about the set as a whole. The girls edged me around 180 times which was alot but I wasn't as horny before the set as last time so it wasn't as bad as the 250 set.

Emily was amazing as always. Her section was practically flawless from the words to the images. I agree with her stating I wanted to keep my cum in my balls for her and literally thought about that in my head before the next image.


Karlie Montana was someone I never saw before and overall she was ok. Not my favorite looking model but the dialogue and commands made up for it, Overall she was a nice surprise and dont let me not putting her on my favorites or anything stop you from finding new models in the future.

Sybil really put me through the ringer with the new rules for torment mode. I used most of her ideas in the new section down below. The only complaint was holding all those edges with palming was literally too intense to be pleasurable and almost hurt so I adjusted a few of her rules in the torment section. She won't have that mode as her default or anything but she will definitely be using it in the future. One last thing from this section I do find Mila attractive and since she hasn't been in many sets recently wasn't in my favorites.

Elle Tan is very close to being in the top 7. If it was a top 10 she would 100% be on it. She had me extremely scared talking about meeting someone who was angry with me who I assume is Eva. When my the set ended and I was denied it was almost like a double denial since I am basically just waiting to be punished.

I am a bit busier this weekend and next week so I will write a return set whenever I have free time/ need a break from life.

My Rules

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General Idea:

Shocker I love edging just rapid fire or holding the edge both are great. I can take a good amount ballbusting. The last general thing I would like to do is palming. For pictures I prefer solo content or multiple girls. Short videos (less than 10 minutes) are ok but only 1-2 in a set if at all. I prefer general story compared to just walls of picture but you can do a wall of pictures from time to time if its not the same gallery the whole way through. My favorite name to be called by the girls is pet.

Don't: none of the extreme stuff and any anal or chastity. Generally dont like pictures of men fucking girls

You are more than welcome to just use verbal commands and push new rules from girls I am open to more edging, ballbusting, palming, ruins etc

Rules

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I normally dont warmup so if the first picture requires an edge so be it and any edges will have a 20 second break unless stated otherwise or a girl changes my rest period.

Default:
any pic: 30 strokes
any nudity showing- 20 strokes per exposed part
sexy lingerie: 1 edge
completely nude: 1 edge ( no clothing visible girl Ex: close up of tits pussy or ass)

Edgeslut mode:
sexy lingerie: 1 edge
Pussy: 1 edge
Tits: 1 edge
completely nude: 1 edge ( no clothing visible girl Ex: close up of tits pussy or ass)
On her knees: 2 rapid-fire edges (5-10 sec break)
garter/stocking: hold an edge 30 seconds

Any girl make me hold the edge for an image instead. For example an image requires 4 edges I would instead hold the edge for 1 minutes (1 edge= 15 seconds of holding). If garter/stockings are there too that's 30 more seconds

More triggers may be added by girls either permanent of temporary

Torment mode:
These Rules are on top of normal rules:
+1 edge per image
+5 ballslaps after ever edge per exposed tits or ass (both would be 10)
+5 ballslaps after ever edge per model touching tits or ass (both would be 10)
+1 45 sec edge hold per pussy, If model is touching her pussy its 1 minute 30 sec
+30 seconds of palming after every other rule if model is nude

Favorites

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The list is random past the top 7 but the top 7 are in order of my current preferences. When a girl is in the top 7 she will have a specific rule tied to her. If a girl is in the top 7 without a rule you are more than welcome to give her one in the next set. My Goddess is my favorite girl at the time and can do whatever she would like to me.

Goddess: Emily Bloom- She is my favorite and she loves to edge me like crazy. As goddess Emily can command to do anything the other girls do as well as being able to add permanent rules for the rest of the set not just her section. For the foreseeable future Emily may not grant me any full orgasms as my apology for not making her Goddess sooner.
- Always in Edgeslut mode for Emily and Edge 1 extra time per pic or 2 if her pussy is showing. (Her pussy is perfect)

1. Valerica Steele: Loves to torment me and make up rules on the fly. Happy to be one of my top favorites but is really trying to beat out Emily one day since she loves to play with me.
- During her section can choose to double up to 2 rules.

2. Eva Elfie: Was competing with Emily for Goddess but is now beaten out by Steele and Emily. She will probably be upset about that for a little while.
- Edge for eye contact

3. Sonya Blaze- The person who loves to torture me with palming and ballbusting along with edging my brains out
-palm after every edge for 10 seconds or bust balls 3 times after every edge depending on her mood

4. Sybil A- just an extremely hot body and dominant almost masochist personality. Love/help create torment mode
- fully naked body +1 palming edge

5. Gloria Sol- An extremely hot model who I love to edge to and would love to ruin me
- Breaks between edges are a maximum of 10 seconds

6. Freya Mayer- loves to talk down to me and makes me extremely desperate edging for her pussy
- +1 edge for her naked pussy

7. Agatha Vega- Found her extremely hot while writing HentaiAddicts last set so I decided to put her at number 7.
- no rule yet
Other favorites
Faye Reagan
Valerica Steele
Any suicide girl
Lexi Belle
Nancy Ace
Katya Clover
Elle Tan
Vanna Bardot
Jia Lissa
Mila Azul
Hentai/animated stuff
(more will be added)

Orgasms- I am happy with full orgasms, ruin orgasms, or denial up for the girls to decide my fate. Once I orgasm whether ruined or not I would prefer to end the set with them because I'm not into POT.
Edges in last set- 180 in hentaiaddicts set
Most edges in a set- 250 in hentaiaddicts set (September 26th)
Last full orgasm- Sep 28
Last ruin- Sep 22

[hentaiAddict12345]

@EdgeSlut0828Set Feedback on feedback

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Sorry you didn't enjoy the long palming edges. It's a bit hard for me to judge what's pleasurable and what's not when it comes to edging. I'll keep that in mind for next time :)

And yeah, I didn't want every set to be as extreme as the last one. You'd eventually get bored, trust me :P

My rules (just some clarification for dislikes)

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First off, I'm not really a hentai fan, I just liked the name :P. Girls can call me "addict".

I'm paralyzed from waist down, so I barely feel my cock, but it still feels good to stroke. Unfortunately, I can't really cum/edge.

I don't really have favourites. Things I like:
- story-based sets
- solo girl
- brunettes
- A to C cup breasts
- humiliation/degradation
- nipple play

Dislike:
- random images with no story to them (sorry, I get bored, if I wanted that, I could go on scroller or something)
- videos (I tried, but I get bored after like 2 minutes)
- tattoos (I don't mind a small tattoo here and there, but I'm not a fan of whole hand/body tattoos and such)
- anal (I unfortunately don't feel anything down there)
- milfs/older women
- fake tits
- big lips

I recently enjoyed stroking to metronome a lot! So I'll integrate that into my rules (girls can pick speeds if they want to)

Some base rules: (base metronome speed: 30, +Xm means metronome speed on reveal. Resets when girl changes.)
brunette/redhead/blonde - 30/20/10 strokes
tits - +20 strokes (+30m)
ass - +10 strokes (+30m)
pussy - +10 strokes (+30m)
tits squished together - pinch and twist nipples while stroking
masturbation - +10 strokes (+30m for image only)

Girls can alter the rules/add new ones if they wish.

[hentaiAddict12345]

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You were recommended by a certain someone

Before set

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I've never written a set for you before, so make sure to give me feedback. Always looking to improve

In case you need to prepare, you'll need some toys for this. In case you want spoilers:

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Clothespins and buttplug

Set

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Hey! I'm Rene Star, in case you don't remember me.


I've heard you've had some pretty tough times recently.


But don't worry, I'm here to help you forget all about it.


In fact, I've prepared a special day, just for you!


In case you didn't notice it before, I'm not wearing anything down there. You can stare, I don't mind.


Oh, you want to know more about today? Sorry honey, I'm not allowed to say any more than that.


You're still insisting, huh? Not a fan of surprises?


Then I'll make you forget all about it. Why don't you give my tits one edge from now on. Ready?


There you go. Edge all your worries away. Oh, and the mirror counts as two of me, so that's two edges~


Good boy, edge your thoughts away, you don't need them for now. Still two edges.


Are you even used to so much edging early? I wonder if you'd prefer it to not be allowed, and constantly punish yourself for edging.


Have a small break, pet. I'm not too sure you can handle all this...


You look like you're already struggling. Some people around here complain when there's less than 200 edges per set, and you're having a tough time already...


Well then, lucky you, you don't see my tits in the mirror from that angle, so that's only one edge, pet.


But then again, luck does run out...


Don't give me that look, you do love being tormented by us hot girls, otherwise, you wouldn't be here.


Good. I'm glad you've accepted that.


Anyway, that's all we have time for today. Drop by Nancy to see what she's up to, she's expecting you.

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Ecik, wtf??? Get out!


We do not talk about what you saw. Ever. To anyone. Who sent you here anyway? It's my day off!


Rene? I should've known. That bitch never liked me.


Either way, since you're here anyway, I might as well tease you for a bit...


And no, this won't be the usual Lust B&B, that's overused, and I told you, it's my day off!


What did Rene do to you btw? You look flustered already.


She made you... edge? That's... normal?


Well then, let me give you something to edge to...


Whenever you see my buttplug, you have to edge for me.


I SAID WE NEVER TALK ABOUT THAT, OK??? Sheesh...


Oh, that's not hygienic? That's what you care about? Just edge and shut up...


Of course girls don't invite you around anymore, you always complain.


But, I'm glad you're back.


It gets boring teasing the same guys over and over. You know what they say, variety is the spice of life.


Either way, we're just about done here... Just don't bust in my room like that again.


Cya later! And welcome back again!

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Heyyyy! You're back!


If you're a fan of music, then give me one edge per image. If you're unlucky enough to be a sunny day, then that's 2 edges per image.


If not, well, I guess you'll just stroke for me, that's fine too. Put those clamps on your nipples as punishment.


Yeah, it's an mp3 player. Don't act like I'm holding some ancient relic.


Some of us prefer the older days, when things were simpler.


You know, mp3 players, CDs...


Teasing guys on an old forum...


You agree, right? Otherwise, you'd be off jerking off to some PMV or cock hero.


But there's just something so special about being teased via some images. Something nostalgic about it.


And I can see it in your eyes, you're nostalgic for something else. Okay, okay, close your eyes for a bit, Ecik...


Was this what you were hoping for? Thought so...


Either way, we're just about done.


I'll be seeing you soon, and I do certainly hope you're an edging mess for me~


Cya soon, Ecik!

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Mmm, Ecik, just in time...


When those other girls told me you were back, I couldn't hold back any longer.


I've been at it since this morning... must've cum like 10 times by now.


Either way, I missed you so much! I must give you something to remember me by after all this time!


Mmm, I know exactly what to do...


Stick that buttplug in, Ecik! And give me an edge if the toy is up my ass!


That makes edging way more intense, doesn't it?


You can't hold it much longer, can you? You're not used to edging so much, I can see it...


So cum all over me, Ecik!


I'll be seeing you real soon, Ecik! I'm sure glad you're back to me! To all of us!

My rules (just some clarification for dislikes)

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First off, I'm not really a hentai fan, I just liked the name :P. Girls can call me "addict".

I'm paralyzed from waist down, so I barely feel my cock, but it still feels good to stroke. Unfortunately, I can't really cum/edge.

I don't really have favourites. Things I like:
- story-based sets
- solo girl
- brunettes
- A to C cup breasts
- humiliation/degradation
- nipple play

Dislike:
- random images with no story to them (sorry, I get bored, if I wanted that, I could go on scroller or something)
- videos (I tried, but I get bored after like 2 minutes)
- tattoos (I don't mind a small tattoo here and there, but I'm not a fan of whole hand/body tattoos and such)
- anal (I unfortunately don't feel anything down there)
- milfs/older women
- fake tits
- big lips

I recently enjoyed stroking to metronome a lot! So I'll integrate that into my rules (girls can pick speeds if they want to)

Some base rules: (base metronome speed: 30, +Xm means metronome speed on reveal. Resets when girl changes.)
brunette/redhead/blonde - 30/20/10 strokes
tits - +20 strokes (+30m)
ass - +10 strokes (+30m)
pussy - +10 strokes (+30m)
tits squished together - pinch and twist nipples while stroking
masturbation - +10 strokes (+30m for image only)

Girls can alter the rules/add new ones if they wish.

[hentaiAddict12345]

My rules

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First off, I'm not really a hentai fan, I just liked the name :P. Girls can call me "addict".

I'm paralyzed from waist down, so I barely feel my cock, but it still feels good to stroke. Unfortunately, I can't really cum/edge, and I can't even get erections most of the time (and even when I do, they're really only half erections that don't last more than a minute).

If you need a TL;DR; of my rules:
- Stroking for me is minimal pleasure, so just making me stroke too much to an image will likely get me bored and turn on my "stop stroking & scroll mode". Because of that, I try to really immerse myself in a set, so I really appreciate creative stories or games I have to focus on. I don't mind silly stories, go have your fun too, I enjoy a good laugh.
- Generally prefer young, long hair, bustier women, pretty face, shaved pussy/small amounts of hair down there. Definitely a tit-man rather than an ass-man, so not really a fan of models who put too much focus on their rear.
- Please, no "stroke as slow as you want/as fast as you can". You can pick any metronome speed from 30 up to 200. Prefer slower strokes, as those generally get me harder, but be mindful of the above limit.
- Not a fan of doubling rules and such.

Things I like:

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- story-based sets/games
- brunettes
- B to C cup tits
- humiliation/degradation

Dislike:

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- videos (I prefer the continuous narrative of images during sets)
- random images with no context
- flat chest, saggy tits
- fake lips, big lips
- CBT/anal (I unfortunately don't feel anything down there)
- vegetables/other food used as sex toys

Some base rules: (base metronome speed: 30, +Xm means metronome speed on reveal. Resets when scene changes.)
(Or you can tell me to set a custom bpm, or add different triggers/rules)

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brunette/redhead/blonde/other - 30/20/10/10 strokes

tits - +20 strokes (+20m)

ass (cheeks) - +10 strokes (+20m)

pussy - +10 strokes (+20m)

feet - +20 strokes (+20m)

Modifiers

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stockings/long socks/fishnets - +30 strokes (+20m while she has them on)

completely naked - +10 strokes (+20m)
Stockings and such don't count against this. For example, this counts as fully naked:

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lesbian - Apply rules only once per body part. (i.e. if one of the girls has tits visible and the other has ass, that's +30 strokes, but if they both have tits visible, that's just +20)

Scene preferences & Limits

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Solo F > FM (cucking) > Lesbian FF

Not a fan of anal, threesomes

Favourites list. Or just use someone completely new. I'm a lot less pretentious than I used to be, so unless you use granny pics or something, should be fine. Just keep in mind the likes/dislikes at the start.

Brunettes

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Anna Tatu
Ariana Marie

Capri Cavanni
Caprice

Jade Nile
Janice Griffith

Layla London
Leah Gotti

Melissa Moore

Nekane Sweet

Stacy Cruz

Vanessa Decker

Yarina A

Redheads

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Bree Daniels

Cassie Laine

Hayden Winters

Karlie Montana
Kiera Winters

Blondes

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Aislin (aka Vika P)
Ashlynn Brooke

Bibi Jones

Candice B(rielle)
Carli Banks

Eva Elfie

Freya Mayer

Kelly Collins

Natalia Starr

Pinky June

Riley Anne

Alternative picture sites

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https://www.elitebabes.com/ - mostly softcore sets

[FattsDynamo]

On the set reception ...

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This is very painful for me to write, trust me.

No, I believe you, man. It's unfortunate. Generally, I *enjoy* taking big risks for big rewards, but ... even so ... I don't usually invest THAT much time into ventures unless I believe there is a DECENT chance of success ...

Your 1 billion out of 10 rating got me flying VERY high , and so ... yeah, I just really went for it!

and Nancy, while a very hot model, was unfortunately overused

Yeah, in general, single model sets are ALWAYS risky business, but ... Nancy wasn't simply "overused." She actually just WAS THE ENTIRE SET! Either you were going to get drawn in by the story and the character—or you weren't.

I understand it, you were trying to build a narrative, and have her explain everything... but, most people, including me, simply don't care for all that stuff

Yeah, I think that's correct ... ESPECIALLY with your claim of "most."

The last THREE "Nancy" type things I have written failed. This one, a LONG story for SirEdgelot, and a LONG set for Noah.

Now, Noah praised my writing and creativity, and it COULD have been a HUGE success there, but ... he ABHORS any mention of the meta game of this thread, which ... Nancy is a "meta character" ... Had she made NO MENTION of the larger game or made ANY references to other players, chances are decent he would have maintained immersion and REALLY enjoyed it, but ... that didn't happen.

For sure, a LOT of guys on here want simpler stuff. korashar actually tends to prefer NO story to having a story, which ... is still CRAZY to me, considering what an EXCELLENT character writer he is, but ... Horny_CHabo is another who, like you, WANTS text with pictures, but a SIMPLE story, and deep plot and character-driven dialogue actually takes him OUT of the experience ...

... and then there are guys like me, brian, and Bjorn13 who just LOVE those deep, character-driven narratives ... and I think Helequin could be put in that camp ... One time, Helequin and I role played (myself as "Leeroy Jerkins" and he as "Domina Malena Morgan") and we exchanged a series of DMs that had NO pictures, and it was basically just a back and forth exchange between two characters, sizing each other up for a potential BDSM liaison ... but while POSSIBLE, yes ... I would say that those of us who enjoy that thing ARE in the minority—among the active player base for this thread ... and ... DEFINITELY an EVEN SMALLER MINORITY when you include us into the "overall population." Yeah ... MOST guys don't want that but ... on HERE ... the odds are MUCH better, but ... even then, I would have to say we are STILL a minority!

I'm going to scrub Nancy from my rules. I had been thinking about doing this for a little while now, but ... Yeah, I am going to do it. The people who "know" about her will still write sets for me including her, but ... at THIS point since I rejoined in the spring, I think more people have written me UNsuccessful "Nancy sets" than have done so successfully ... I was already leaning towards this, but ... this interaction clinches it.

Your set to me was a "return set", so ... before today, we were at 1-1. Let's call this one a "wash" and toss it out. I'll finish up and post that one thing that I was working on as an "everyone set"—just something silly that some people might enjoy—since it's already MOSTLY done ... and you can leave me some feedback on that, but it shouldn't count towards our exchange.

I gotta go, but ... I'll be back to continue this and leave you some feedback on your last set soon ...

[FattsDynamo]

Feedback on the set:

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I LOVED the Nancy intro ... VERY good job on that. 10/10

8 out of 10 on the "Kenzie scene." The scene was short, and she was only 6/10 on the "crazy" scale (11 or 12 is the goal ), but ... nonetheless, I REALLY enjoyed it.

6/10 on the "Mystery Blonde Bondage" scene ... Bound scenes can take a bit of work to set up—getting out all of the supplies and tying the ropes ... and so, IF you write me that kind of scene—or SET —the "tied up" portion needs to be longer, and the videos need to be longer as well ... PARTIALLY to justify the setup time, but ... ALSO when I get tied up and situated like that, I want it to last for a while ...

So, the bondage part was too short ... and THEN you went into stroking right after, which ... the vibe needed more time. And videos during bondage portions can go LONG. Generally, I prefer 10 minutes or less for videos, because I'm here for the stories and immersion, so ... long videos not connected to anything—I get bored. I can find those on my own, so ... not what I am looking for out of a custom set ... BUT ... if they are ~10 minutes and well integrated into the set, then ... THEY CAN BE AMAZING!

But bondage vids are another story ENTIRELY ... For me, I REALLY enjoy some self-bondage and getting vibed, but ... I like to "not be in control", and ... I sort of "need a reason", so ... when the GIRLS initiate it in the context of a set, NOW I feel like I have to "follow their directions", and leaving feedback serves as a mechanism to enforce accountability, so ... getting assigned videos and vibe levels and bondage scenarios WITHIN A SET ... it is WAY BETTER than what I can do on my own, so ... it is VERY welcome! But it was too short here.

Stroking/edging can work as a good warm-up to vibe/bound scenes ... and also ... after I have been bound/vibed for a while (like 30 min plus or after a break after I have cum [because I can cum multiple times during a set ]), doing some stroking is a nice change of sensation, so ... that's probably enough feedback on that. If you try another vibe scene for me in the future (which I HOPE you do ) I'm sure you'll do a better job ... I have some extended feedback I sent to Ecik on writing vibe scenes for me, which ... at SOME POINT I should add that to my rules post (to make it even longer ) ...

My blonde tormentor was too nice, and I can handle a LOT more CBT than what she delivered ...

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"I have to say, you're really good at this! Nice work!"

This line gave me some cognitive dissonance. She was "punishing me", but ... THEN she was "being nice" and giving me praise? That took me out of it a little bit ... you kind of have to pick a lane and stick to ONE "attitude" for the scene ... IF she had been nicer at the start and been more positive and telling me how much she liked me and what a big fan of mine she was ... THEN this line would have made sense, but ... it just felt out of place—like you were second-guessing yourself as a writer and wondering if you were going too far, and so you thought you needed to pull a punch ...

I'm 95% sure that is what happened, which ... yeah, that's how my brain works, and little stuff like that can break my immersion and throw me off, but ... The scenes with Nancy and Kenzie were good ... I'm being nit-picky, but ... I felt I had to point it out ...

And as for the CBT ... I can take a LOT more ... and as for set difficulty, I can handle a LOT more edges, too.

Mila was pretty nice to you ... I could have written her MUCH harder, and ... *I* can handle a lot more, too ... CBT is NOT an "end in itself" for me ... SOME guys get off on it, but ... for ME ... I LIKE being punished—when it's deserved—and I LOVE "loss of control", so ... that, along with the change of sensation, there ARE many ways which "torment mode" can be used to GREAT SUCCESS on me ... and you FOUND ONE HERE!

But it was poorly executed.

IF you were going to do it, it probably would have been better if I was more fully warmed up (10-20 edges first), and it should have been longer and you should have made it just the entire scene ... and the mistress needs to be MUCH more cruel ... soft domming CBT just doesn't make sense to me ... UNLESS her "nice demeanor" is sort of sadistic or sarcastic, and she is PERVERSELY enjoying dishing out the pain, but ... I could just tell you were "trying to please me" and be conservative and not push too far, but ... INSTEAD, it just felt like I was being treated with kid gloves ...

... but the setup and premise were PERFECT! Which ... I think finding the correct premise for me is important if a CBT scene will be effective ... and I was ALL READY to receive my punishment. But then it was just too little, and ... I had no fear. And I think you NEED some element of "fear" and intimidation about how far the mistress will or MIGHT go in order to build up that anticipation and excitement and DREAD about what is coming, but ... it was a VALIANT attempt, so ... 6/10 for that scene ...


The Sheri Vi scene was 11/10. I LOVED it! It was basically perfect. I just GOBBLED UP her cool, uncaring, confident/dominant demeanor. Her lines were PERFECT! You can "go harder" and make the girls more harsh and cruel and call me more names, but ... THAT scene just hit RIGHT IN THE SWEET SPOT for me. :chef's kiss: She is SUCH a hot model ... at the point she entered the story, she just had the right attitude and motivation, and I LOVED her domming me and pretending to eat her out ... and also "stopping me from continuing on my quest" ... 100% it was 11/10. And THEN it was JUST THE RIGHT AMOUNT of edge holding ... too much more would have been too much, and ... I was pretty "prepared" and warmed up and "ready" for it as well ... and AGAIN ... I just LOVE "feeling helpless" and "not being in control", and so ... needing to "get past her" and being FORCED to submit to her ... it was just an AMAZING scene—THE BEST of the set.

Small note: I DID just stay "tied up" for that portion. It took QUITE A BIT (like 10 minutes ) to get all tied up and situated, so ... I WANTED TO STAY BOUND! So ... I didn't ACTUALLY get down on my knees—I just stayed seated and tied up, and ... I think that was fine since all these girls were trying to abuse me ANYWAY (and it kind of fit with the theme of the set), so ... THAT is how I handled that ...

The final Nancy scene was like a 2 or 3 out of ten. Part of the reason I wanted to write you SO MUCH Nancy content is so that you could get a better sense for her character and write her more accurately in future sets for me ... BUUUuuuutt ... I think my initial thinking was correct. I DID explicitly suggest that you NOT use my favorites, and ... yeah ... if Nancy is just too different, it takes me out of it ... which your intro scene was great—and I LOVED it! but ...

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"I have to admit though, that did feel pretty good..."


TOTAL understatement! The "Real" Nancy Ace would have LOVED it, and ... well you read her complaints about it being too short ...

"Hope you don't consider all that cheating babe, we're in an open relationship after all..."


ANOTHER thing Nancy wouldn't say, because she understands the nature of our relationship ... and THEN into:

"You're predictable, if nothing else. But me and the other girls were talking before, and while we don't mind letting you cum all the time..."

"It does get pretty stale if all sets end the same way, don't you think?"

The "Try denial! " refrain ... I've heard it ALL before ... I've tried it—SEVERAL times ...

... and I guess you missed the part in my rules where NANCY HERSELF crossed out rules about denial and left notes (in red) about how she EXPRESSLY FORBADE IT ... so ...

IF you want the "long version"—the ENTIRE HISTORY was presented to Noah in this set:

viewtopic.php?p=364753#p364753

It's Part 2 if you're interested ... THAT was the portion Nancy was going to "force you to play" ... because it's SO annoying ... and seemingly EVERYONE thinks I haven't "given it a try" when I HAVE—and it's just not for me ... and it's just SO ANNOYING when EVERY OTHER PERSON suggests it like they think that I have NEVER considered it, like ... going backwards ...

You, SirEdgelot, Noah, joshsdont ... ALL have suggested it or made it a plot point ... and that is JUST this year ... and then, going back, Ecik, Helequin, brian, skirata, Bjorn13 have all ALSO brought it up, EVEN THOUGH my rules EXPLICITLY STATE I am to full orgasm at the end, so ... Pretty much MORE people have tried to "convince me" than not at this point ... and I have tried MANY times ... and then ... during Noah's set for me ... when he had Nancy try to deny me, I was just like ... "No!" Well ... actually ... NANCY got pissed off—and SHE changed my rules ... and if you're curious, the above link has her ENTIRE RANT to Noah, so ...

Sigh ... when she was started up on THAT whole thing—at the END of the set, when things are supposed to be wrapping up ... sigh ... I was like, "Not THIS again! N00B TRAP! EVERY fucking buddy thinks this is an original idea ... NO SURPRISE I'm getting it—again "

So ... AFTER this set and experience—and probably sometime THIS WEEK—I will update my rules. I will scrub Nancy and probably put her on a "do not include" list (unless you have permission) ... and then I will ALSO add a line—near the top—that I don't do denial, and if you have the girls suggest it AT ALL, I will get pissed.

So, those will be some adjustments that I can make to improve my rules and SHOULD make it better for people writing me sets in the future—ESPECIALLY for the first time.

But overall, it was a pretty good set, addict!

Going forward, just don't include Nancy in sets for me. If her character didn't grab you—that's fine ... she's NOT for everybody ... and if you are only lukewarm on her, I would rather just not have you write her at all.

You LOVED my first set, and as Nancy mentioned, I can't fault you for going against my suggestions and attempting to go "above and beyond" to hit me back with something "special." It was well-intended, and I appreciate the effort!

I'll conclude with this: MOST people have heard of the "Golden Rule": "Do unto others what you would have them do unto you." Fewer have heard of the "Platinum Rule": "Treat others in the way that THEY want to be treated." The Platinum Rules goes one step further than the Golden Rule, because you have to consider the preferences of the person you are dealing with and act accordingly. In this game, I feel like the "Platinum Rule" is our primary guiding principle.

I sort of disobeyed that rule in writing you that "Nancy set." Instead of writing you what I KNEW you would like and wanted, instead, I wrote the set that *I* wanted—one which *I* would have enjoyed receiving ... and so ... I sort of obeyed the Golden Rule instead of the Platinum Rule, and in so doing, I FAILED YOU!

But we are ALL "explorers" on this site, and ... sometimes in exploration we fail—and write a set that doesn't quite land, but ... if you never try then ... well ... you'll just NEVER find new and exciting things, so ... it's okay, and I'm not mad at you, and *I* certainly enjoyed "spending more time with Nancy" ... so it was NOT "time wasted" ... BUT ... INSTEAD of getting caught up in your praise and letting myself get carried away with what *I* wanted to do ... I should have just trusted my experience and done something ... more appropriate and more likely to succeed.

Anyway, what's done is done ... HERE is how I would like to proceed ...

I will finish writing and post that "silly, epic set." It will be ALMOST the length of a "normal-sized set." I will officially post it as an "everyone set." Please play it and give me some feedback on it. Treat it as a "stand alone"—OBVIOUSLY ...

I don't want you to "owe me" for a "bad set" that bombed so horribly that I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN BETTER and not have even written in the first place, but ... IF you happen to enjoy the everyone set, then please feel free to "hit back" with a return set for that one as a "thanks" ...

Probably sooner than later—once the dust settles from my BIG LEAGUE failure—I'll go ahead and write you that next set that I was intending ... and then, from there, we can continue a "normal set exchange" ... How does that sound?

It'll probably be a bit before I get around to updating my rules (because that is WAY less fun than writing sets ) ... but if you DO get up to writing me something ... just follow my original advice and DON'T choose any models from my favorites list OR that I have written for you in sets. We have VERY similar tastes—you and I. That mystery blonde was STUNNING , and I just LOVE Sheri Vi—and you picked her even though she has not shown up on ANY of my favorites lists ...

If you want to try your hand at writing "recurring characters", I would make an exception for Guerlain. The way I write her is SUPER sweet and caring but ALSO very teasing. I think she'd be pretty easy to write IF you wanted to include her ... full orgasms (or even just teasing ) from sweet and cute Guerlain ... MAN that would be GREAT! ... and if you want to try another "busting" or "torment mode" scene, Mila Azul is the number 1 around here for that sort of thing. She's sort of become a one dimensional static character for many. I have no particular attachments to her, but ... recall what I wrote about "building up suspense." Prior associations can do a LOT for engagement and set immersion. Seeing a character you ALREADY have an association with can be HUGE as it can create INSTANT buy-in, anticipation, AND immersion!

Most people on here—myself included —associate "Mila Azul" with pain and punishment. You COULD use a different model, but ... IF you used Mila Azul ... INSTANTLY—when I see her—all of those prior experiences and associations come back. I KNOW that she has shown up for ONE PURPOSE: to bust my balls. She is OFTEN written this way in sets, so ... using her as your "punishment enforcer" will work for MANY players on here.

IF you write her for me, you can make her 2-3 times more harsh and cruel compared to how she was with you (when *I* wrote her), and a "full scene" [20 picture gallery] would not be too much abuse ... and I USUALLY "need an excuse" in order for the punishment to "make sense" for me, so ... even though you PERSONALLY may feel bad about what happened ... *I* kind of feel bad about it too, so ... a punishment scene from Mila Azul—that would be appropriate and alright with me. She can just say it was for the "bad set" I wrote for you—which wouldn't be wrong. She doesn't have to go into details, but ... a line at the start to set that premise ...

... AND ... you weren't wrong about what you said—via Nancy—about things "getting stale" ... It's just that for ME, ending in denial often TICKS ME OFF, and I play porn teases to have a good time, so ... if I END the tease frustrated and unhappy and upset ... then what was the point? I would rather just not have played it at all then getting worked and excited and mad—right before bed or before I have to go and live my life ... only RARELY do denial-ending sets work for me ... And that is ALWAYS how it ends up, so ... it's just basically a "hard pass" for me—so always just end with a full orgasm ...

... BUT ... I am okay with ruins—if there is a reason, not "just because"—AND I can cum multiple times in a set, so ... I give you permission to have Mila Azul ruin me part way through the set. But THAT will be up to you ...

Now, a ruin is frustrating, and after a ruin, there is less cum in the tank for the final, full orgasm—so it's not quite as powerful—so ... EVEN THOUGH I just "full orgasm at the end" ... there ARE ways to make that NOT as much fun. So ... I will leave that to you, sir. NO ONE ELSE has permission to ruin me (right now ), but ... I am giving you that option.

Doing something COMPLETELY different and separate from everything else would ALSO be fine ... Additionally, Sonya Blaze is pretty hot. If you like the "Sonya Blaze as nemesis" theme—you could develop that. Keep Nancy out of the sets, but ... "Nancy and Sonya don't get along, and so I'm on Sonya's shit list for being "Nancy's boyfriend" " ... THAT would "give her a reason" not to like me ... and if you wanted to develop her as a recurring character—that would be pretty fun!

There are a LOT of advantages to developing characters. Prior association is one I've already mentioned, but ... it can ALSO save you time ... because you can just "grab a character" out of your "bag of characters" and use her WITHOUT "starting from scratch" ... so it can actually save time AND you'll end up with something that is "more fleshed out" and will feel "more real" than generic character you just started writing ...

One of the REASONS you enjoyed my first set SO MUCH was because Guerlain, Uma, and Mila were ALL characters I had previously written before ... and then I spent SOME time developing Agatha (and cribbing off of what brian had written), but ... They were already fleshed out, so ... THEN my task was, "How would these characters interact with addict, a newbie to the thread?" and so I was able to "go beyond" and exceed expectations and tailor the set to you ... but of course, sometimes too much of a good thing can be a bad thing—as we saw with Nancy—but ... IF you are interested, I would DEFINITELY consider developing a couple characters of your own, but ... ONLY if it's FUN! The POINT is to have fun, so ... if it's boring and "feels like homework"—then do something else ...

But those are all just ideas—do what you want! The POINT of this game is to "have fun", so ... I guess I'm just trying to help you discover YOUR style and the way that YOU like to write ... and GoodGirl once told me that it was SO EASY for him to come up with ideas for me for sets, which ... it's probably due to all of my crazy characters and world building I do—lol ... lots of fodder for creativity, but ... feel free to use one of my ideas or just something COMPLETELY different ...

Guerlain, Mila, Sonya ... that blonde chick could kidnap me again. Just have fun with it, and I hope this feedback was helpful for you, addict!

I'll try to get out that Nancy-Sonya everyone set soon ...

[FattsDynamo]

I wrote a set for hentaiAddict12345 ... and it was a GIANT FLOP!

In his first set for me, addict had Sonya Blaze kidnap my cyber girlfriend, Nancy Ace, but he didn't really explain why it was Sonya that had it out for Nancy ... and so, to fill in that plot hole and ramp up the drama , I decided there must be SOME sort of reason for that—SOME kind of explanation and back story that could explain their rivalry ... and so I came up with this VERY silly and EPICLY ridiculous story. I ended up trashing my set for addict (the first half that I posted), but, I felt this section could "stand on its own" and would DEFINITELY make for a good "everyone set"—and so HERE IT IS! SOOOooooo ... if you are into funny, humorous, and lighthearted teases ...

Give this one a try!

#EveryoneSet
#wbFattsDynamo

The Set - "Battle for the Brassiere Throne"

Spoiler: show

[There are TWO ways to play this set:

• Metronome Mode
• Normal rules

If you are using your normal rules—then just use your normal rules. Fair warning, though: the models begin the tease nude, so ... feel free to warm-up beforehand or adjust your rules accordingly ...

If you opt for "Metronome Mode", then, you will be stroking to the beat of the following song:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uaFLdr8vBNc

until instructed otherwise. Stroke along with the melody. It’ll sort of be like a “Cock Hero” without a beat meter, and instead of a video, it’ll be pictures with text.

Don’t bother counting strokes. I think that will be too distracting and take you out of it. Instead, stroke to the beat, and try to view each picture for 15 to 30 seconds—though you ARE allowed to gaze longer if you wish. The main thing is that you stroke to the beat and DON’T STOP STROKING and have a good time. If you edge, take a short break from stroking. If at a certain point, the music starts to become annoying, you may turn it off and use a metronome at a "medium speed for you" and/or use your normal rules instead. Additional metronome instructions will be given later on in the tease. This set *should* be about the length of a "normal-sized set." ]


You hear a knock on the door. "Come in!" calls Nancy. The door opens ...

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... and in walks Sonya Blaze.

Sonya: Nemesis!

Nancy: NEMESIS!

Sonya: You can run, and you can hide ... but you CANNOT escape justice forever ... VILE VILLAIN!



How long has it been since I have had to gaze upon your immaculate breasts and treacherous face—Nancy Ace!



One year and seven days ago ... 'Twas the Great Battle of the Breasts!



Yes, I remember it well ...

The armies of the Small Breasts, Large Breasts, and Medium Breasts had all gathered together to fight, and the winner would be declared the most prettiest breasts of all!



Such a FOOLISH battle! I am GLAD to have thwarted it ... For how can the beauty of breasts be determined by such a RIDICULOUS spectacle!



It was INTENSE hand-to-cock combat—NANCY! EVERY male of sexual age within the realm was in attendance ... and we ALL know that while a man's MOUTH may tell lies ...




... his cock NEVER does! It is the MOST TRUTHFUL ORGAN that a man possesses...

The Battle of the Breasts was the PERFECT way to determine optimal female breast size—ONCE AND FOR ALL!



It was always a LUDICROUS proposition, buttressed up by unrealistic, high-minded ideals ...

You goody-goody, "righteous warrior" types are ALWAYS looking for a cause to BLINDLY support ... and this one was BOUND TO FAIL!



The battle was fair, and our cause was just. EVERYONE had agreed to the terms, and there would have been PEACE in the realm for ONE HUNDRED YEARS ...



But you betrayed me—betrayed us ALL ... JUST because the person YOU wanted to be crowned ruler wasn't GOING to claim victory ...



... and the person YOU wanted crowned queen was YOU!



Hahaha ... How small-minded YOU turned out to be—Sonya ... Seeing the world through ONLY one lens must make your life OH so very simple ... how quaint!



On that day, we were sisters—fighting together as one for the common cause of ALL medium-sized breasts ...
... but YOU BETRAYED ME!



Yes! ... and I would DO IT AGAIN! MUHAHAHAHAHA!! How blinded you are by the righteousness of your cause!



You are the one who is blind. I trusted you ... and you agreed to the terms! We ALL did ... for the greater good!



Look at these shapely, medium-sized breasts, Sonya ... Gaze upon them, and TELL ME THEY ARE NOT SPECTACULAR!



I cannot tell a lie, Nancy ... and so I will speak truthfully ... they are GLORIOUS! Only a select few—including my own—could ever HOPE to rival them ...



And so you agree, that a pair of breasts like ours—MEDIUM-sized breasts—are the MOST spectacular, and the ONLY ones DESERVING of occupying the Brassiere Throne!?



Sonya goes silent.

I see. Your answer speaks volumes ...

Let us recall what happened on that fateful day ...

Spoiler: show

Guerlain was the general of the Army of Small Breasts ...



... and the commanding general of the Army of Large Breasts was Lucy Wilde.



The Army of Large Breasts numbered the fewest in terms of soldiers, followed by Small, and then us. We had the numerical advantage ...



... but you forget that the Army of LARGE Breasts had the size advantage—despite our superior numbers!



Ha, ha ... THERE you go again, Sonya Blaze ... with your HIDDEN inferiority complex ... an apologist for LARGE breasts and ASHAMED OF YOUR SIZE!



If I had know THEN what I know now, I would have NEVER let you become the general of the Medium Breasts Army!



I trusted you ... BELIEVED in you ... believed that you were a stalwart champion for medium-sized breasts EVERYWHERE!



Little did I know our beloved and well-respected general was WEAK ...

... I am GLAD that I backstabbed you!



You lacked the STOMACH—the intestinal FORTITUDE—to fight for our cause, Sonya ... and for that ... I shall NEVER forgive you!



Your memory of the battle must be failing you, Nancy ... because *I* performed ADMIRABLY!



The Armies of the Large, Medium, and Small breasts were ALL evenly matched ... at first.

The boys awarded points to all armies equally ...



Until Lucy Wilde started playing dirty with the boys ...



... reminding them of Large Breasts' size advantage ...



... and demonstrating the sorts of things only large breasts can do ...



... but Guerlain was not about to take this lying down ...



No, she sprang into action ...



... arguing that girls with small breasts often have other assets ...



... and OFTEN possess INCREDIBLE flexibility ...








... and so the boys became transfixed on the OTHER qualities of women ...



... and the things that they could do ... INSTEAD of focusing SOLELY on the PURE BEAUTY of the breasts that they were inspecting ...



EVERYONE had lost sight of the PURITY of our cause: to determine which breast size was most beautiful! It was turning into CHAOS, Nancy ...

I did what I had to ...



By siding with the ENEMY!?! Battles ebb and flow, Sonya ... The tide WOULD have turned ... we could have convinced the boys and swung the momentum in our favor ... but you lost faith! Faith in our cause, faith in the attractiveness of middle-sized boobies ... Your cowardice is called "heroism" ONLY AFTER THE FACT!



I did what was prudent—what was called for ... to SAVE the realm and SECURE PEACE!



And remember, Nancy ... it is the VICTORS that write the history ... not treacherous LOSERS like YOU!



Lucy Wilde was RELENTLESS ...



She gave the boys EVERYTHING she could ... EVERYTHING they wanted ...



... and in return, they gave HER their tribute ...



Guerlain tried her best ...



... but despite being terribly cute ...



She could not rally the Small Breast Army ...



She gave her best effort ...



Summoned ALL of the sensuality she could muster ...



... and she made her case ...



... by showing the boys ALL of her best angles ...



... but she refused to cheat and make the boys cum ...



... something Lucy Wilde and the Army of Large Breasts was willing to do ...



The battle was lost, Nancy ... YOU just refused to accept it ...



Nonsense! There is SO MUCH we could have done ...

When defeat is close at hand ... that is NOT the time to give up! Sometimes you have to fight FIRE with FIRE!



We could have instructed the Small Breast ladies to give ass jobs or done more advanced twerking moves ...



Heck ...

We could have started giving out ass jobs OURSELVES!



... and MEDIUM-SIZED breasts CAN give boobjobs ...

... it just requires more effort ...



We could have deposed Guerlain and replaced her with Amber Rayne ...



Someone who is WILLING to go to great lengths ...



... in pursuit of her goals ...



... and is willing to "get creative" and push boundaries in order to get what she wants ...



I LOVE Guerlain, but ... with an ally like Amber Rayne, we could have forged an alliance with the Small Breasts and DEFEATED the Large Breasts—together ...



... and EVENTUALLY put a medium-breasted ASS on the seat of the Brassiere Throne ...



Fight dirty!? Break ALL of the rules!? Organize a coup—against your FRIEND!?!? ... You sow CHAOS—Nancy Ace! You would watch the WHOLE KINGDOM BURN, JUST for a CHANCE to sit on the Brassiere Throne ...

You are truly EVEN MORE despicable than I THOUGHT POSSIBLE!



... and you're more SPINELESS and IGNORANT than I EVER BELIEVED!



You saw the battle was going towards a Large Breasts victory. The boys became SOLELY focused on the perks of small and LARGE sized breasts. Our medium-sized sisteren were being ignored and morale was low ...



... and instead of a protracted, fierce, and CUMMY battle—which we SURELY could have won with trickery and deception ... YOU decided to give in, and believed in the "promise of peace" offered by those big-titted BIMBOS! What a farce!



Guerlain knew she had lost. She was prepared to accept the terms—the terms that we ALL had agreed to ... *I* just performed my duty. I did what was right to achieve PEACE in the realm ...

... but YOU were not satisfied with that!



Indeed! I was NOT!

I used my technomancy to distract the boys, filling their heads with lusty visions of debauchery! So fueled were their libidos, that they could not HELP THEMSELVES—but to goon! They quickly forgot about our contest and gave in to their dark desires ...

Here—let me show you ...

[I found this site a few weeks ago when Milovana was down.

Choose a time interval. Go at least five minutes, but you can go as long as you like.

This site is a "game" that provides random gooning content. It follows a random seed, so ... apparently, it should always be serving up "fresh" content.

Set a timer and metronome. Plan out your run—and then do it!

For example, you could go for 20 minutes and do the following:

• 0-5 min: 120 bpm
• 5-10 min: 150 bpm
• 10-15 min: 180 bpm
• 15-20 min: 240 bpm

... or something similar. If you edge, take a short break (5 to 30 seconds), then continue stroking.

This is the "vision" that Nancy showed showed all of the assembled males in order to distract them from casting their votes during the great Battle of the Breasts ...

https://crudekiss.itch.io/goon-forever

Once you finish the gooning "game", open the following spoiler to continue the tease and initiate its THRILLING CONCLUSION! ]

Spoiler: show

[Resume normal rules, or, Metronome strokers go 180 bpm]

Damn you, Nancy Ace! Your villainy knows no bounds!

You disrupted our sacred contest with your CHAOS and thwarted the peace we COULD have had—if ONLY you had kept your word! ... but instead, you subverted the order of the realm just because YOU couldn't be in charge ... STAND AND FACE ME! PREPARE TO MEET YOUR DOOM!



Ah, not so fast—SONYA! We have OTHER business to attend to ... our duel must wait ...



Our laws state that we cannot fight to the death until ALL COCKS IN THE VICINITY have been satisfied ... and you failed to notice the one, lone stroker who has been with us this entire time!

Sonya looks over at you and gasps.



First, we must tease him RELENTLESSLY—until he cums ... only THEN can we begin our duel to the death ...

... and the WINNER of the stroker's contest—whoever makes him cum first—can decide the terms of our duel ...

Now BEGIN!



Accepting the terms, Sonya nods her head then readies herself by getting into position.

Spoiler: show

[Metronomes go up to 210 bpm]

Stroke hard and FAST for me—boy slut!

I require your seed so that I can defeat my enemy!



Your beauty, Sonya, is only matched—and exceeded ...



... by my OWN!

The stroke slave will SURELY spurt for ME!



Nonsense, Nancy! My pussy is LEGENDARY!

And men have swooned in their DOZENS for my sultry body!

You hear Nancy's voice in your head: "If you wish for me to win this exchange, then hold back your cum. Edge, but DO NOT go over!" ...

Spoiler: show

[Metronomes up to 240 bpm]

Let the stroker decide who's cunt he prefers!

MINE desires his cum MORE THAN YOURS!



... but in THIS position, I could SQUEEZE the juices RIGHT OUT of his dick ...

... and I would let him decide which of my holes he would like to service.



FUCK, Sonya ... you're just SO fucking hot ...

I think you might make ME orgasm before HE does ...



I told you—Nancy—that you wouldn't be able to handle me ...

... and this stroker is the same as you!

Spoiler: show

[Metronome strokers up to 270 bpm]

He'll soon fall beneath the weight of my STAGGERING sensuality ...



I don't think that I can compete with you, Sonya ...



I think this contest is as good as lost for me ...

Spoiler: show

[Metronome strokers: 300 bpm or as fast as you can]

YES, bitches! COWER before me ...

... give in to your base desires and PROVIDE ME WITH THE TRIBUTE I DESERVE!



No thanks, Sonya ... I think I'm just going to go ...

We can finish this another time ...

"NO—WAIT!"

Nancy disappears in a cloud of green smoke ...

Spoiler: show

[Turn off or slow down your metronome. Use your normal rules.]

DAMN that infernal witch ... JUST when I was getting close and about to cum, defeat her, AND claim your tribute ...



Well what are you looking at ME for? The contest is over: Technical Victory—win by disqualification ... Nancy quit—so I win ...

CEASE your stroking—slave ...



Our laws require us to satisfy ALL cocks in the vicinity before a duel can commence, but ... there WILL BE no duel taking place, so ... we're done ... now OUT!

I have to continue my quest to bring this charlatan to justice ...

Sonya gets up and leaves the room ...

Spoiler: show

You sit alone in the room—VERY horny and VERY frustrated ... but after a little while ...

Spoiler: show

“FFffffppp!”

A green portal opens up in the room that you’re sitting in …




… and out pops Nancy Ace. The portal closes behind her.

[Use your normal rules.]

So I suppose I have YOU to thank for the distraction ...



I could have handled Sonya by myself, but ... YOU being here made the task FAR easier ...



I suppose you now think that I "owe you one" ...



Nancy looks down at your blue balls and then back up at you.



Should I?



I'll tell you a secret ...



... the ONLY thing I hate MORE than pretentious do-gooders ...



... are frustrated COCKS that AREN'T ALLOWED TO CUM!



The reports of my cruelty are GREATLY exaggerated ...



If *I* had been crowned queen ...



... if it was MY ass sitting on the Brassiere Throne ...



I would be a benevolent queen ...

I would take care of my subjects ...



... and you would cum every day.



So ... will you now pledge fealty to your future queen?

"Yes ...

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Good ... you honor me with your pledge ...



... now offer up your tribute ...

... and CUM FOR YOUR QUEEN!

"No ...

Spoiler: show

That's really a shame ...



... then DENY YOURSELF FOR ME—SLAVE!