Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!

[FattsDynamo]

This is a set for Ecik. A partial response to your last mini set where Nancy and I talked about 100 things!

I know you are doing the 1000 Edge Challenge by the way, so ... Probably good to play this set BEFORE YOU FAIL IT!

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#wbFattsDynamo

The Set:

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Hi, Ecik.




It's been a while.




A little blonde angel came looking for me. She said that she was in need of a little redhead sex demon to come and torment her friend.




She said her "friend" was currently taking part in a 1000 Edge Challenge and was NOT allowed to cum for a while ...




... too bad ...




... for him.

See ... boys who are NOT allowed to cum are my FAVORITE kind of prey ...




... I can make them edge again and again ... and since they can't cum ...




... they have no possibility of release ... so they just get hornier and hornier ...




... which means it makes them easier and easier to bring to the edge ...

... which means that *I* get to feed more and more ...




See how that works? Interesting little predicament ...




... of course after cumming, the cock gets tired and tuckered out, but ...




... if you NEVER cum, well ... then he simply has no excuse ...

... NOT to edge ...




... but Nancy was talking about someone else—right?

No? She wasn't!? YOU are the friend!?




And here *I* am—a succubus demon—who feeds off of the sexual desires and fantasies and PLEASURES of depraved, horny men ... and what lies before me?




Why, it's a depraved, horny man! MY FAVORITE kind of meal ...

... and what's more, you are POWERLESS to stop me ...




EDGE!!


Now FEED ME!

The Red Fox takes control of your dick, making you stroke at 240 BPM, doubling your number of strokes per pic.

She fills your mind with erotic visions ...

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The images stop, and the Red Fox makes you stop stroking your cock ...

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[Rest]

Oh? What's this ...




While I was teasing you, your mental defenses were down—and so I was able to peer into your desires ...


The Red Fox waves her hand, and you receive another vision ...

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[Turn your metronome down to 90 BPM. Normal number of strokes per pic.]

Dakota Tyler ...




You think she's cute and innocent—is that right?




Well, she looks "cute and innocent enough" ...








Pure ...




Innocent ...




What kind of thoughts inhabit her mind?




She seems FUN—




—and a LITTLE flirty ...











Oh ... just LOOK into those eyes ...





There isn't an OUNCE of depravity inside of that skull of hers ...





120 BPM. Let the little cheerleader innocently cheer on your dick ...













Oh, but Ecik ...




I have some bad news for you ...




Your "pure" little cheerleader?




She's NOT what she seems ...




Actually, she's quite a naughty girl ...




Here, let me show you ...

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Stop stroking.

Your little Dakota is "being bad", and I don't want you stroking for her while she's being bad, so ... instead ... slap each of your balls 10 times for each image you see!




Blow jobs ...




Your FAVORITE!




You shouldn't WANT THIS for someone who is so sweet and innocent ...




Should you be watching?




No! Of COURSE NOT you shouldn't be watching!




... but you're watching ANYway ...




... and Dakota is GLAD that you are!




... but I'M not happy—no ... no I am not ...




... which is why you must PUNISH YOURSELF FOR WATCHING!




Oh, NO, Dakota!




A THREESOME!?!




DON'T DO IT!




Try and make her STOP, ECIK!




SLAP YOUR BALLS HARDER!





Oh, no! She's doing it AGAIN!




ONCE was a fluke—but now TWICE!




She can't get enough of BIG BLACK COCK!










She's a COCK HUNGRY GIRL!


















The vision fades ...

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Stop slapping.

Now, Ecik ... do you honestly think that I disapprove of your corrupting influence and desire for Dakota to give in to HER hidden desires?




No, of COURSE not! I'm a SEX DEMON! I celebrate debauchery in ALL of its MYRIAD forms!




So, now ... instead of trying to PUNISH yourself while watching Dakota act lewdly ...




... I want you to enjoy yourself while you do it.

Ballbusting mode ON. Use your "normal rules", but ... don't forget the slaps ...

... and oh ...




180 BPM. Rewatch the ENTIRE previous scene of Dakota "being lewd" while you FAST STROKE AND SLAP YOUR BALLS! Don't forget to make the hits EXTRA HARD if you happen to edge!


Finished rewatching the scene ...

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Stop stroking and slapping, Ecik ...




There is something ELSE I failed to mention to you about Dakota ...


The Red Fox afflicts you with yet another vision ...

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[Normal rules. 120 BPM. Ballbusting mode OFF.]

Dakota LOVES blowjobs ...




She's quite diligent in their execution ...






She vigorously strokes the shaft ...




... she doesn't forget the head ...





She makes good use of "proper eye contact" ...




She possesses the instincts of when to gobble down a cock ...




But there is ONE thing she wants more than ANYTHING else ...




... do you know what it is?

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It's CUM.

Free stroke as you wish.

ESCALATING EDGES FOR CUMSHOTS!!

Now EDGE!




2 Edges.




3 Edges.




Four.




FIVE edges.




Six. SIX edges!


You finish the edge ladder, and the vision ends ...

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Stop stroking. [Rest]

It’s funny … I haven’t seen Nancy in years—not since that incident at the Village.




You know, I’ll always be grateful to Fatts for “saving” me from Angela—even though I would only have been trapped for days and not centuries—like that poor boy thought … still, though … he rescued my pride from taking a hit …




Anyway … I know Nancy forbid me from returning, but … a few weeks ago, I went to the periphery of the Village—just to see how it was faring … and do you know what I saw?




A ghost town … funny how some things seems SO important at the time, but then, years later, they are forgotten—left to the ravages of time …




… but even by your “human standards”, going from “boom” to “bust” in less than two years—it’s QUITE IMPRESSIVE!

You move at such a more rapid pace than us longer-lived beings …




… sometimes it’s hard to keep up—well …

… at least YOU can manage to keep up with the edges




... speaking of which ...

Edge once ...




Edge twice!




THREE times!




FOUR!!!




Edge FIVE times—and then we are DONE, except ... SLAP YOUR BALLS 20 TIMES AFTER EACH EDGE!!!









Stop stroking.

How close are you getting to your goal of 1000? Much closer NOW—I assume.

After the set ...

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[No stroking. The teasing part of the set is over.]

Well, I’ve had my fun ...




You make for a "tasty treat", Ecik!

... but I was sent here by a little blonde angel to give you a mission ... THAT was the reason for my visit ...

Of course ... "draining you of your life essence"—I don't need an "excuse" for THAT ... "Succubus" is excuse enough!




Nancy needed a "redheaded emissary", and she could think of NO ONE better than me ...

... of course, your current "challenge"—making you ESPECIALLY EASY PREY—I'm sure brought me to the forefront of her mind as well ...




Anyway, your "Task" or "Quest" or however you want to phrase it, is to find 10 "edgeworthy" photos of 10 brown-haired ladies that are ... now what WAS it ... oh ... yes! 10 brunettes that are "hotter than Caprice!"

As a redhead, I have NO dog in this fight, but ... I *like* watching the humans squabble ...

Now, Nancy said that you were currently "preparing some photos" in order to play some "game" with a "SirEdgelot." Now, before you find photos for HIS game, you should—

A bright screen suddenly appears in the room right next to the Red Fox. It's attached to nothing. It just floats in the air.

CURSE Nancy and her "technomancy"! It's actually quite RUDE to interrupt people's conversations with conjuration spells when they are trying—




The screen displays the post and URL for a recent set that SirEdgelot sent to Fatts. The screen begins printing a ticket with the web address. It makes the loud, annoying screeching sound of a dot matrix printer. The Red Fox impatiently waits for the screen to finish the print out. She tears off the paper and hands it to you.

viewtopic.php?p=364780#p364780





That is the key to the sage's tome. Inspect THAT document to better discover SirEdgelot's preferences when it comes to selecting photos for his game. I have heard that he can be QUITE particular ... Best to familiarize yourself with his preferences before assembling the images ...




And Nancy ALSO said that this concept of "edge worthy" would be DIFFERENT for you than for him, but ... after reading that tease you would better understand ... So, in summary ...

• Find 10 brunette women that are “hotter than Caprice.”

• Select 10 “edgeworthy” images of each of them.

• Edge once for every photo you find. 100 edges in total.

Nancy didn't request that last one, but ... I'm sure she wouldn't mind me making your quest more difficult.




Alright. I must go now.

Good luck, Ecik!


The Red Fox disappears in a cloud of pink smoke. After the smoke clears, you notice a tablet sitting on the coach. A loading bar is filling on the screen. It reaches 100%, and a message appears:

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Ecik,

You will be posting these 100 photos as an Everyone Set and putting it to the thread to rank the brunettes in order to test whether or not your assertion that "hotter brunettes than Caprice" exist. I agree that Caprice *is* "popular because she is popular", but ... that does NOT mean that she "isn't" hot. *I* would say that Caprice's popularity is WELL DESERVED—I mean you've recently just seen me eat her out. *I*—for one—think she is PRETTY FUCKING HOT! But I believe that your hypothesis is valid ... WHICH IS WHY WE MUST TEST IT!!

Your 100 photo everyone set should ALSO contain 10 photos of Caprice, so ... I guess that you will just "have to" edge ten times for little miss "overrated" —but ... We ALSO need to provide a "control" for this experiment.

People can play the set how they wish, but ... the GOAL will be to have AS MANY PEOPLE AS ARE WILLING to rank the ladies—or if they feel a numerical list is too demeaning, then AT LEAST say which girls they think are "hotter than Caprice."

*I* would prefer that EVERYONE provides a ranked list—because quantitative data is USUALLY **much more** valuable that "qualitative data" ... and ... ALSO ...

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Having all you boys rank the girls has the potential to stir up ALL KINDS OF DRAMA!

OH, Ecik ... it's a DREAM COME TRUE FOR ME!!! Data AND drama—ALL PACKAGED IN ONE!

So, OBVIOUSLY, the 10 "edgeworthy" photos should be ones that YOU like and are willing to edge to (low bar THERE—am-I-right!? ) but ... ALSO ... you should give it an HONEST ATTEMPT to provide pictures that generally best represent the girls and will be appealing to the WIDEST POSSIBLE audience. We want things to be FAIR!

Now, if you don't have the stones to pose this question and post this set with its UNCOMFORTABLE premise ...

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I know a guy who is SHAMELESS and would be willing to post it and ask everyone's opinion for you.

Of course, with your recent admission that you MIGHT be a "secret painslut" ... perhaps you WANT to piss EVERYONE OFF by objectifying ALL of the girls and starting drama with a bunch of "ranked lists!"

BUT ... MY prediction is that Caprice will be ranked WAY HIGHER than YOU think ... *I* would say that she makes top 5 EASILY and QUITE POSSIBLY top 3. But, THAT is just my guess. I'm prepared to be wrong.

But this is why we DO SCIENCE—isn't it, Ecik? We find answers to questions we don't know the answer to, and ... I *think* I know the answer, but ... I don't REALLY.

If people want anonymity, then, I SUPPOSE they can PM you, but ... we probably need at LEAST 5-10 people to make the results valid—the more the better!

I would say that we use "cross country race" style scoring. Once you have ALL of the rankings, you add up ALL of the girl's numbers. Whoever has the LOWEST score gets first place. Second lowest second and so on, but ... AGAIN ... THE MORE DATA THE BETTER!

And maybe this should go OUTSIDE OF the thread. Hmmmm ... I guess maybe START in the thread, and ... if you don't get enough participants, then make it it's OWN post and ask randos, but ... I DO THINK that YOUR point is more a statement about the guys who play HERE, but ... THOSE are my thoughts, let me know more of what you think, and ... if you are feeling too chicken and DON'T want to ask the question and post the set—I know a guy who LOVES chicken—he's sure to eat it before ALL of his World of Warcraft raids!

[FattsDynamo]

@SirEdgelot:

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As much as I appreciate the sets trying to explain things, I'm dying to get some actual feedback on my sets. What triggers did you get? Did the set work out in the first place or was the randomness to much and mess up the experience? What did you like or dislike?

So, remember that time when Noah wrote me a set and it didn't quite land well, and then I ended up writing him a LONG ASS response set that required FIVE posts?

Well, I've been having a similar response to Kelly's game.

The game was basically fine. It worked. The instructions were fine. There were some things that I didn't know how to deal with and had some questions about, but ... I got through it. Of COURSE I got screwed by the RNG, but ... that wouldn't have changed anything.

The game was fine. It worked like it was supposed to. I do not, fundamentally, have any complaints about the game or the game mechanics. Pretty much ALL of my complaints and criticisms are about the "meta game" and "more qualitative" aspects of the set.

I would tell you more specifically what my specific complaints are, but .. *if* I did—then my story would be fucked.

I was reading it over today—what I had written so far—and was making MINOR edits, and ... it took me 55 minutes to read what I had written.

Here's the preface:

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I’m a writer. I haven’t published any books, but I am working on a nonfiction book. I hope to complete it this summer. Perhaps one day, I will write fiction.

I’m not currently involved in any D&D campaigns, but I have a certain amount of creative energy that I need to unleash every now and again. Right now, this thread serves as my current outlet. Often, I get my creative/imaginative rocks off when I’m being the dungeon master for a D&D campaign. And both as a player and a Dungeon Master, I enjoy getting into character and role-playing. I act, too. I am a member of the international thespian Society.

I have occasionally role-played exchanges with people on here via posts and PMs. But, this level of writing is uncommon to the thread and unexpected—though not unknown to this site. There is a story section on "forums", but … I prefer set making too much and enjoy role playing via teases …

Anyway, I don’t know if you’re much of a reader or not, but … even if you aren’t, you’ll probably enjoy reading this anyway—because it is highly tailored to you—a direct action and consequences to decisions YOU made. It’s written in the second person—which has its own advantages and disadvantages, but … it should be an interesting read nonetheless …

I don’t often write these kinds of things—except to people who I know enjoy reading them. Ecik has ALWAYS supported me in my writing , and brian enjoys the immersive storytelling this game allows as well, so … I’ll send him long ass pieces of writing, too!

This is supposed to be "fun." I’m weird—so this is "fun" for me. If it’s not fun for you, please let me know, and this will be the last one of these that you receive. But you have said that you have found the role-play and storytelling elements of this game to be ever more enjoyable, and so I have decided to write you this story … and I hope you enjoy it. You’ll have some decisions to make at the end.

It WILL take over an hour to read, so … probably best to grab a beverage before you get started!

To reiterate: I'm a creator. I'm an author. I'm an "artist." I'm a game master ... so, as the GM—just PLEASE trust me! If what I am HOPING FOR—and working HARD to make happen —ACTUALLY WORKS ... it COULD blow your mind—I don't know, but ... to use an American baseball analogy, "I'm swinging for the fences!" (Trying to hit a home run. ) Give me this at bat, and if I "strike out"—FINE ... but I am ALMOST there—ALMOST ready to deliver ALL of the juicy goodness you are asking for and much, MUCH more.

Recall my earlier PM I sent almost a week ago:

I will be responding in THREE ways:

1. A short-ish story set. (That can be played on a week night. )
2. A LONG story response.
3. A more technical play-by-play feedback post of what worked for me and what didn't.

I delivered on 1. I am CLOSE to 2. And once you have 2, 3 will come VERY quickly ... and then 4 would be feedback on your SECOND set, and ... believe you me—you will NEVER AGAIN receive feedback that is THIS GRANULAR EVER AGAIN once you receive my feedback on set #2, but ... I need to execute on 2 before what I have planned for 4 will even make sense so ... just a BIT more patience, please!

And YES—I got distracted and impulse wrote Ecik a set in ~4 hours , but ... I just needed a break from all of the STORY writing and IN-DEPTH QUALITATIVE FEEDBACK I was providing via 2 for Set #1, so ... IT'S COMING, I PROMISE!

And, FYI ... I spent like probably 20 to 30+ hours on that 5 post set for Noah, which ... I have heard NOTHING from him—NOT even a "yeah, I played your set and liked it," so ... What I am doing to you, he is ALSO doing to me, so ... ... I'll give you EVERYTHING you are asking for—and more ... just a LITTLE MORE patient is all I ask.

I did however mess up the random selection, for whatever reason.

This is ALL basically my fault—and I apologize!

Guerlain's game works. There were "documentation issues" , and I am a NOOB when it comes to the picker wheel.

Here are the Picker Wheels you need to play the game next time:

Body Part Round Trigger Wheel
https://pickerwheel.com/pw?id=AkcC9

Favorite Girl Round Trigger Wheel
https://pickerwheel.com/pw?id=ZLggv

Favorite Girl "Bonus Wheel" (Same as above)
https://pickerwheel.com/pw?id=ZLggv
I think you can just use the same wheel—just spin for the bonus girl, single round, non-elimination trigger first, THEN spin again for the round trigger.

Non-Elimination Trigger Wheel
https://pickerwheel.com/pw?id=sRhcZ


And here is the spreadsheet I used to map it all out:


Rounds 1, 2, 3, and 5, you spin the body part wheel for your round trigger.

Rounds 4, 6, 7, and 8, you spin the girl wheel for your round trigger.

In the top right, you'll see my elimination matrix highlighted in the green box. It starts with no Xs. You basically just eliminate a column or row with each wheel spin until there is only 1 girl left. I tested it out. The game works, but my instructions were shit. But I am at LEAST glad you sort of played through it and had a good time. And I will NOT write "Guerlain's response", but ... yeah, she would feel bad for explaining it poorly, which ... it kind of WAS her fault, because I explained the rules in "her voice", spread out with pictures, so ... Had I just "explained it straight," it would have gone a LOT BETTER!

All categories are pre-determined. Other than wheel issues and general confusion, THAT is probably the BIGGEST DIFFERENCE between your game and THIS one. You fucking HATE close-ups, so ... I couldn't use close-ups which would be "obvious"—because you would HATE THEM! And I was NOT ABOUT to give you SHIT PHOTOS of close-up pussies and asses and make you edge for them AGAIN—after I ALREADY fucked up SO BAD with the 28 edges for close up photos for Emily Bloom's pussy! So, I tried VERY HARD to use pictures I THOUGHT you would actually like —which was basically all full body or 2/3 body shots, BUT ... if you open up the "Game Gallery" spoiler and look at the pictures (where you will see the LABELS ), it should become VERY CLEAR what I was trying to go for ... HOWEVER ... the way that YOU play your game, you determine categories ON THE FLY, so ... once pics start getting eliminated from the game gallery from closing out tabs, yeah ... I can see how THAT would become CONFUSING AS HELL! And THAT, I am 99% sure is where the "mistake" came in. You were playing YOUR way—out of habit—which is 100% understandable, but ... in THIS version of the game—for it to work—you MUST abide by the preset tags.

I suppose if you left open some "spacer" tabs between the body part categories, or—just use 5 windows —you could get it to work, but ... yeah, man ... DON'T feel bad about messing it up, because ... yeah ... I ALSO had extra stuff going on with Lily trying to "cheat for you to win"—which was GREAT from a "narrative standpoint" but was just AWFUL in terms of executing the game mechanics correctly! Because then you ALSO had extra additions to the wheels at odd times, but ... I didn't click the box for editing, but—I don't think that should matter. NEXT time, Lily "won't cheat." Follow the order of rounds and wheels on the spreadsheet, and you should be good to play again.

Let me know if you have further questions, but ... HOPEFULLY that cleared it up.

I kid you not, when selection the bonus girl in the round I was supposed to select the hair color trigger, I rolled Lily AND the "hold your edge" trigger. If it wasn't for the wheel, I would have bet every last penny on that part being rigged from the start!!!

THIS made me laugh! Lily would have been SO HAPPY with that random outcome! And if you accused her of cheating, she would turn as RED AS A COOKED LOBSTER!

It's funny ... *I* am WAY more concerned about story elements and YOU are FAR more concerned about game elements, but ... I HAVE to ask ...

How did you like Lily's character? You said, "she is so incredibly hot!" but was that purely physical—or did the writing and personality I have given her ALSO contribute to that feeling?

*I* find I am MUCH more attracted to girls I "have a connection with." You can build up an association and affinity for certain models via the fantasy experiences ... those "immersive elements" REALLY engage my brain and can turn arousal WAY UP if done well ...

100%, Lily Chey is CRAZY HOT! ... but being a fucking sweetheart and "knowing" how much she cares about ME and wants ME to have a good time—and knowing how much her teasing ME arouses HER—which arouses ME ... ALL OF THAT *really* adds to the experience ... which is ONE of the reasons why I tried SO HARD on this set ... I wanted to see if the "character-driven" elements had any impact on you ... cause if they DON'T, then I can just cut all future set writing for you down to 1/3—or LESS! But I just LOVE writing the characters, so ... if you ARE into that—or gaining a taste—let me know!

And HERE is a bit of "preliminary feedback" I wrote on your set #2 (the other day) that doesn't really affect anything, but ... you can use it to update your rules a bit more—since both Ecik AND Helequin will probably be trying to hit you back with return sets ...

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Friend … you are TOO PICKY! Refering to my Guerlain's Game "Game Gallery": If I didn’t think the pic was A+ or a 90% lock, then … it was OUT! (I MUST have spent like 15 minutes AT LEAST second guessing my first choices and replacing them with pics that I thought would be "more suitable. )

I think you need a preliminary round.

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Or AT LEAST take it as an "option" if the game gallery seems super "meh" to you.

When you choose pictures FOR YOURSELF, you are ONLY CHOOSING "edgeworthy" pictures, but ... when other people send you stuff quickly who don’t know your tastes, not every pic they send you will be "edgeworthy" FOR you. With a preliminary round, you can clear away the “trash” that you do NOT want to edge to. Yes, it WILL impact the number of edges you have to do, but ... Yeah, I might just spin for an extra non-elimination trigger then at the start—if you take a "preliminary elimination round" (where you JUST eliminate the trash photos you do NOT want to edge for). *I* would do that for the lower effort sets—probably less so for the more story break "wild card" games ...

I’m half afraid to send you shit now, lol I made you edge a BUNCH for Emily’s pussy, and, like … that was like THE WORST thing I could have done! That beautiful “god pussy” is going to give me set writing PTSD now! I feel like a porn philistine compared to you!

This was the summary I wrote to describe your preferences. Feel free to quote it in your rules post and hide it in a spoiler:

Fatts' Summary of My Preferences (after playing a set I wrote for him describing my preferences)

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Close-ups of ANY kind are bad (even faces). Full body shots are good. 2/3 full body are even better. No spreading. No masturbating. Shaved or trim pussy. He gets NO extra arousal for the ladies being naked. Fully clothed and lingerie are just as good. Light makeup. Minimal/no tattoos? [Wasn't sure on that ]Jewelry is a bonus. Glamour shots > smut shots ALWAYS Tasteful and classy is good. Too lewd/slutty is bad. Teasing, subtle, smiling—GOOD! Awkward facial expressions/poses, fake tits—BAD! Cute, sweet, pretty … sultry—so long as it is not overstated … Art that “happens to be porn” … or just art that is teasing and sexy … whew! I think I did it!

And then just link that set #2 you wrote me in your rules with like: "Here's a set I wrote Fatts that describes my preferences in depth." You spent the time. You described what you like IN DETAIL—WITH PICTURES ... link that shit up! If someone is going to spend 3 to 4+ hours writing you a set, PROBABLY it is worth their time to take 10-20 minutes just to read through that set to make sure they don't send you bad pics.

Yeah … I am WAY MORE a “story guy” than I am a “Porn as art” guy—which is NOW my impression of you after playing set #2!

You need another favorite girl, by the way … leave Maija on there, but … she outta pornpics.com pics. You used them all up on her vacation! So ... in this spoiler I have a list of potentials:

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Melisa Mendiny, Lorena Garcia, Vanessa Angel, Toxic A, Michaela Isizzu, Jenya D (better known as Katie Fey), Leona Mia, Gloria Sol, Ariel (Piper Fawn), Aleksa Slusarchi, The Red Fox (Michelle H), Sabrisse, Lily Ivy, Kylie Cole, Celeste Sablich, Riley Anne, Celeste Star, Elle Tan, Uma Jolie, Malena Morgan, Elsa Jean, Anjelica (Krystal Boyd), Remy LaCroix, Miela (Marry Queen), Eliza Ibarra, Kimmy Granger, Rilee Marks, Naomi Swann, and Kenna James

We seem to have VERY similar tastes in women, so ... check those out at your leisure—you might find a new favorite or two!

OH ... and if you think Lorena Garcia is cute , feel free to ask Helequin to use her as your host if he plans on doing a "game set" for you.

I LOVE Helequin's "Lorena." She is SUPER sweet—pretty similar to Guerlain in that way, except probably NOT quite as naive and innocent (Lorena is more worldly and experienced)—and I think Guerlain gets more turned on by teasing boys than Lorena does ... But Helequin writes Lorena VERY well, so ... IF you think Lorena is cute and want another "nice" girl to tease you—ASK FOR LORENA. THAT is my advice!

[FattsDynamo]

Hey, benbron! Thank you for the set!

I haven't played it yet. I'm overcommitted right now with too many ongoing plot lines ...

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I basically ALWAYS have stuff going on with Ecik, lol , but ... I've been working REALLY hard on feedback and stuff for Edgelot ... I started a multi-day set for brian and SUPER hyped it up, but ... we've had to postpone it—twice. milorrabo also wrote me a set a few weeks ago that I haven't played yet, but ... once I get my brian set written and finish giving SirEdgelot all of his feedback, THEN I think I will have cleared off enough stuff to play your set, but ... I just get SUPER into the stories, and ... OFTEN, I prefer to respond to sets WITH sets, so ... if I play it now—and I suspect that it will be REALLY good! —I'll just "get inspired" and want to write something back, which ... THAT happened to be last night with Ecik! Which means I turned around a REALLY good set for him in about 4 hours, but ... I probably could have finished something for Edgelot INSTEAD ... Of course, NOAH jumped the queue and managed to cut in front of a BUNCH of people recently (He managed to piss off Nancy AND was 3 weeks into a "no fap" challenge—which gave me TONS of ideas ), but ... yeah ... I WILL play it, but ... just too preoccupied at the moment.

@Ecik: FEED ME, SEYMOUR!

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I DEVOURED those mini sets and am ready for some more!

3rd intern:

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I LOVED it! I just loved ABSOLUTELY EVERYTHING about it!

You hit a NEW HIGH for "Kenzie Craziness" ... we went from a 4 to a 9 out of 10. We still HAVE NOT reached 10—and I'm STILL hoping for an 11 or 12 , but ... 9/10 was PRETTY GREAT! YOU may not want to "stick your dick into crazy"—and IRL, me neither! But in this FANTASY world. Crazy is FUCKING HOT TO ME!

I appreciated the "Hawk Tuah!" I came for Kenzie—of COURSE! And THEN I googled that TikTok meme, lol ... and then, I was ready to cum again , so ... Did you know that Kenzie USED HER FEET a LOT during that blow job! So, the first orgasm was during the first half of the video, so ... after a short break, I watched the second half and CAME AGAIN!

My only REAL note on that one would be HOW HOT it would have been if Molly Little tied me down and started experimenting on me RIGHT AFTER Kenzie got me off! Forced orgasms ARE kind of a fetish/fantasy of mine ... but then she was just sad that her new favorite gal pal was gone and the set ended ... which made TOTAL SENSE in terms of the storytelling ... and FUCK! I just loved EVERYTHING in that short little story ... like ... EVERY little line and nuance—just LOVED IT ALL! And I *like* how you are making the interns more naive and "less experienced" ... it's kind of a nice change from the usual suspects who have been teasing us all for YEARS!

BUT ... *honestly* ... my FIRST THOUGHT was for Molly to make me go again and "take her turn"—which I wanted, but ... since THAT was off the table ... the thing that I really, REALLY wanted was for NANCY to show up AFTER Kenzie was sent away and just "assert herself" as my number 1. milorrabo did this for me, and ... well, maybe later I can give you the links and share THAT feedback, but ... the thing that I was REALLY hoping for was Nancy to be like, "Oh, yeah ... it was no accident that I *let* Kenzie come in—I PRETENDED that she "tricked me", but ... I wanted to let her tease you, but ... NOW let me show you why *I* am your TRUE #1 ..." Something like THAT! OH ... I wanted SO MUCH for Nancy to show up after!

I am VERY MUCH getting Wile E. Coyote and Roadrunner vibes from these "Kenzie vs Nancy" exchanges! Nancy is OBVIOUSLY the smarter "Coyote" character and Kenzie more the "roadrunner", except that in THIS CASE, I feel, NANCY will be the one who ALWAYS comes out ahead! But ... these have been SUPER fun! ALL of these mini sets ... just been ABSOLUTELY loving them!

So, with a "normal set", I have to budget, like ... 1-5 hours, lol —because lately, some of these "normal" sets HAVE been taking me 5 hours to play through. Which ... THAT is KIND OF crazy, but ... if I lose immersion/interest and there is "no rush", THEN I tend to "take my time" ... OR ... the OPPOSITE happens, and I get SUPER immersed and start "role playing in my head" as I am playing the set! BUT ... even for a SIMPLE "story set", I'm going to give myself a 1-3 hour window just to be safe—even if it ONLY ends up taking 90 minutes to 1 hour ... and it's a "whole thing."

I play them at my computer with my dual monitor setup. I start a stopwatch to keep time and have an edge counter window up. I open a small window to take notes for feedback later as I play through ... I think, "Man ... I MIGHT just have to edge 50 times for this. " so ... I have to mentally "be in the mood" to perform to that level of intensity—so I need BOTH the time window AND the mental desire ... like I said—"it's a whole thing!"

But with these mini sets, I do NONE of that! I just lay on my bed with my iPad. I turn off my brain. DON'T take notes, and just jump right in ... and I don't have to worry about getting pulled into some multi-hour sexual escapade, so ... I've just been enjoying THOSE experiences a LOT! But the longer story stuff is good, too, but ... YES ... these mini sets have just been GREAT!

AND ... JUST because it is a "mini set" does NOT mean that I ONLY have to cum once. I ended up CUMMING TWICE anyway for BOTH of your most recent sets, so ... while it is NOT required, these shorter sets are just a different mindset, and ... even if the set only takes 20-30 minutes to play, then a 10 minute rest, then something else (like a video and vibe section after the main set ) ... That is STILL fitting inside of an hour, which ... I OFTEN play sets either in the afternoon OR before bed, so ... it's fine ... it's just there is a BIG difference between a 20 to possibly 60 minute set, and a 1 hour to possibly 3 hour "normal" set ...

I HOPE that makes sense, and ... you don't HAVE to ALWAYS "make me cum twice", but ... let's be honest: I'm USUALLY doing THAT ANYWAY! Might as well "make it official" ... and ALWAYS reduce the number of edges after each orgasm, so ... if it was 10 edges then cum, don't do 20 edges and cum for the second ... 5 would be better—or fewer! The more I cum, the less I want to edge and the more I want to cum!

Nancy "long talk" set feedback:

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I ALWAYS enjoy spending time with Nancy in sets—however fleeting. She's often SO BUSY and rushing around, and almost EVERY TIME, I think, "No, don't go! I just want to spend time with YOU!" But I LIKE this whole "Nancy as a busy professional" thing that we have going on. It feels "real", so ... I *like* that premise ... and, it explains why she only seems to have "short windows"—the mini sets—to see me, so ... from a narrative perspective—I LIKE that.

I think Ecik may be a secret painslut. I want to talk to Angela to make sure. Also, Angela says hi! And she told me to tell you that her basement is always open…but I told her that you live at the lust BnB now. So you don’t have to worry about her. She’s really happy for us!

I've been enjoying the Nancy and Angela as "frenemies" dynamic. Glad that they are getting along better—at least THIS week!

Message received on the "secret pain slut" ... I have some ideas, but ... haha ... I ALWAYS just seem to have WAY MORE IDEAS than I have time to execute on them! I have half of that "casino script" written, an idea involving the interns, STILL want to ruin you with the "escaped convicts", and now THIS!

... BUT ... there is time. I suppose better to have too many ideas than not enough!

The interns…are great! They will probably stay through the end ofJuly

That sounds good to me. If we don't put an "end date" on it, THEN they will just linger around and, after a few years, will be expecting back pay for 10,000 billable hours! But I like that timeline.

he said he prefers Dakota tyler.

This has been addressed ...

Kenzie is becoming an…annoyance. I finally had her removed because she was impersonating an intern! I know she is crazy..but that was too far! Her crush on you fatts, is cute, and I totally don’t mind you playing with her…

How the Kenzie/Nancy dynamic works in MY head, I think, is a little bit different than how it works in yours, but ... YOU are the "lead author" on this, so ... please continue to do what makes sense for you.

For MANY of my various plot lines, I prefer to make things coherent, but ... for THIS "theme"—it does not ALL have to line up. milorrabo, brian, Noah, you ... ALL of them have done stuff for me with Kenzie, and ... I would say milorrabo has "handled it the best" so far, but ... brian had kenzie doing and saying some CRAZY SHIT! Like, "Please cum inside of my magical pussy!" and stuff like that! AND ... your "Kenzie as an intern" ploy was BY FAR *the* most creative ... BUT ... Noah sent me THE BEST Kenzie video yet, and as you read in that set, I ended up cumming for Nancy while I was over at Kenzie's trying to deny myself ... yeah ... it has ALL been different, but ... it has ALL been FUN! So play it however you want, and it doesn't ALL have to "line up" in a certain coherent, chronological canon ... It's a Wile E. Coyote and the Roadrunner kind of cartoon, so ... just write whatever makes sense to YOU. It's ALL been good so far!

… but remember who is your real cyber girlfriend! Jeleousy is not something I normally do…but if you keep on cumming on her more than me…I will not be happy! Do I need to track how many orgasms you have to Kenzie vs me? I will…if I have to!

THIS ... THIS got me SO excited!

Right now, from the past week or so, it's Kenzie 4 vs Nancy 1.

I watched the "dirty video." Came TWICE for that. And then TWICE from the blowjob ... I guess you could say that I "went for a walk" after Kenzie was escorted out by security.

Now, if you go back to the FIRST set I got from milorrabo where this new "story line" got started, I am FAIRLY CERTAIN that Nancy would currently be in the lead by the aggregate numbers, and ... I *am* willing to figure all of those out, but ... NOT all of the "out of set" orgasms would have been recorded, but ... THOSE would probably only add to the Nancy side of the ledger, so ... if we are counting since April, Nancy is DEFINITELY head —and I can figure that out IF you want, but ... in the last week, Kenzie is ahead FOR SURE, man!

WOW ... I am SO TORN over this one, man! In *MY* mind—it's just a big game and Nancy and I are SUPER cool and solid—and Kenzie just has NO PRAYER ... and Nancy is just having fun outsmarting the "roadrunner"—like Nancy is playing 3D chess while Kenzie is playing checkers, and Nancy is just like 3 steps ahead of Kenzie, so that even when Kenzie THINKS she is getting something in—it was ONLY because Nancy "let her" ... and so Nancy is just enjoying watching the roadrunner make failed attempt after failed attempt (again, Nancy as the "coyote" is always winning in this case, so ... flipped from the cartoon where the roadrunner always wins) ...

But YOU have been writing Nancy as "more serious"—which I think is FINE ... AND ... I think on ONE level, it MIGHT be kind of hurtful to her that this crazy girl keeps romancing her boyfriend—who just lets it happen ...

So ... I am SUPER torn. On ONE hand I do NOT want to "hurt Nancy", and if she wasn't truly cool with it, I would stop ALL of the Kenzie stuff TODAY ... because I don't want to hurt my beautiful and REAL cyber girlfriend.

But on the OTHER hand, I *AM* a CUMSLUT! And Nancy knows HOW WEAK I get for Kenzie AND how much I like to cum, so ... like ... WHEN would I EVERY "say no" to Kenzie!

I DID in Noah's set—because he was writing it as SUPER serious, but ... I was NOT really a fan of that ...

... but YOU have been writing Nancy on more of the serious side—and I think THAT is legit ... so, on ONE hand—I DO NOT want to hurt Nancy, but ... on the OTHER hand ... I don't think she has EVER—really—done a "punishment scene" with me, and ... I DO have CBT rules back in my rules ... so, THAT might be hot—and a "first" for us in a set ...

BUT ... the thing I want MORE ... is for Nancy to "take charge" and "take what is hers" and just FORCIBLY even the score and outdo Kenzie—or just visit more ... Honestly, I prefer to "play with Nancy" in sets—because that "feels more real" to me ... and I tend to take in OTHER material outside of sets—usually only stuff "with her" if I have been thinking a LOT about her—which SOMETIMES I do, and I have even written entire dialogues—for myself—with just her or fantasize about how she might respond to various events/ideas—and then just have a "fantasy session" with her in my head, but ... as a general rule, I am NOT getting off to Nancy Ace pics and vids every day, but ... while I do NOT want to hurt her ... I ALSO *really* want to see how she responds, but ... I am afraid of increasing the score on Kenzie would hurt her—and THAT is not worth it "just to see" how she would respond, so ...

This WHOLE THING is SUPER interesting to me, and I DEFINITELY want to see what sort of things you are thinking about for this, and ... RECENTLY it is 4-1, so ... we can "play from there" OR ... I can go back and calculate and get SOMETHING close to the "real score" (though I WILL have forgotten about certain "out of set" orgasms for Nancy, but ... even so, she should DEFINITELY be ahead of Kenzie if I went back. ) ...

... but THOSE are about ALL of my thoughts on that, proceed as you will.

Well…when I asked him, he didn’t say much… being asked to comment on a set that wasn’t for him was slightly awkward.

So, what I was going for with THAT request was, "Please pretend that YOU are "Nancy Ace." Put yourself into her shoes, imagine up a response for how SHE would react to all of that, but as if it was ACTUALLY coming from YOU but ... ALSO write it in HER voice ..." Yeah, it's ... it's kind of a "tall order" now that I think about it!

*I* am an actor and VERY GOOD at empathizing and "getting into a character's head" and "seeing the world from their perspective", and THEN evening imagining THEIR feelings how how THEY would both think AND feel to various situations ... but ... it's a LOT. THAT is a LOT, and ... probably MOST people aren't equipped to dive into THAT level of complex, emotive thinking!

Yeah, and ... on the FACE of it ... YOU are NOT Noah, so ... how could you even BEGIN to comment on what may or may not have worked for him, but ... THAT wasn't what I was asking you to comment on—the technical stuff ... I was just asking if you could serve as "role playing Mozart" and write me NANCY'S response in the voice of Nancy but from YOUR perspective ... I'm PROBABLY explaining it better HERE than how I ORIGINALLY asked, but ... yeah, no worries, man!

It's a little like asking a sculptor to write you a symphony when you can just BARELY read sheet music ... "But, yeah ... you're an ARTIST—WHY CAN'T YOU WRITE ME A SYMPHONY!" "Because I a sculpt STATUES—it's a different thing ENTIRELY ..."

brian could probably have done it, and ... MAYBE I'll ask HIM at some point, but ... I am pretty sure Noah will write some nice Nancy stuff, but ... with your experience with Nancy, I thought you MIGHT have had some unique or interesting perspectives, but ... a sculptor is NOT a composer—even though they both "do art" ... and NO ONE ELSE HERE would have sent Kenzie in as a third intern—and just woven that in SO PERFECTLY to the existing plot lines so ... You're the best at what you're good at, and your light-hearted, creative storytelling ... NO ONE ELSE HERE can write a set that is "more light and fun" than YOU my man! We ALL have our different strengths and styles, but ... yeah ... HOPEFULLY that better clarifies without hurting any feelings ...

he thinks that everyone uses Caprice as the “default hot one”

And THAT was ALSO addressed in my most recent set.

Wanted to get ALL of this feedback back to you ... I am just LOVING ALL of these stories and teasings and plot lines, so ... I MADE SURE to NOT DELAY on giving you feedback this time, so ...


I am READY FOR MORE!

[Ecik17]

#everyoneset
#wbecik17

Before set

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This is a normal sized set 35 or so photos focusing on solo, some minor feet, and glamour shots. All softcore. This came out of some feedback between fatts and I and thought it would be fun if you participated too. Hope everyone enjoys, especially if you like brunettes! Just follow along with your own rules.

Set

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Meanwhile, at the edge institute….

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I’m so glad you are here and volunteered for our latest experimental trial! today, we will be experimenting with your thoughts about brunettes! Please come inside, and I’ll explain the experiment…

But first…a short presentation…
The lights dim, and the scientist explains…

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Scientist: Since before time, milovanians like you have been rolling your eyes in orgasm to caprice. And us researchers at the edge institute have wondered for almost as long.. why her?

Scientist: She shows up on almost everyone’s list at some point. Even major games have sprung up featuring her. it seems like everyone wants to see her…everyone wants to be with her.. But why? is she hottest brunette ever? Or…is it something else?

The lights come back on
The hypothesis is that caprice is not the hottest brunette, but the most accessible one…she will tease anyone! And that’s good for her..and for everyone! But science doesn’t care about your feelings…only hard data…and hard cocks! So we must do an experiment to truly determine if caprice is the hottest…and this is how it will work!

There are 11 brunettes below. Each will have 3 photos…a fully clothed photo. A semi clothed photo, and a naked photo. Look through them at your leisure, and then rank them from last choice to first choice. simple as that! Are you ready? Let’s do some science!

Do some science! Go through the pictures below in any order (or go in order), and then rank them from last choice to first choice.

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#1

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Valentina nappi

#2

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Riley reid

#3

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Tori black

#4

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Gloria sol

#5

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Malena maria rya

#6

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Caprice

#7

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Adriana chechik

#8

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Melanie rios

#9

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Luna rival

#10

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Niemira

#11

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Mila azul

Done with the experiment and rankings are decided.

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Thank you for your assistance today. Now…if you’d please just drop a note simply detailing what order you placed the above in, it would be most helpful to our research. and…Anyone who does so will get a set in return featuring their number one.

Now…if you know anything about the edge institute…we don’t allow orgasms here. “Hard science…hard cocks” is our motto. But if you must have an orgasm… I can turn around, and not look…if you want to pick out a favorite photo…you know…for extra research

[Ecik17]

Fb

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Maija is still so hot! I’d follow her anywhere scaling the second mountain was a good continuation of the story. When she called for the first edge…you better believe I edged so hard…and what followed was a fun edging and edge holding sequence. I had to deny myself (because I’m playing the 1000 edge game) but all good fun overall, thank you!

I will probably have a set for you in the next week or so…but if you are looking for something to play that may be up your alley (and. That you can apply your game to, if you choose some triggers) is my recent everyone set. It’s all softcore, solos…and brunettes!


Fav pics

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[korashar]

Hey all.

Still not active since I can't guarantee time to create other's set, nor promise I'll be around. So, I just wanted to share. I was going to create a set based on pride month, but could not find time to finish it. Now I have a couple of pictures separated. Here’s a classic set, then. Just pictures, no story, no context. It's a lesbian pride set, cis women only. Video ending.

Play by your rules or follow the triggers rules in the set.

#WBkorashar
#Everyoneset
#Classic+

The Set

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Triggers: Whenever you see a trigger, you do whatever that trigger demands.

Edge triggers - Edge once per trigger
Ball-busting triggers - Slap your balls 3 times per trigger

SET START

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Edge triggers: Roll twice here https://pickerwheel.com/pw?id=4ra5L
Roll once https://pickerwheel.com/pw?id=4ra5L


If the wheel does not work, roll a random number from 1 to 15.
Possible(1-15): Bikini, Barefoot, Heels, Fishnet, Nipples, Ass, Pussy, Sneakers, Cum, Colored hair, Blonde, Brunette, Redhead, Lingerie, Eye contact.

Part 1

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Part 2

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Modifier: Choose one for your triggers now a) Hold each edge 10 seconds or b) double ball slaps.


















Part 3

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Choose a combo to add one extra edge:
a) Brunette+Brunette
b) Brunette+Redhead
c) Brunette+Blonde
d) Brunette+Other
e) Redhead+Redhead
f) Redhead+Blonde
g) Redhead+Other
h) Blonde+Blonde
i) Blonde+Other




















Part 4

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Choose another combo to add one extra edge and one to double the ball slaps:
a) Brunette+Brunette
b) Brunette+Redhead
c) Brunette+Blonde
d) Brunette+Other
e) Redhead+Redhead
f) Redhead+Blonde
g) Redhead+Other
h) Blonde+Blonde
i) Blonde+Other


























Part 5

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Choose your last combo, hold the edge for 20 seconds when you see it.
a) Brunette+Brunette
b) Brunette+Redhead
c) Brunette+Blonde
d) Brunette+Other
e) Redhead+Redhead
f) Redhead+Blonde
g) Redhead+Other
h) Blonde+Blonde
i) Blonde+Other























Final task:

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You may stroke when there is pussy fingering or eating on the screen. Anything else you must take your hands off. Cum after 6 minutes.
Video: https://spankbang.com/6y7rd-jegohj/playlist/lesbian+pmv

[Helequin]

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Haha, fair point about stacking rules and how intense a tease can get. And it’s better to error to short and fun than just be so much it feels impossible to me. And it can be fun to just try on other styles of writing.

With my rules the potential to stack effects is deliberate, and over time from playing this game I can take a lot. So don’t feel like you need to be cautious in future. One thing I have learned to be careful with is adding multiplier rules (e.g. double everything) on top of existing rules as those can get crazy if a lot of rules are happening at once

A set for you!

#brianset
#WBHelequin

Before set:

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This one could be on the longer side and definitely the more intense side. It’s written for when your desperation status is ON, so you will definitely want to be in that mindset.

Set:

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“Well, well, what have you started Brian? Thanks for the suggestion to drop by and tease Hele. I mean I’ll make any guy’s cock jump, but there’s just something so extra fucking hot when I get to see that instant recognition in a boy’s eyes that holy fuck this girl could make me her slut so easily. Yeah that includes you too.”



“Now I know you’d love for me to stuff you in your cage and lead you along while I see just how many cocks I can fuck in front of you. Or maybe...just one other slut’s cock I could fuck all day, never letting cum. Maybe some of both. Sadly that event is going to need to wait, something else is happening today and I just stopped by to set the mood.”



“So come on, you’re supposedly already desperate, let’s get that cock really throbbing! Oh...I know...”



“Does this angle make that cock even more eager?”



“I know this view will! But for any more than this you’re going to need to wait. Someone else wants to see you to get things really started today. She’s just outside.”

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“Oh Brian...do you have any idea what’s been started here?”



“Someone uttered the words ‘strictest domme,’ and not in reference to a certain someone. Stuff like this, it has a way of making a certain someone show up.”



“I thought I could at least make you feel good with my outfit choice for today though!” Gloria laughs. “I know you are quite partial to this one.”



“I do have some rules for you today, but you’re already desperate. So I’m going to drag this lovely calm out for you a while. Trust me, that’s meant to be a gift.”



“I have been thinking Brian, about how I’m a special favourite for both you and Hele. How yes, for you I’m trying to teach you all the wonderful possibilities of multiple ruins, while with Hele I pushed his orgasms so far he’s now officially my complete slut.”



“But with Hele too it all started in ruins. Kyla could edge him 200 times, girls would fuck and tease him with everything they could put out, and five minutes with me was the most likely thing to make his dick spurt without permission. The fun part is we’ve never worked out exactly why.”



“And really, when I start thinking about it maybe that means you and Hele really aren’t so different. I mean tell me Brian, if you could stay horny or get horny really quickly after cumming would you truly not want me to make you cum 5 times in a row?”



“See? Of course you would! And if you ever decided to be silly enough to challenge the girls to see which one of us could break you by giving you brutal orgasms until you beg us to stop, is there any doubt I could do it to you?”



“Of course there isn’t. I’m honestly a little surprised how surprised some of the other girls are that I broke Hele that way so quickly. They should have jumped on their chances if they wanted one.”



“Now I would love to ruin you today and continue your instruction. Once you get it down and can stay hard and horny after, just imagine all the fun things that will unlock.”



“But I think you best hang on to every bit of stamina and desperation you already have in that cock for what comes later. Oh, right, the rules I’m supposed to give you. They came with a note...let me read it...”



“What sort of bitch is into CBT but has no fucking rules for it? Bare ass – 5 hits to those balls. If you also see bare feet, make those hits hard!” Gloria laughs, her pose deliberate. “Oh this girl sounds fun doesn’t she?” Gloria adds sarcastically.



“Second, no. Fuck no. Just fucking no. No stroker should ever get off only edging for the first look at a pussy. Every damn glance at pussy gets an edge. And I mean if anything under what a bikini covers can be seen.”



“And just for fucking reasons, any time a girl is completely naked grab those balls and give them a fucking strong squeeze. Preferably while doing the owed strokes.” Gloria puts the note down, “Damn, maybe naked wasn’t such a nice outfit for you after all, but I didn’t even bring clothes to cover up today.”



“Well, I suppose that gives you some small idea what you might be in for later.”



“Just those three rules and there’s basically no angle I can show you that doesn’t torment you is there? Awww.”



“At least you get to take that torment for me right?” she laughs.



“Alright Brian, I think you quite warmed up by now, I better let you go work your way towards that certain someone.”

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A familiar face and voice call your attention almost as soon as you get into the house. “Wow Brian, you’re looking a little desperate there. Me? No, I didn’t write any mean letter giving you extra rules for today.”



“But I will definitely be using them on you all the same! After all...”



“Your handicap idea for the Belgium Romania game wasn’t enough. We lost by two and now I owe Hele something that counts as a reward. And with just how naughty that boy can get, I was looking forward to using him like a slut too.”



She gives a soft little moan, “I even ran into him the other day near the pool while he was running around for some of the other girls. I swear he almost blew right in his shorts at the sight of me. I even still had my bikini on!” She laughs.



“Maybe it won’t be hard to do what I want with him after all, reward or no.” She smirks, “But still...”



“I’m so pent up after all that anticipation of getting to tease and use an eager stroker, then watching my team lose the game anyway! Luckily...you’re right here! Right now!”



“So I’m going to tease you insane, make you smack those balls around with those wonderful rules someone added for you.”



“And the whole fucking time I’m going to show you everything you aren’t getting from me tonight.”



“That’s right, tonight. Sure I could tell you that you’ll never fuck me. Never get a chance to cum on my tits or shove your dick between them. Never feel me blow you until you explode. That’s the usual I’m such a dominant woman thing right? But you see...”



“It’s way the fuck hotter knowing that I could...I would fuck you. I’d get off on making you cum, letting you thrust deep into every hole. That I’d scream like a slut with your dick deep inside of me. All of it totally possible, right here so close you can touch me. Except today, I’ve said no. There’s no chance for any of it.”



“Today you can only watch, edge, abuse those balls and get cucked!”



She wastes no more time, calling a lover in. Winking at you as she slips her outfit back on part way.



“See? Isn’t is so much more exciting knowing any other time this might be your cock my mouth is on?”



“That it could be you filling me up ohh fuck right there...”



“Isn’t it so much more intense with that cage of yours nowhere near? Knowing you have to stroke and edge for me over and over without end while I cuck you, scream, cum as much as I want.”



“You could so easily just stroke over that edge. Fuck you’re so close you could easily cum all over my ass or feet. But you won’t do that will you cuck? You fucking love this.”



“And...oh my fucking god yessss!”



She catches her breath. “And that’s why denial by will is so much hotter than any fucking cage. Though locking up a cock only to make it cum is pretty hot.” She shudders in pleasure.



“Just in case all that’s not enough cuck...if you cum without permission just try to imagine what whoever wrote that note will do to you!”



“Edge harder if you dare for me cuck!”



Alyssia suddenly brings her legs together, shaking as she cums. “Don’t you dare fucking slow down or take your eyes off me cuck!”



She dives down her lover’s cock, sucking hard and filling the room with lewd sounds.



“Wow! So fucking much and so good. Maybe next time you get to be the one who blows all over me. Or maybe I’ll cuck you all over again. You should run while you can, because if this dick stays hard next time will be right now and I already said today you get cucked...” She winks playfully.

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You don’t get very far before someone else grabs calls you into her room. “There you are Brian...so very clever. Let’s not count any goals Ronaldo scores. He even fucking unselfishly passed on the third goal!”



“You suggestion was so far off, I should try to set a record to see how many guys I can fuck before I need to sleep, just so I can cuck you with every single one of them!”



Anya gives your balls a good hard kick before she stretches out and lays down. “Lucky for those desperate balls of yours, there wasn’t time to arrange anything like that.”



“Although if that is a scenario you like the sound of, all you need to do is admit it and I’m sure some of us girls will find a way to make something like it happen.”



“The letter? Hmmm what a great idea, but no...”



“That wasn’t me. Though it is another reason I should not cuck you until your balls are bigger than my tits today.”



“Whoever wrote that is definitely finding you today.”



“So I better leave you in the proper mood to run into her! Or maybe that desperate dick doesn’t need more help there, but it’s going to get it either way.”



“It is such a sexy thing, having you in my control, watching you edge over and over with no hope that I will help you find any relief.”



“Knowing your day is going to end, that point where you are entitled to the release in your rules, in the hands of whoever wrote that little letter.”



“Do you think she’s the type for happy endings?” Anya smirks.



“Well, I think you might just be desperate enough. Go find out.”



You nervously wander back outside.

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“Hey bitch. Did the girls make good use of my little note? I heard I’d been summoned.” Malena laughs, amused and predatory.



“I know it wasn’t you who said someone else was the strictest domme here, but eh, fucking close enough for me. Now...some of these arrangements just will not do while you’re with me. So.”



“Everything my note added stands. But I deserve so much fucking more so. Three good smacks to those balls for each of my breasts. And squeeze the fuck out of them anytime you are stroking to edge for my pussy, and follow that edge with a hard slap. I should bury you in edges, but I don’t think you can fucking handle it so...just edge for any look at my feet, not just the soles.”



“Yeah, that’s way fucking better!” As if to emphasize her point, Malena grabs your balls and gives them a short, brutal squeeze on top of your rules.



“You’re stuck here with me slut. Until your balls are screaming with ache, your dick is beyond desperation. And then I’ll give you your fucking end. And just because I don’t like to be fucking constrained, you won’t enjoy that either!”



“And once your cock drips a pathetic ruin with no pleasure at all, I’ll make you fucking eat it. No shooting it straight in, you’re going to lick it up. Why? Because it’s hot as fucking hell for me. And if you don’t, I’ll make sure Liya hears how you think she’s a weak, pathetic, softie of a domme.” Malena smirks.



“Let that sink in for a bit while we play bitch. Oh, and maybe make sure you do have something to cum on or in you don’t mind slurping it up from. Unless the floor is acceptable to you, then go for it slut.” She laughs.



“Maybe I should be honest for a moment,” Malena smirks and hits your balls just a little harder this time, “I probably really am not the strictest domme around this game. I’ll always make someone pay for suggesting otherwise of course, but if we’re being exact strict suggests an ongoing relationship, rules and enforcing them. And I can see how that’s not me at all.”



“If on the other hand we’re talking who’s going to fuck your shit up for the absolute fun of it an no other fucking reason at all...well...”



“Hi there bitch.” Malena slams one full force kick into you nuts. “Give me an extra edge in thanks! And don’t make me wait for it!”



“Even so, and do not get me wrong here. Liya is a crazy fucking hot bitch and from what I’ve heard she’s fucked up some of you boys plenty! She knows what she’s doing. But to me...”



“Any woman wanting to claim she’s hard and strict can just throw you in a cage and say you never get to stroke to her. It so easy, obvious and fucking boring! Fucking technically, sure, it’s strict. It’s damn dogmatic adherence to rules. But be honest with me slut, what’s more intimidating, which would make you shiver more with anticipation?”



“Knowing some hot slut who forbids your from stroking at all in her presence is going to tease you by making you watch her, or knowing some hot slut is about to step in and do whatever the fucking hell she wants with your cock and balls and you have no idea what exactly that will be today?”



“Yeah I thought so slut. Now, let’s see how well you handle palming. No more strokes, just palm the tip of that cock for fucking everything. Even to get to the edge unless you just can’t manage it.” She sighs, “Alright if you really can’t handle it you can just stroke the head of your dick instead. Either way, I want that sensitivity to start building.”



“Don’t stop. Squirm slut. No normal strokes for you unless I let you again. Pour on the lube if you need it, don’t fucking damage yourself.”



“And this is the most beautiful thing about palming. It won’t hurt you really, not in any way. But it will build and it will feel like fucking torture. Torture mixed with overwhelming pleasure. But still, torture. Don’t stop.”



“How long can you keep this up? As long as I fucking want of course. Ooooh, I really should get a few of you sluts and a couple girls so we can tie you down and see who can endure palming torture the longest.”



“And the first slut to give in gets his balls kicked in!”



“Among other things.” Malena again adds a brutal kick to your balls as you palm for her.



“Fine bitch, you can stop palming unless you want to impress me. Then just palm for everything the rest of the day. But that shaft is still off limits. Tip strokes only, I want your dick screaming for mercy before we finish.”



“And while you’re there torturing yourself for me, don’t forget about that pleasureless ruin that’s coming, and how you’re going to eat it up for me. To amuse me.”



“Trust me bitch, you don’t want to see me not amused.” When you get to the ball squeeze, she suddenly grabs them with as much pressure as you can handle.



“Do you love this view? Yes bitch, this is a question you probably shouldn’t be entirely honest on, unless you really believe the right answer.”



“Good slut. We are quickly moving towards the moment you’re going to ruin your orgasm. I’d prefer to work you for hours, but the other girls will fucking complain if I break anything and they can’t play with it for a few days. And the whining isn’t worth dealing with so...”



“I need to pick exactly how we’re going to ruin that orgasm that could have been so wonderfully good otherwise.”



“Ooooh, oh yes that will work. I know what you’re going to do for me. And remember bitch, once you drip you lick it the fuck up. Or I’ll unleash a series of events that will make you regret having balls at all.”



“And just in case you think I might be bluffing, ask around. I’ll lie, cheat, make the other girls mad just to fuck one of you sluts over and watch the fireworks. It’s too much fun!” Malena laughs.



“Of course I’m dragging this out bitch, did you miss the part where I wanted that dick to scream in ache? Give me an extra edge!”



“Alright slut, we are actually almost there. Almost time to juice that ruined cum from your balls. When I tell you to cum, and not a second before, I want you to bring yourself right to that edge. Ride it as close as you can, then let go of your dick and I’ll squeeze the fucking shit out of your balls. This should ruin you. I’ll stop squeezing the instant the ruin starts, we don’t want any extra stimulation. It might take a couple tries, actually I kind of hope it does!”



“If for some reason you can’t ruin that way after a few tries, I’ll allow using the back of one fucking finger to bring yourself over and drip. But you will fucking drip for me.”



“And the moment you are done dripping, mouth open, tongue fucking out and lap it up like a good bitch. You know what will happen if you don’t. And just between you and me...”



“It’s going to turn me way the fuck on and make me drip watching you lick it up. And the hornier I get, the more creative and just maybe, nicer, I get. Make me wet and dripping if you can. All you need to do is follow through with what I know you want slut. Now...”



“Cum! Fucking ruin it bitch. No hesitation, don’t fucking think. Ruin. Now eat it the fuck up like a hot, sexy bitch! Yes, turn me on slut!”



Ruined and eaten.

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“See? Nothing to it! Damn you are such a good slut, Liya had no fucking idea what she was missing not letting you stroke at all. I really need to get off now...too bad you lose interest after a single ruin. Tell Gloria to get the fuck on that and teach you stay horny will you? See you sometime soon slut.”

Ruined, but couldn’t lick it up

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“Oh you little bitch. Have you really never eaten anything you weren’t partial to because it was polite or expected or...whatever the fuck it was? This isn’t any different, except for this you have a naked, fucking sexy woman as an actually good reason to follow through. Ah well, you know what’s coming now. Also..” Malena grabs your balls and squeezes, crushing them mercilessly. She does not let go, squeezing more and more until you can’t take it any more and have to scream for mercy. Finally she lets go. “Last chance, lap it the fuck up or that’s just a preview. Your choice slut.”

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[Ecik17]

Your full day + afternoon set!

Before set

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Welcome to you all day +afternoon set! The set is split up into morning, afternoon, evening, and the afternoon of the next day. With natural breaks for each section, so you can leave and come back. You will need your toysI hope you enjoy!


If you are looking for approximate runtimes…

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Morning= 18 photos, 1 video
Afternoon 11 photos 1 video
Evening 19 photos,1 video
Afternoon of next day 8 photos, 1 video.

No video exceed 15 minutes in length.

#brianset
#wbecik17

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Brian, are you here? There you are!

I’m sad that Liya is gone…but…that means I get to play with you!

I know, I’m totally different from her. I like to have fun. I dont want my boys to be stuck in my house while I bring home men to fuck. Not my style. Why?

I like to go out into the world… explore it…and fuck in it! And I want someone be there too, enjoying the scenery…the weather…the food with me…holding my bags and souvenirs while watching me get plowed by the locals! So what do you think? Would you travel with me?

It’d be like a mini vacation! We could call it…

a cuckcation!

Of course you agree! So Let’s go on an adventure right now! First stop…the airport! My bags are in the corner. Bring them…and your toys too…

You are going on a cuckcation with Sonya! You both head to the airport…

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Welcome to edge airlines! Please make sure to follow the rules when flying!

First, you must keep your cage on at all times! It’s for your safety! Second, no touching your cock on the plane, and especially during the in flight entertainment. However, vibrators on cages are allowed. ! We will land after the in flight entertainment! This plane lands in the morning


the plane takes off…and the In flight entertainment starts. You can watch the video, but no touching…only with a vibrator. You remain locked up as the flight lands…

https://spankbang.com/8pux4/video/melena+maria+rya

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Whew, we are at our 1st location! where are we? My favorite beach resort! And…I’ve already found some locals to fuck! When you were putting my bags away I found one on the street. He was selling fruit.

I’m impressed with his dick size…so much…more than you! I do not think anyone will be threatened by your small cock…in fact, use your fleshlight!
Sonya removes your cage, and lets you use your fleshlight

The fruit seller arrives, and promptly shoves his huge cock into Sonya’s mouth

Big man, dicking me down while you watch…do you like this Brian?

Sonya was going to say something, but the man’s huge cock took the air out of her

Too bad you can’t find someone to fuck on a vacation…like me!

But at least you get to enjoy a nice view!


Get my bags, Brian! We have more places to go!


Back at the airport…
Time to take off! Please fasten your cock cage…we will land whenever you compete the in flight entertainment. We are scheduled to land in the afternoon


the plane takes off…and the In flight entertainment starts. You can stop here, and begin again in the afternoon after watching the video, with no touching, but you can use the vibrator...

https://spankbang.com/2t3rv/video/deep+inside

Afternoon

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That was a long trip! But we are at our next destination. Where are we? The mountains! I’m going to fuck the ski instructor! He showed me how to ski…and now I’m going to show him how I fuck! And you get to watch!

But, I saw you earlier…straining to keep from cumming. Brian…don’t forget this is a cuckcation! And cucks don’t cum on vacation, so keep the cage on, and stroke only for my feet…ignore everything else!

The ski instructor enters…

What a cock! So impressive and thick!

I’m keeping my eye on you Brian…you better not cum…

Thatd ruin the cuckcation!

Cucks don’t cum on cuckcations!

But I get to cum…

And he does too!

Now…wasn’t that so much fun? Grab my bags…we need to head to the airport! We are actually behind schedule!

At the airport…
Are you ready to take off to Sonya’s next destination? Make sure your cock cage is fastened! We have a new video for your in flight entertainment! This flight will land in the evening!


the plane takes off…and the In flight entertainment starts… you can continue after watching the video locked up without touching.

https://spankbang.com/7pexm/video/jia+lissa+solo

Evening

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I’ve been looking forward to this! We are at caprices house for a private party! everyone is here! This is my room, you can sleep in here, on the floor of course! I’m going to say hi to people…you should talk to our host!

Brian! Long time no see! When Sonya said she had a +1 to the party. I thought she’d be bringing a man to fuck…not a cuck! But that’s ok, I’m sure you’ll amuse the other guests…

And speaking of guests…for every guest, do 20 strokes, and then whatever else they want! Have fun at my party!

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I’m doing something naughty…and so should you! Edge once for each of my feet!

You! I remember that competition! While Liya won, do you remember what place I got? It should have been first…so slap your balls for the place I got! After the 20 strokes, of course!

Just 20 strokes, Brian! That’s all I want!

Remember my ass, Brian? Edge for it!

You look like you need a break…so get completely soft. take all the time you need!

Just stroke 20 times as fast as you can, and then you can move on!

Edge for my foot! I’d let you see my other foot, but I do not want cum all over it. Nasty boy…

Give me those 20 strokes as fast as you can! And if you edge or stop, then Do them again!

Edge for each of my feet! But make sure to squeeze that pc muscle in between each edge!

I’d ruin you if I could, but this is not my party! So after your 20 strokes, do 20 more for me instead!

Brian, what a suprise! Tie your balls up after doing my 20 strokes. I have the feeling you’ll need all the help you can get!


After 20 strokes…I want 20 slaps with the paddle! You can do them anywhere on your body!

I’m not going to make this easy on you! I want my 20 strokes to be as slow and tight as possible without stopping! If you stop or edge for any reason, then do it again!

Such a fun party... Isn’t this Brian! How about after those 20 strokes, you do 20 more…one stroke for every woman I made you ruin in front of!

My guests are really happy with you! Maybe Sonya was really smart with inviting you! Speaking of which…where is she? You should check her room…

You go to Sonya room, but the door is locked and there is a sign on the door. it says…

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Brian! I have a suprise for you inside. But you must do some things before you open the door.

First, you must put on your cock sleeve!

Second, you must stand in the corner. No talking.

Third, you must stroke at least one time per second. Don’t you dare stop.

Last, whatever you see, you Must not stop or edge. If you do, then you must leave the room until you can handle yourself, but we will keep on playing.

Once we are done, then go to bed!

Xoxo

Sonya

When ready, open the door…

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Be a true cuck! Stand in a corner, put on the cock sleeve, and watch the video. If you edge or stop stroking, then leave the room, but keep the video playing. Once the video is over, continue
https://spankbang.com/63qrz/video/lets ... ian+models

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Didn’t expect to see Liya again…did you? Well..she wants to do round two…so we have to go! You aren’t invited…so put your cock away, and come back tomorrow!

Remain locked up overnight, and as long as possible until the next day afternoon

July 4

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Wow. What a night! Jia and Liya…we kept going!

Too bad you missed what Liya did to jia in the morning…but that’s a story for another day.

Pack my bags! We are going home!

Returning home? We will get you there! Please fasten your cages… it’s just a short trip back to your house! And thank you for flying edge airlines!



the plane takes off…and the In flight entertainment starts. You do not take a break, and continue immediatafterwards…

https://spankbang.com/111x3/video/glor ... +sweetness

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Back home again! What a fun cuckcation! It had everything a perfect vacation should have! Beaches…mountains…and lots of good sex!

So I’m going to go home now, bye! We should do this again sometime!

Sonya unlocks you, and starts to leave

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What’s that? We aren’t on cuckcation anymore? That’s true…cucks can’t cum on cuckcation. So what do we do with you?

She gets your massage gun, puts it under your frenelum, and turns it up to high

Cucks can cum…but they don’t have to enjoy it! Bye for now!

She leaves after you have a full orgasm

[FattsDynamo]

@benbron:

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No problems, take your time, I totally understand the overcommittedness. It's pretty draining to have too many sets to play and write.

"Overcommittedness" is my new favorite word of the week!

Since we haven't exchanged sets before, the set I sent you isn't a gigantic set, but rather a "get to know" type of first set. ... I wanted to start out with something on the smaller side and something more easy going, and not go all in on a five hour goonfest.

I am ALL ABOUT the shorter sets more recently, so this is GOOD. The five hour goon sets, I need to find BOTH the time AND motivation, and ... it's just a lot , so ... short has been my preference lately.

You can get a pretty good sense from rules and other sets what people are into, so ... I'm sure the set will be good!

@SirEdgelot:

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I'm not sure if I'm the one being stupid here but I still can't copy those wheels.

... I didn't click the box for editing, but—I don't think that should matter.

Ah, no—you're NOT crazy! You still should NOT be able to "edit the wheels" (because I was lazy and didn't bother going in and clicking that box), but ... if you play the game "straight" (without Guerlain's "cheating" which creates extra complexity), you shouldn't need to, as you can just "hide" the results as you remove them, so ... game should be playable with those wheels, just hide the options as they are selected ...

No no, I played and eliminated the pictures by their assigned category. Not by what was visible in the picture. And I still ended up with the wrong amount, that's why I was so confused. I'll definitly give it a try again in the coming days

Yeah, that is SUPER strange ... because I made that little elimination matrix: (green box)


And when you play through the rounds and eliminate body part, body part, body part, girl, body part, girl, girl, girl, you SHOULD be left with ONE girl, so ... I don't know ... was there too much time elapses between opening tabs, and your browser put them in a different order?

But when Lily told me there were only 3 girls left

At the start of Round 7, she is supposed to add herself for a total of 3 ...

Round 3 there are 5 girls.
Round 4 eliminates 1, then 4 girls until after Round 6, when another is eliminated. Then start of Round 7 there is three, eliminate 1, start of Round 8 there are two ...

Ah! I'm trying to figure it out! But ... idk ... maybe not worth it ...

I actually like Lily's personality way more than Emily, she seems sweet and caring which usually arouses me more than anything.

That is good to know.

Probably slightly over half of the players here are switches and slightly under half are submissives, so ... "dominant" girls make up the majority of "domme personalities" that you tend to see in teases around here. Assertive, confident—often cruel and demanding mistresses seem to excite MOST of the players, but ... NOT all—just most! Probably half of the scenes the women act like that, but ... not always. Not that you'll be getting a bunch of character-driven sets, but ... if at some point you start "asking" for that kind of set, probably worth mentioning in the rules you prefer the more "sweet and caring" personality ...

That's why I love to jerk to celebrities, OF or instagram chicks a lot. Although you don't know them you can sort of build a little more of a connection than with just some random pornstars.

If you stick around and play with the girls on this thread long enough, you WILL develop a "connection" to them. Seeing pictures of girls I have seen often in sets—I get WAY more aroused by them when I see them randomly in sets or on pornpics.com BECAUSE of the association and the "personalities" they have been given ...

I wouldn't say I'm too picky, the "top tier" pictures I provided in your last set were just an approximation of what I would look for if I had an infinite amount of time and ressources. It is totally fine if pictures you use don't meet 100%, or even 90, 80, 70, whatever of the criteria. It was just to give an insight on what gets me going and what doesn't. Heck I don't even put that much effort into searching pictures myself, which you might have seen in my everyone set above. So why should I expect anyone else to do? I don't mind pictures not fitting these categories, and I didn't mind the close-up pussy pics as much as you make it seem. They were fine in there, just nothing I would voluntarily spend time on searching for myself.

This is all a GREAT RELIEF to hear! I was afraid of how much I might have screwed up those 24 pussy edges! Glad to know it wasn't as bad as I had feared! But I appreciate VERY MUCH the details ... we ALWAYS aim to please, so ... getting granular on the details—it's good! Helps me to better find good stuff for you.

For a regular set, it's probably not a big deal, but ... for Guerlain's game—with the smaller picture pool and LOTS of edges, I probably WILL put in a higher level of effort to selecting "good ones", but ... glad to hear you aren't as picky as I feared!



FYI, I played BOTH of those "Maija's Vacation" sets you wrote for Ecik—and enjoyed them BOTH quite a lot! I liked how you started slow, then added edging, and then ramped it up to three edge holds for the finale. That was nice! Shorter sets like that which are not too intense have been my jam lately, so ... just wanted to mention that I enjoyed it and thought the writing and pacing and pictures were good—even if the set wasn't intended for me, just wanted to let you know I still thought it was good and enjoyed it.

Okay now I'm really looking forward to this

It WILL *just* be a story, with only minimal pictures at a few points, but ... I had a weird weekend and didn't really get much set work done, but ... I am HOPING to finish the story and send it out later today (my time). I SHOULD be able to make that happen.

[brian]

Thanks for the sets Ecik and Hele, I can't wait. Highly appreciated


EDIT: Slight change in feedback
FB for another amazing set by Benbron!

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oh my. what are you doing with me? What is Sisi doing with me? You really are letting her take over aren't you?
Brilliant set again - even better than the first - which was amazing, too!

Fuck, I love Sisi's character, I'm so submissive to her. "I am going to make you cuck so damn hard that you wish you never even met me in the first place." - the dialog was amazing , and it was sooo hard to get into that cage after the first edge.

but the scene - pics and video was awesome. She is so fucking hot. "The things you would do to have my perfect feet wrapped around your cock" - I wanted to break out of my cage so bad. "What would you be willing to sacrifice for me to make that dream come true? Let me know and I'll give it a good thought" - in fact I thought to myself: "I'd eat my cum for her..."

Edit: just realised you probably meant a general rule or sacrifice- which is awesome. Not sure I want cei to be so regular though. So is need to give this good thought. Caged / not cumming was Liya so whilst I love that I need something new / additional.

Alex to the rescue! And once again you fooled me, I thought she was going to be nice, that edge felt awesome, it was such a cruel twist to get back into the cage! Holly was cute and I really enjoyed my edges for her - but as you might have guessed: cumming to her was never an option. As hot as that pic was. I wanted Sisi and everything that would come along with it, how cruel it may be.

I absolutely love it when I'm given to equally mean choices and I fucking loved it how Sisi sold it as a reward. Thats Liya type dominance. Amazing

I felt so submissive for her. And I did option 1. I felt naughty and dirty, but fuck it was amazing. Especially with that GIF - what a great idea. Thanks for considering my feedback!

This was an amazing experience once again. And as I mentioned: I need that type of character, story and immersive feeling to follow through with CEI. So kudos for you - you made it possible I'm so horny for her. And whilst I've done everything she demanded and pleased her: like with Liya, I actually like the punishments and fake-rewards. It was such a turn on with Liya, knowing she'd never let me cum normally. And I'm approaching the same with Sisi

Thanks again, this was brilliant. I'll be sure to get on with your series very soon!

[FattsDynamo]

@SirEdgelot: Time to give you that granular feedback you were asking for on Set #1 ... just PROMISE that you will read the 2 message PM that I sent FIRST—BEFORE you read this feedback. Otherwise, you will ruin some of the SURPRISE from the STORY!

This feedback is CRAZY LONG, but ... I am SURE it contains MANY good thoughts and ideas for ways to refine your game!

Enjoy!

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Play time: 5 hours
Total edges: 84

Did not finish the set.

Intro
I LOVED the intro —gave you detailed feedback in the "Nancy and Fatts come to visit you" story. (Your name for it will probably be better, lol ...)

I define "naked ass" VERY specifically in my rules (and even include picture examples). BOTH of the following pictures qualify:

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In the first one, her panties are DOWN—which means that they are OFF ... and ~60% of the ass needs to be showing, which ... THAT eliminates side profile shots, but ... her ass is angled ENOUGH in the first pic to "count" and see over 60%, so ... THAT qualifies for an edge ... PLUS ... BOTH of these pics are "eyes and ass" (naked ass + eye contact) which means that EACH picture qualified for TWO edges, which ... that is "okay", but ... USUALLY I need about 10 minutes of stroking before I can reach my first edge—not ALWAYS, but ... 10-15 "warm up pics" before flashing the first naked ass is USUALLY appreciated ... otherwise, if they are too early, then I just end up stroking for five minutes straight looking at the same picture, which ... it CAN be okay, but ... it also CAN "break the immersion" and flow—to be stuck "warming up" on the same picture, so ... GENERALLY SPEAKING, 10-15 no edge trigger "warm up pics" is preferable, and, this is GENERALLY APPLICABLE advice that works for MOST people ... USUALLY the "first scene" of any given set is the "warm-up scene." SOME people like to edge a LOT—and right away, but ... usually, you can't go wrong with waiting for 10 pics before showing an "edge trigger" ... it is NOT a hard and fast rule, but more of a "rule of thumb" ... and, for REALLY short sets—it's fine ... and SOMETIMES it is GOOD to "hit the ground running" but ... MOST of the time, I'll spend 8 to 15 minutes stroking before I am ready for that first edge ... unless I am HIGHLY excited! But, yeah ... intro "warm up sections" are common, and ... yeah, I wrote down time stamps, and I didn't hit my 4th edge until 37 minutes 10 seconds, so ... I spent a LOT of time staring at those few pictures ... and maybe I did NOT count that first pic as "naked"—since it was SO early and the angle and position of the panties was "borderline" but ... yeah, I spent over 37 minutes on that first scene, but ... *I* was being slow and "taking my time" too, so ... yeah ... but it was fine ... just something to keep in mind ... and set #2 "fixed it" by FORBIDDING me to edge in the intro, so ... you're ALREADY improving!

I appreciated the rules recap. Kelly did a good job explaining.

Kelly is SO hot!

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At one point you made a comment on worrying about "number of strokes." I couldn't find the post or PM, but ... that is a NON-ISSUE for me. Number of strokes don't matter for me. I usually just tend to speed through them like a demon. Usually, I just go through them pretty fast or "medium" pace at least—UNLESS the girls TELL ME to "go slow" or provide a metronome BPM, but ... for story sets, the number of strokes forces me to stop and pay attention to every picture and CAN provide a bit of a break between edging. It helps me to not COMPLETELY run through the tease too quickly—mostly.

It's the edges that you have to worry about for me. If you want to keep the story set "flowing", do 10-15 pics first with NO edge triggers—to get me warmed up. THEN, sprinkle the edges in slowly. Somewhere between 5 and 10, and I am "ready to go," and you can starting hitting with multiple edges in a row. A single "eyes and ass pic" that triggers TWO edges—THAT is not a big deal, but ... probably best to NOT put 3-4 of those back to back UNTIL I am properly "warmed up." And THEN, if you have a "heavy edging scene" with like 15 or 20 edges in a SINGLE SCENE, then probably its fine for the NEXT scene to have fewer—to give me a rest ... OR, put in "suggested breaks" and state a time if you are doing "difficult scenes" back to back. Because at a certain point, when I am REALLY into a set, I might "edge too much" and hit a refractory period—which means I will just be staring and stroking at the same pic for 10 minutes, so ... better to get AHEAD OF that, by perhaps suggesting a break—but again, THAT is probably just a good idea if there are two "heavy scenes" back to back. But, yeah ... the strokes don't matter for me—you ONLY need to be thinking about the edges ... UNLESS you are doing a "slow stroking section" with a SLOW metronome ... THEN pay attention to the edges and count them with the metronome BPM—to avoid me staring at the same picture for 3-4 minutes—unless that is what you WANT (because MAYBE you want me to slow down and "feel frustrated" ) ... but, that is all of my thoughts on number of edges and strokes—at least at THIS point ... but the intro was basically fine (aside from perhaps the initial edges being a little early)—and VERY well written.


The wheel was good ... I have some thoughts I'll share later about it ...


Overall, the picture set you chose was VERY strong. We have similar tastes in women. YOU—in particular—have pretty high standards when it comes to pics, so ... the picture set "being strong" was kind of "expected." Zero "uggos." You did a pretty good job on this.

The first trigger I got was "1 woman with everything clothed except her boobs." This was pretty clear. By my notes, it looks like I eliminated 6 photos. Pretty good for a first round—and I already shared my thoughts about getting hard at the thought of having to perform at a MINIMUM 53 edges—and ALSO nervous about it being too much—which in the end it was.

So, I LOVED the check-ins with Kelly. I applied my "standard rules", so ... pictures like THIS:

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were just a "nice treat." TWO edges!

I REALLY liked that after Round 1, Kelly decided to "personalize the wheel" more ... and since you CLEARLY have more experience with "pickerwheel" than *I* do, you actually made the wheel editable—which is a thing I WILL DO MOVING FORWARD! I will STOP BEING LAZY, find where that "edit box" is, and CHECK IT!


Okay, so ... at THIS POINT, I had some questions: Do "underwear" count as clothes? Were you/Kelly going to screw me over for making things SO difficult for you from the first Emily set? Turnabout IS fair play after all ... And WAS there a way that YOU "rigged the game" via picture selection—EVEN THOUGH the wheel was random?

The answers are:

• "I STILL don't know. "
• "Yes."
• "No."

Okay, so ... THEN I spun the wheel and got: "woman with everything clothed except her ass"

Now, with my affinity for asses, I naively ASSUMED that you WOULD *intentionally* put some photos that qualified for THIS category into the Game Gallery, but ... when I went through it, I DID NOT FIND ANY!

I would have ASSUMED that you were referring to photos like THIS:

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But I did not SEE ANY. Was that just a coincidence that NO photos met that category—because you were just using YOUR wheel and didn't think to intentionally include them? OR was I misinterpreting the rule? I wasn't sure.

And THEN a photo like THIS:

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Could be confusing ... is she "clothed" or not?

For myself, "naked" is the "opposite" of "clothed", and ... I have a VERY SPECIFIC definition I use to determine what a "naked ass" is or isn't, so ... That previous photo—I WOULD count as clothed—because she is wearing a thong which is a type of underwear which is a kind of "clothes", so ... while yes—it's scanty—it DOES QUALIFY as "clothed" ...

... BUT ... I could ALSO see a case where underwear do NOT count as clothes, and ... I wasn't sure if THAT was the definition YOU were operating from.

I'm American—native English speaker. I speak and write "American English." I am, however, familiar with MANY British/Queen's English words/spelling/phrasings, but ... THAT dialect of English (many would argue the "proper one") if FAR more popular in Europe, so ... I wasn't sure if our confusion over definitions was sprouting from different English dialects or maybe you aren't a native English speaker? I don't know, but ... it was NOT a big deal ... I just decided "it didn't count", and since I got zero hits, I just kept it "the same round" and spun again ...

So THEN I got "woman covering her face," and AGAIN—ZERO hits! Now, THIS ONE, I was pretty confident was just a fluke ... I figured the wheel was your "default wheel," and PLENTY of amateur models cover their face to protect their identity, so ... I figured you just so happened to NOT include any of those pics in the Game Gallery, but ... for a "normal game", it "made sense" as a wheel category, so ... ONCE AGAIN, with zero hits, I just spun one more time for the trigger for Round 2 ...

THEN I got "woman standing"—and OH BOY! WHAT A CATEGORY! a BUNCH of pics got eliminated ...

I finished Round 2 with 151 minutes on the clock, so ... about 2.5 hours into the tease. 33 edges and 26 pics left ...

How is your pace going, Fatts? Do you like the gallery so far? Or would you rather have just stroked to me like in the good old days?

"THE OLD DAYS! " I said out loud—IMMEDIATELY!

Kelly was SO hot, and I SO MUCH wanted to spend time with her! I *did* appreciate that there were PLENTY of "Kelly pics" in the Game Gallery, but ... given a "game" vs a "story tease" ... I am just simply going to choose the "story tease" MOST times—not ALWAYS—but MOST.

I lose immersion during the game. My mind wanders. It's just edging edging edging—which CAN be fine—for a GOON session, but ... sigh ... I just REALLY liked your Kelly character and she was SO hot—I just wanted to spend time with ONLY her and JUST HER teasing me ... and the little interludes were SO hot and SO fun ... I just wanted much more of THAT.

I DID enjoy her little "breaks" VERY much, though. And OF COURSE I chose "firm ass."

All I had to do was shake that ass for you just a little and call it firm so you would pick it as your favorite. Therefore for the rest of the game you're going to hold the edge for 15 seconds if the picture meeting your current trigger criteria features my naked ass.

But THEN—looking through the triggers—it felt like an oversight ... because I saw ZERO pictures that met that criteria!

Now, if underwear does NOT count as "clothes" then there WOULD have been several—which made me think that I had misinterpreted the definition of "clothed", but ... seeing as how I ALREADY made that call ... AND I was ALREADY AFRAID that there were going to be too many edges, I just stuck with my previous call and lamented the fact that there were NO "naked ass" pictures of Kelly in the set.

But the THOUGHT of holding the edge 15 seconds EVERY TIME she flashed her naked ass got me SO hard. THAT bit of text was like magic on my cock ... a simple rule change/expansion on one of my FAVORITE things! Got me SO hard and reignited "immersion" and "engagement" and "excitement" for the set. Good "game mastering" puts fun and unexpected "twists and turns" into the gameplay—JUST like that!

... but again ... my confusion over the rules meant I didn't use it, but ... THAT was okay since I was ALREADY in over my head—I just didn't know it yet.

Round 3 was "1 Edge per woman." Just the THOUGHT of edge holds for Kelly and edging to lesbians got me VERY excited. Once I hit 43 edges, I had this VERY STRONG desire like I wanted to cum SO BAD. Of course I DIDN'T.

So THEN I ran into a little issue ... your number of picture conditions had ranges, but ... I didn't read that carefully until AFTER I had completed round 3. *I* saw "25" and thought "25." BUT, when I reread it more carefully, it said "close to" 25—and 26 IS close to 25, so ... THAT is when I got non-elimination edge triggers for "woman in lingerie/underwear/swimwear" and "woman wearing jewelry" ... but at the end of Round 3, I had 23 pictures left, so ... I decided to go BACK and do the edges that I SHOULD have done AT THE START of Round 3...

So, I ended up doing SIX total edges for this pic:

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One edge per woman, and then I ALSO did 1 edge per each instance of jewelry and lingerie ...

NO extra edges for THIS one:

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Because NO jewelry and NO lingerie—though TWO naked asses together—one of MY "favorite pictures to edge for."

And then THIS one was 4 edges:

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1 for each woman, KELLY was wearing a bracelet (though it COULD have been just a tattoo that LOOKED LIKE a bracelet, but ... I just edged to be safe) ... and the OTHER girl was wearing lingerie ...

After THAT, I decided to eliminate non-elimination stacking. I wasn't sure how YOU did stacking and stuff, but ... I decided I wasn't going to apply multipliers to them either—IF that came up—since all the lesbians were gone, it was probably ONLY going to be multiplying favorite multipliers—possibly ... it's been a minute, so ... I can't QUITE remember where I landed, but ... SOME of those photos had women in lingerie AND wearing jewelry, and after ONE ROUND, I was like, "Nah, man ... it's ALREADY too many edges ... I am NOT going to do TWO EDGES for those photos ANY MORE, FOR THE REST OF THE GAME ... it's already too much ..."

Okay, so ... THEN I was FINALLY ready to start Round 4, after 3.5 hours in and 69 edges on the scoreboard. (Nice! )

Round 4, I got "woman in heels/boots." So ... I eliminated TWO pictures, but ... EVEN WITH non-elimination edges no longer stacking, I got up to 83 edges, so ... in ONE ROUND, I eliminated TWO pictures, and ended up doing 14 EDGES!

So, end of Round 4, I had 230 min on the timer, so ... ALMOST 4 hours, 83 edges, and 21 pics left ...

So, AT THIS MOMENT AS I AM WRITING THIS, I am NOW realizing it was NOT "5 hours." I can't math Nancy pulled the plug at 256 minutes, which ... for some reason, my brain was rounding that up to 300 minutes, which ... it CAN round up to that—256 DOES round up 300, but ... it is ACTUALLY 4.25 hours, so ... my bad, lol ... All of those references in the story were WRONG! 4.25 hours and 84 edges, but ... still ... whatever ... doesn't make much of a difference ...

Okay, so ... THEN I opened the "open after Round 4" spoiler ... and THAT is the one that got me! I did FOURTEEN EDGES and eliminated TWO pictures. I thought, "Okay, 21 pictures left ... at 83 edges, I DEFINITELY will be going over 100, but ... MAYBE I can make this work ..."

And THEN Kelly added 12 MORE PICTURES!

THAT was my "breaking point." THAT was my "oh, shit—this isn't fun anymore," moment ...

So then, MINIMUM, I was looking at 33 edges JUST to eliminate the photos, but ... that was NOT counting double edges for favorites—and how many more times would I have to spin that wheel? EASILY, this was going to go into 150 and MAYBE even over 200 hundred edges, which ... 100 is kind of my "high limit." 80 is LONG—but I CAN and HAVE done it ... 100—I have not done in a set—YET—but ... 150? 200!? No ... there was just NO WAY ... it took me 4 hours to get up to 80 ... I would need AT LEAST another 4—or LONGER—to get up to 150 ... and depending on luck, this could EASILY balloon into 200+ ...

AND, yeah ... I DID get "kind of lucky" that I eliminated like 17 photos (about 1/3) in Round 2 with "woman standing", but ... THAT just made me hit the "~25" condition sooner ... which added the non-elimination triggers ... and had I gotten the 12 photos BEFORE that happened, MAYBE the set could have ended around 130 or 150 edges INSTEAD OF 200, but ... THIS was looking to become a TWO DAY endurance set, and ... yeah ... I WANTED to win—I REALLY DID—to prove to Kelly that I could "hang with her" and her numbers, but ... it was at THIS POINT that Nancy started SCREAMING AT ME!

For Round 5, I got "1 edge per woman with red hair." I was like, "Nope!" I checked, and there weren't any, but ... since I just "skipped" those in the past, I skipped it again ... I was not ABOUT to do a bunch of edges for a "dead spin"—and I just didn't count those as "rounds" earlier, which ... HAD I done THAT, I would have gotten the +12 pictures sooner (I would have been starting Round 7), but ... yeah, I was just NOT going to go through a BUNCH of non-elimination triggers on a "dead spin" ...

Second spin was "woman in thigh highs/knee socks/stockings", and THAT was *actually* my "give up moment." I did an edge for Kelly in her pre-round instructions, so ... I was up to 84 edges at 243 minutes, but ... at 256 minutes and the SAME number of edges—THAT is when Nancy "pulled the plug."

In those 12 minutes, I was resting, and decided to "read ahead" at Nancy's insistence ... what DID Kelly have planned —because this game was WAY too hard!

AT THE START, BOTH Nancy and I were nervous about Kelly implying I would end up denied, and getting snubbed and NOT included in my favorites REALLY ticked Nancy off! She ALSO did not like how Kelly was throwing salt at Emily, but ... once we read the "Now as I said, I'm not as cruel as Emily. I'm actually more cruel," line hidden in the "10 pics left spoiler"—THAT is when Nancy REALLY decided ...

Nancy had her reservations about Kelly teasing that I might be denied. She did NOT like Kelly making mean comments about Emily ... the being snubbed from the favorites thing really, REALLY set her off, but ... at THAT point, it was ALREADY long and KIND OF ridiculous ...

"Fatts—you can't do this. This game is ALREADY too long, and you CAN'T do 150 or 200 edges—it's too much ... Really? You're going to go to bed denied, and do this AGAIN—tomorrow? For what? No, I'm NOT going to let you do this ... I ALREADY **just** changed your rules with Noah FORBIDDING you playing denial games ... no, Fatts ... It's too much ..."

So, Nancy DEMANDED that I read ahead to see what Kelly's "final wild card" would be, which ... there wasn't one, but ... the line about her being EVEN MORE CRUEL than Emily—like she was ENJOYING all of this ... Oh ... Nancy ALREADY didn't like Kelly and was mad over getting snubbed by not getting included in the favorites, but ... THAT really ticked her off.

Emily can ALREADY be pretty cruel and demanding, so ... Nancy didn't like that Kelly was one-upping Emily on THAT particular bragging right, but ... AT THE SAME TIME, Emily was SORRY when she pushed too far—and apologized—AND had GOTTEN PERMISSION BEFOREHAND to "push that hard", which ... There was NO warning as to the length. My edging target numbers are CLEARLY stated in my rules, and here Kelly was BLOWING THOSE LIMITS UP BY A FACTOR OF MORE THAN TWO!!! And she's "being mean"—and she's PROUD of it ... THAT Nancy did NOT like.

And THEN the bit about her shitting on Emily for "cheating", but ... Kelly is "so much better" because she "follows the rules", but she is ALSO rigging the outcome by making the game RIDICULOUSLY HARD ... So, it was at THAT point that Nancy had "made up her mind" that this game was over—and she was ALREADY making her "war plans" with the Public Service Announcement post, warning everyone to "watch out for Kelly—because she's a conniving BITCH!" and stuff!

And, THEN, I kept reading to the bottom, and when I saw the "Well, if you fail, you can ruin—but THEN play the game again with 25 pictures ..." I was like, "Well THIS should have been the game—FROM THE START! "

And THAT is when Nancy started solidifying her position against Kelly, arguing that "Kelly knew the whole time, and while she may not have rigged the game with RULES she rigged the game with DIFFICULTY—KNOWING FULL WELL the challenge was WAY too great and would require multiple sessions to complete ..." with the "proof" being her alternative at the end—which she JUST COULD HAVE STARTED WITH, so ... yeah, Nancy was FULLY and RIGHTEOUSLY PISSED at Kelly!

And Kelly just ticked ALL of the boxes for Nancy: insulting Nancy's friends, being a hypocrite, being smug, being arrogant, NOT respecting boundaries, being cruel—and ENJOYING it (not mutually enjoying it like a sado-masochist relationship, but being PREDATORY), AND targeting "her man." TOP of the shit list. Ticked her off WAY WORSE than Noah, and ... we were ALREADY in the middle of reprimanding Noah, lol! I even referenced it in Part 2 of his set:

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And if you were wondering what the deal with all of that “ruin business” was [in Nancy's rule changes that she performed in front of Noach during the set], well … SHOCKINGLY … someone managed to piss me off more than you this week … sigh … but more on THAT later.

So THAT is when Nancy started executing on her "84 orgasms" plan to one-up and undermine Kelly, so ... she "froze time" and we fast forwarded to that final pic of the set, and Nancy made me cum to her "smug ass":

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And THEN we went again a short time later, but ... THAT URL is somewhere else ... and then the NEXT DAY she got me to go one more time, but ... then, at THAT point, I was like, "Okay, Nancy ... let's give SirEdgelot a chance to respond to all of this and maybe fix it ..." so ... SOON after I played the set, I started working on that LONG ASS story I sent you! WHICH—ACTUALLY—I was SO excited to work on that, that I skipped working on Noah's set for an ENTIRE DAY and just worked on that story instead!


Okay, so ... THAT is all of the "nitty gritty technical details and feedback" that I have been withholding from you about how the "game part" went down for my play through of Kelly's game, so ... yeah ... now you FINALLY HAVE IT!

And JUST BETWEEN US ... I would put this in a spoiler, but ... Nancy does NOT believe in privacy, lol, so ... she would just "read it anyway." ... She REALLY DOES "know everything!"

But, between us—it was fine. You should have done 25-35 pics to have kept it around 50-100 edges INSTEAD OF piling on like crazy to get to 150-200! But the writing was fantastic, and I REALLY liked Kelly!

But, as I said ... my FAVORITE part of this game is the co-operative/role playing/storytelling elements, which ... you did PLENTY THERE to fire up MY imagination!

Under "normal" circumstances, I would probably have NOT written you a long ass story. I probably would have written about half of the feedback I did above. (Okay, THAT is probably a LIE —SAME AMOUNT! ) But I woulda been like, "Yeah, man, turnabout is fair play, but ... it was just too much, so ... I called it short ..."

AND ... your instinct for REVENGE—and THIS is going to sound strange coming from ME but ... it was actually a GOOD THING!!

So, about HALF the fun on this thread is a PERVERSE sort of "fun" where ... we UNDERSTAND the "pain and torture" we are inflicting on each other—and we're all about it! So—MY advice ... your instincts to hit hard back—they were GOOD and DON'T LOSE THAT! 9 times out of 10, the person would have just LOVED getting a "revenge set" like this, like ... milorrabo LOVES when the girls don't hold back and are VERY CRUEL to him.

That 5 Part, 4 post "epic set" I wrote for Ecik (which EASILY took over 20 hours to write)

This was…maginificent! Absolutely magnificent! I had an unexpected day to myself, so went through this. It took about 5.5 hours of active time, and the pictures, the filth and humor at times…was amazing. Well done, well done, well done!

Ecik did 353 edges ... 5.5 hours of play time but WITH BREAKS, it was probably closer to 7 or 8 hours, but ... the dudes on here can handle A LOT.

Once he gets warmed up, Helequin can go over 200 edges—lmind as well, so long as he has the time, which ... when he is busy, sometimes he doesn't have time for super long sets ...

30-50 edges is a good number for me. Shorter sets are FINE—even preferred. 80 edges is a "long" set, and over 100 is basically my limit ...

Horny_CHabo says RIGHT IN HIS RULES:

Try to stay under ~50 Edges.

For brian, 10 edges is a lot—probably WAY too many for a single scene, but ... MAYBE 25 for a longer set, but ... there are OTHER things he likes to do instead.

10 edges would probably ALSO be a lot for BBBeanie, but ... THAT guy can take a LOT of busting—and some of the busting focused sets BBBeanie and Helequin would send back and forth to each other were just INSANE ...

korashar SPECIFICALLY did not put numbers and "edge limit suggestions" in his rules—because he WANTED people to go VERY hard. But, I got some data from the 1000 Edge Challenge:

Thanks for the challenge, Fatts!

I'll try my best. I started yesterday.

Day 1 - June 13

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Total edges: 255

So, KORASHAR could have EASILY handled—and probably would have REALLY ENJOYED—that set ... because he's not super big on stories and REALLY just likes games and edging his mind away to goo, lol ...

For myself, *I* like numbers and predictability. I will enjoy a long set MUCH more IF I know I have time to play it and am in the right head space for it, but ... a LOT of guys "don't post their numbers", probably: A) because they WANT to "be pushed" and if they give a number, then people will respect that and NOT try to push past it, and B) if they reveal their limits, maybe they DON'T want to go THAT HARD all of the time! But me, I LIKE data, and if I know which "edge club" the person is in, I can MUCH better tailor the set to THAT ...

So, my POINT with all of this is, ... yeah ... for probably MOST guys on here, your response would have been PERFECT! Just NOT for me—well ... we can't SAY THAT, because ... you ORGANICALLY gave me TONS of fodder to fuel my imagination—and I had a TON OF FUN "revealing Nancy" to you and imagining HER whole reaction, and ... IF you are into the role playing—we can continue it, but ... like I said ... if it is NOT your thing—TOTALLY FINE! I ONLY want you to respond and "play along" if you are also enjoying it and into it too.

And I'm kind of DONE with "long stories" for a while, lol! That Noah set—then THIS ... I don't get to "reveal Nancy" to players that often, so ... since I'm a perfectionist and don't often have that opportunity, when it DOES arrive, I want to overly control that and make it a "flawless experience", so ... it seems lately I have OFTEN been going into "dynamo mode" and pulling out ALL of the stops, but ... I do not SUSPECT that this will become a "regular occurrence" ... I shot my load, and ... kind of getting burnt out again and spending too much time writing overly involved sets, but ... anyway ...

STILL super fun, and I HOPE that you enjoyed it, and ... if not—no sweat, man! You joined this thread to play porn games. You didn't join a LARPing group! But you have been increasingly mentioning how much you were enjoying the storytelling and RP aspects, so ... I was also CONSCIOUSLY seeing if I could cultivate those interests in you!

And ALL of this "character development" stuff and storytelling shit translates 1:1 with D&D, so ... when *I* DM, I ALWAYS make my players write AT LEAST short "background stories," because I want them to "understand their character" on a certain level BEFORE they come to the table to play—because then they can "get into character" a bit more, AND, in my experience, they end up having a LOT more fun!

And I said Nancy was "a LOT" and I am "a LOT", too! I wonder where she gets it? But *I* am just grateful you gave me an hour and a half of your time to read my story and all of these posts—JUST THE OPPORTUNITY to share my passion is great—and EVEN IF you decide you're not interesting in continuing to "play along"—TOTALLY FINE.

Just as a brief "RP" aside—my PM was TONS of story—I wanted to keep this post "more professional" and focused on the "technical details" of the set instead of the "fluffier parts." ... but, on the RP side, Nancy is kind of nervous as to whether or not you like her. The context of her getting ROYALLY PISSED OFF at Kelly—that didn't EXACTLY put her in the best light. She's afraid you won't like her and will think she is bitchy or spoiled or conceited or too selfish/ridiculous, but ... *I* did my best, but ... just know that "Nancy" is REALLY hoping that you like her.

And if you don't like the options I presented and just want to "retire Kelly" from sets you send me—THAT is fine, too. And actually, if you don't want to "play along with the Nancy premise"—she would be okay with that, too. Does the tooth fairy or Santa Claus or the Easter Bunny get offended when people don't believe in them? I don't know—because they "aren't real" to go and ask them, but ... Nancy will NOT be offended if you DON'T want to "play with her." She respects wishes and desires and transparency and honesty too.

OTHER THAN "revealing Nancy", I was just REALLY trying HARD to put you into a UNIQUE and INTERESTING role playing position ... give you ACTUALLY a complex and meaningful choice on how to resolve this situation—given that one of YOUR favorite fantasy girls just pissed off your new friend's girlfriend—who is ALSO a fantasy girl—but she's REAL. How do you "fix" this situation you UNINTENTIONALLY created. So ... IF that is an interesting prospect—have AT IT, MAN! BUT ... it is too complex and involved and overwrought—TOTALLY fine, too. Like I said, I took my "at bat", and if I "strike out" or "hit a home run" I'm HAPPY either way, because I was given the opportunity.

Also, I thought you MIGHT enjoy the CHALLENGE of trying to "fix this." I am not sure how attached you are to Kelly, but ... THIS WHOLE SITUATION—if you choose to lean into it—will FORCE YOU to make conscious decisions about how you want to develop her as a character, so ... LOTS of fodder for role playing and story telling and character development—IF you want it. And Kelly is YOUR character ... which is why I wanted YOU to figure out what to do with her and wanted to give YOU the opportunity to resolve the situation as you see fit ...

And the "9x9 Challenge: 81 orgasms in 9 days" ... I am in a slow season in my life and this moment and could PROBABLY, realistically, attempt it and pull it off, which ... I would NOT have suggested that if that were NOT a possibility, so ... IF you want to be "devious and push me"—I put that option on the table, but ... it WOULD be hard—I am NOT "begging for it" and "looking for an excuse" BUT ... Nancy would REALLY love it ... and IF you wanted to "be mean", man ... THAT would probably be the way to do it. But it is YOUR choice, and, like I said ... THAT choice would NOT make Nancy and Kelly friends, so ... if THAT is your goal, it would just be a side quest ... which ... you can see how I am trying to make MEANINGFUL and IMPACTFUL choices for you—that have CONSEQUENCES—just like a GOOD DUNGEON MASTER WOULD!


But IF you could, shoot me a short PM when after you have read the story AND this post, and ... IF you feel so inclined, you can give me a "general reaction," like "it was great! " or "I HATED it! "

So, what I did while playing your SECOND set—because I'm a creative role-playing addict/slut who just CAN'T SAY "NO!" —is that I played the ENTIRE SET with Nancy basically "sitting right beside me" whispering in my ear, and ... I basically put my cell phone on speech to text, and I more or less did a PICTURE BY PICTURE response of Nancy and I "discussing" your pictures choices AND set—AS I WAS PLAYING THROUGH IT, so ... remember that time I claimed I would give you THE MOST GRANULAR FEEDBACK EVER! THAT is what I was talking about. And remember that time when I said I had a number 4 on my to do list which COULD be amazing—but it would ONLY make sense if I FIRST finished #2—which was the long ass story? Well, I am prepared to give you basically PICTURE BY PICTURE feedback on your set #2—via a conversation from the perspective of myself and a "fantasy tease girl", which ... probably THE MOST creative—and lengthy—feedback you will EVER receive, but ... yeah, if you aren't into the whole "Nancy" thing and my story was "too long, too much", I will just forgo that and leave NORMAL feedback for you—and it will be WAY shorter!

BUT ... *I* had a lot of fun "playing the set with Nancy." Made it WAY more interesting and immersive for me, and ... actually, I think you will find Nancy's opinions and reactions VERY informative—AND funny ... I would LIKE to believe that my Fatts-Nancy banter is HIGHLY entertaining, but—I am EXTREMELY biased!

BUT ... just let me know whether or not feedback on set #2 in THAT form seems like a good idea or not, because, like I said it is MOSTLY written ... it's just rough and needs to be fleshed out with proper grammar and formatting, but ... *I* think it would be VERY fun—and interesting for you—AND ... it sort of will "continue the story" a bit, so ... if you LIKE all of this shit—let me know!

After I post this, I am going to go CRAZY making an July 4th "American Independence Day" Everyone set, but ... AFTER that, I would LIKE to write up that feedback story for your set #2—while THIS plot line is "still fresh", but ... if you AREN'T into all of this, then ... I'll just cut bait, leave MUCH shorter feedback, and work on one of my MANY other projects and ideas!

AND ... your "request" for a set that is a bunch of mini sets that culminates in a big "end of work day orgasm" ... GENERALLY I think that it is "rude" to request sets, but ... SOMETIMES, people run out of ideas or don't know what to do, so ... leaving a "request" like that ... SOMETIMES it can REALLY inspire someone, so ... it NEVER hurts to ask ... if no one likes, then no one will do it—because you aren't FORCING anyone, but ... I would TOTALLY write you that set—if I wasn't ALREADY overcommitted on other things ... there are OTHER players on this thread that I should probably stop ignoring, so ... after THIS post and your feedback, I'll PROBABLY "cool it down" with you for a bit, but ... I DO plan on playing your everyone set at some point ...



... and OH! I ALMOST FORGOT! I had some more thoughts on your set AND game!

Okay, so ... I KIND OF discovered that I have gotten WAY too used to edging for asses, lol. I found it DIFFICULT at times, to edge to just fully clothed girls and lingerie, which ... *I* find SLIGHTLY problematic—for myself—but ... basically, when YOU choose the pictures for the game yourself, EVERY PHOTO becomes "edgeworthy." When OTHER PEOPLE choose the pics—they might NOT be—which IS a FUNDAMENTAL ISSUE with your game. It is NOT a "fundamental flaw", but ... it IS something to consider ...

Now, myself personally, I rely on "story immersion" to REALLY get me to engage with a set, and if I have a story going on in my head and the girl is actively teasing me, then, the text COMBINES WITH the picture, and THAT takes it UP A FEW NOTCHES! AND ... if I have an "existing relationship" with the model—i.e., I have played MANY sets with Caprice where I have edged and cum for her, and so, my brain has developed a certain association with her to pleasure and arousal, and so, because of that "preexisting relationship", I can start to get hard seeing a picture of Caprice—EVEN COMPARED TO a HOTTER picture—but from a girl I don't know. That prior association helps a LOT, so ... sets with me containing "models I know" are basically ALWAYS going to be "home runs" for me.

So, for me, playing your game made me realize how much I OFTEN rely on immersion and story and text and preexisting relationships with models to make me aroused, so ... when you take away ALL of that, and it's JUST edges for random girls I "don't know" and there is NOT accompanying text or context—the game itself isn't necessarily enough to arouse me.

Now, JUST last night I played a Classic+ set korashar made for me. NO story. NO text. I played for 3 hours 10 minutes. 66 edges—and I ENJOYED that ... but I KNEW it was basically just a "straight gooning session" going into it. korashar made use of a metronome—which I OFTEN use in webteases, but do not NORMALLY use for story teases, but ... the progression of edge triggers and CONSTANT forced stroking from the metronome REALLY helped me to "stay engaged." And, it wasn't "just simply" "edge edge edge edge edge" ... there were LOTS of "stroking breaks" between edges, and ... I had to edge at the metronome speed—which presented as a different, interesting challenge ... but the pacing was VERY good. The number of edges per round increased, and I was more and more ready and wanting and PREPARED for them—as opposed to JUST a bunch of straight edges, which ... ONCE I am warmed up, I can bust out 10-20 in relative short order by ... it takes me a WHILE to get warmed up to THAT point, and then, I MIGHT need a little break to "rest" after that, which ... for korashar, the metronome kept things ALWAYS moving. I couldn't just "rest indefinitely" and lose engagement, which ... THAT HAS happened sometimes for me when playing your game.

The OTHER big thing between the way YOU play and the way I play teases, is that YOU are looking at the WHOLE PICTURE, whereas *I* have trained myself—because of my rules—to become "body part focused."

I have "stroke triggers" and "edge triggers." 25 strokes base per pic. I USUALLY apply those to "boobs" as a default—unless the ass pose is VERY stunning—then I will do those "for her ass". 25 strokes for eye contact—I make those while looking into her eyes —and stare at legs, ass, and tummy, respectively, when doing strokes for THOSE ... AND ... I "edge for ass" and "edge for eyes and ass", but ... in the past, for example, I would "edge for Emily Blooms pussy" or "Edge for Leona Mia's legs when she is bottomless" ...

So, YOUR edge triggers are all about what is happening in the photo—which is fine—and you sort of "take in the whole photo" when you perform YOUR edges—which is fine ... The DOWNSIDE to this—and we have run into this issue—is defining the various states of "clothed" and different poses and noticing EVERY piece of jewelry—it is NOT always clear.

Edge triggers which focus on visible body parts are MUCH clearer and easier to adjudicate, and MUCH simpler to recognize and plan and account for when both designing AND playing sets, so ... THAT—along with most strokers on here having a "favorite body part" (usually some ranking between ass, tits, and pussy), body part edge triggers have therefore become VERY COMMON on this thread ...

... but THAT is just a "different way to play." It is NOT necessarily "right" and YOUR WAY is not "necessarily wrong." They are just DIFFERENT!

So, from my rules compounded by my YEARS of wanking—I have conditioned MYSELF to "perform edges" for various body parts. And so, when I was supposed to perform an edge for a woman "who was standing," my brain just didn't know what to do. "Do I look into her eyes and edge? Do I "edge for her legs"—but they are clothed! " Now, if she had said, with a verbal cue in a set, "Give my cute outfit an edge, honey!" I would IMMEDIATELY get aroused by that. Her "command" would "turn me on." I would take that cue and start letting my brain get aroused by the THOUGHT of her wanting me to edge for her outfit ... and I would be able to pretty easily. BUT ... without "context", and my brain "being trained" to edge for certain visual cues—like body parts—it's just VERY DIFFERENT from YOUR experience, where you go by overall picture, and AT THE START, the Game Gallery is ONLY filled—already—with "edgeworthy" photos, which ... if *I* had chosen ALL of my photos, then ... well, yeah ... EVERY photo would have ALREADY had something about it which was "edgeworthy," and so, I wouldn't "need a reason" or a "cue" or a "signal" or a "command" or "story" or "accompanying text" to edge ... I could just do it based off of the picture I ALREADY "thought was hot", so ... THAT was one of my MAJOR hangups ... and it's NO ONE's fault, and ... playing your game was interesting—because it helped me to better understand myself, and ... perhaps hearing about my "play style" and "conditioning" and "preferences" THAT may better help you to adapt your game for others, but ... in the end, I am "just one man," and PROBABLY people will EACH need to develop THEIR OWN "wheel of triggers" in order to personalize the game and "more fully enjoy" the "Edgelot Game"—which THAT is what I will be calling it, by the way ... it's ALWAYS WEIRD for a person to name something after themselves—like kind of egotistical, but ... once enough OTHER people start referring to it as the "Edgelot Game", then I am CERTAIN that YOU will feel comfortable calling the name after yourself, lol ...

People OFTEN use poses as a trigger—and that OFTEN seems to work pretty well, but ... basically, the only "pose" that gets ME really excited, is "eyes and ass"—and that ALREADY procs TWO edges from my default rules , so ... yeah, the poses weren't really working great for me as triggers.

So, I have some possible solutions, because OF COURSE I am NOT just a "complainer"—but a problem solver too!

The NUMBER ONE thing I would change would be adding a preliminary round.

For me personally, 25-35 pictures is PROBABLY a "good size" for the Game Gallery. With the OLD game, the gallery size was basically the number of edges that had to be performed, with some exceptions for "bonus edges" comboing with the round trigger, but ... Gallery Size + some combos gave you a certain number of total edges for the game ... NOW, however, with non-elimination triggers sticking around, they REALLY add to the variability, and they make the total number of edges per game ramp up exponentially with gallery size. Before, it was linear, but ... NOW the number of rounds matters, and the more pictures you have, the more rounds you have, which means those non-elimination triggers cause more edges, so ... number of rounds is determined by gallery size, and THEN you are multiplying round number by number of non-elimination triggers—it ends up being an "X times Y" kind of situation, so ... NO LONGER is Gallery size more or less LINEAR with number of edges. It's exponential in some way due to the multiplicative nature of round number (determined by gallery size) which is multiplied by the NE-triggers ... and THEN, that wheel adds a LOT of variability—because you could get "woman standing" and eliminate 1/3 of the gallery ... OR you could eliminate TWO pics—but possibly STILL have to edge a bunch, so ... the range from the randomness is WAY more than before ... a LOT more variability with the "new way" NE-triggers are played.

So, for ME, a "preliminary round" kills two birds with one stone: I can reduce the set size down to something which is FAR more manageable, while ALSO eliminating pictures *I* don't feel are "edgeworthy", so ... If/when I play your game—in the normal Classic+ style and NOT a "full set" with a host—I will utilize a "preliminary round." It will ALSO give me a chance to "warm-up." I will eliminate X photos I do not feel are "edgeworthy" and that will just make the set MUCH MORE enjoyable all the way around for me! So, THAT is ONE possible fix ...


Thanks for posting that "everyone set." I will probably play it basically "as written" after taking a preliminary round to cut down the Game Gallery to 25-35 ... but THEN I want to "play it like you do" again and see how THAT goes. With the OBVIOUSLY OTHER EXCEPTION being that I "always win." I will ALWAYS cum for the last pic, because I "don't do denial" right now.

After THAT, I have two OTHER ideas.

I want to try an "all asses" set. Preferably, it would be a full "hosted game", but ... NO RUSH on that. (I think I might prefer more story sets for a bit. ) I REALLY—honestly don't know who I would want to "host" that set, and ... PLEASE DO try to expand your list of pornstar favorites so I can better know what models are a "safe bet" with which to tease you. Like ... I would LOVE to write you that "working from home", set, but ... I would want to do it with your FAVORITES—models that I KNOW you enjoy seeing, and ... your bench is simply just not that deep, so ... see if you can add like 3 more, as it would give people more to work with when they create sets with which to tease you.

But, anyways ... I LOVE asses. Naked. Clothed. I am SURE I could edge for clothed asses NO PROBLEM! SO ... I am curious what it would be like for you to make the Game Gallery ALL photos that "feature" the ass in some way (does NOT need to ALL be "close ups" ) AND THEN I would be curious to see what sort of wheel and NE-triggers and other "wild cards" you might add to THAT experience! While ALSO—OBVIOUSLY—staying within my limits .... if you WANT to "push me past 100"—I am OPEN TO THAT, but ... JUST WARN ME THE SET WILL BE "VERY LONG" first! But ALSO, shooting for ~50-80 would ALSO BE FINE! Probably would enjoy THAT set more.

BUT ... an ALL ASSES Game Gallery with whatever specially selected "custom triggers" you would feel would work would be AWESOME ... I think that set would be SUPER fun and perhaps an interesting "variant" of your game that you might wish to develop.

The OTHER idea would be to do an "all favorites" Game Gallery. PROBABLY drop the multiplier rule—no, DEFINITELY drop it! —but ... if you ONLY use my favorites, then ... I would be WAY more aroused and would NOT have an issue "trying to edge" for random clothed girl I don't know who is only "kind of hot" and NOT flashing skin AND has NO accompanying "teasing text" ... and I can DEFINITELY "get excited" by girls I "don't know." Chabo's LAST set for me featured a TON of "new girls"—and I loved them ALL! ... but he and I have VERY similar tastes in women ...

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Check out his favorite's list for more potential "new favorites" by the way ... and the longer your favorites list, the more likely you and another writer have a "match"—which makes it THAT MUCH EASIER for them to write you a set, because they can use one of THEIR FAVORITES to tease you, but ... you don't HAVE TO call them "favorites" if you don't want people spamming the multiplier during your game ... just list them as "potential new favorites" or something.

... but ALSO, there was a "story context" which was SUPER HOT and kept me engaged ... but ALSO the TEASING TEXT! ... when the girls are "seducing me" ... it's just WAY HOTTER compared to when they are NOT! But, even if my favorites are FULLY clothed ... I just find them SO incredibly attractive, and ALL of the "old ones" have prior associations to capitalize on, so ... I think a "favorites only game gallery" could ALSO "fix"/better modify your game for me.

Nancy STILL wants to tease you and host an Edgelot Game for you, but ... she is waiting until AFTER I clear off some more items from my to do list and we resolve this "Kelly situation", which ... YOUR CALL. You can reveal your decision in a set or ask me follow up questions or WHATEVER YOU WANT—including saying, "Thanks but no thanks with the overinvolved RP—best of luck!"

I ALSO kept ONE of my favorites OFF of my "list of suggestions." I think you would find her VERY attractive—at least physically. She is another one that has a DISTINCT personality—which you may enjoy, so ... MAYBE at some point I will send her your way.

I TOLD YOU you would get ALL of your feedback, Edgelot! Thanks again for your patience , and ... let me know whether you want to "keep playing with Nancy or not", because IF you do ... AFTER I finish my everyone set, that extended feedback on your set #2 in "story form" that is my NEXT item, which ... PROBABLY just might start that tomorrow ... or maybe FINALLY write Ecik that "casino set". I'm not sure, but ... I HOPE you have been enjoying all this narrative goodness I have been artisan crafting for your enjoyment, friend, and if not—THAT IS OKAY TOO!

[brian]

Set for Benbron

#benbronSet
#WBBrian

Before Set

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This is a bit longer. You will need your toys (no handy)
open if you need to know which

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two quickshots + connector and a vibrator

SET

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Greetings Ben!

I'm currently on cuckcation with Brian, thanks to Ecik.

We are visiting all these warm and wonderful places while I get to fuck who I want and Brian..well. He can watch lol. I actually ordered him to write this...locked of course. Shame you don't have a cage..but I'm rambling. What was I going to say?

Ah yes... finally get to start fresh. You as my obedient edge slut.

Me as your innocent and tempting favorite.

Who knows which side of me you get to experience today? They're all hot aren't they?

we have the strict looking Sonya, so divine with these captivating eyes who could just make you drop to the floor and make you ruin your orgasm to her right now...

The sweeter Sonya with a playful smirk, who could invent some fun games to edge your brains out...

Or the cute Sonya who, after all these teases and tormenting could let you cum all over her ass to keep you at bay.

Who knows...but since our writer over there he's been denied for 3 weeks, his only releases being those crushing ruins with Sisi, I wouldn't get my hopes up. Or would I? Perhaps he wants some mercy in return...

What I do know my little edge slut is that I want to tease you, I want to make you so horny that you don't care how this ends. So horny, that your edges will come quick and fast, that your cock leaks precum, dripping all over the floor..each drop a compliment for my stunning body and character...

EDGE

In fact, I could make you my personal lube provider. Each drop of precum dropping right on to my clit as I ride orgasm after orgasm in front of your desperate eyes, denied cock and blue balls...

Would you like that?

Or would you prepare to grab me by the hips...push my head forward...

and fuck me hard?

EDGE

No, that's not you, is it? You are an edge slut. You want to be controlled not vise versa. You want to be used. You want to be abused...

so be it...let's get you were I like you most. Where you like it most. NEEDY. DRIPPY. DESPERATE.

Watch this, I want you to stroke as long as you can without edging. And your second edge as quickly as possible after that. Then you start that procedure again.
https://pmvhaven.com/video/Hard-Dreams_ ... 01711a9d3f

Good edge slut...our fresh start is going well...let's see if you can stay obedient when I let you visit someone else, too? I don't want to do all the work.


Hey Ben...

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I'm honored to be so high on your list!

the only thing missing is some quality time...for us to get to know each other...so I get a nice little description beside my name. So I know how to push your buttons...

So I know how to crush you....

You like strict women don't you? Slap that cock head once...

Those who take you pleasure away, just to use it for themselves? I have to warn you:

I'm gready...

I need as much attention as possible. Worshipping, edging, and fucking. All at the same time...

and fuck no, an edge slut won't fuck me. I guess. You'd explode the moment you'd enter my pussy wouldn't you?

Would you like to enter my pussy? Just with the tip? Maybe, maybe, one day I'll let that cock head enter just so you know what you can't have

Stroke just that cock head slut...lube, spit I don't care. I want it to be intense as you think about how it would be to be my personal dildo...so try to avoid the edge as much as possible. In fact: count them.

Maybe, maybe, if you're a good slut that can keep its sticky mess in those balls and do what a good dildo is supossed to do I'd wrap my pussy around you entire cock..

I know you have "limitations" as for how deep you can go...stroke that whole cock now

but we could train you to have the endurance of a good dildo

I could call you dildo..and whenever I need some penetration...

I'd use that stick to get off...and then when I'm done...

you could at least watch how someone else cums on me. EDGE

I need my dildo ready at all times, remember.... So how many times did you edge dildo? Well, slap that cock head as many times and get out of here...

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Oh poor slut..was Eliza a bit hard on you?

don't worry, this will be just about us. Stroke that cock the way you like it the most, tight, loose, fast, slow, a little twist on the head? Make it feel real good...

NOW FUCKING EDGE SLUT

Oh *giggles* that made your cock jump...

EDGE AGAIN DILDO! COME ON

AGAIN

I was just kidding. I'm actually a bit more vanilla than the other girls. I just enjoy playing, but also taking care of you poor edgers here. The torment you experience, you need some care so you don't break. So give me 100 strokes when I show you my pussy. try not to edge honey...



Did you edge sweety? has it been too much today already?

THEN FUCKING EDGE AGAIN

hahah this is fun. You like that Sonya could go crazy any moment? EDGE

Trust me...this is a joke compared to what she is capable of...

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Oh look who's back. Did my friends get you nice and worked up? I'm get ready for another event on our cuckation. So no...

I don't have time for you. Plus: it's our first date after our fresh start. So of course I won't let you cum....

But you have been obedient, you have made up for your mistakes and all these devastating ruins aren't as affective if we don't sprinkle in some happy ends every now and then. So. I've decided that you have my permission to cum. Under one circumstance...You may only cum when my friend tells you to. Deal?

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Hey slut...it's time to get messy...grab that Quickshot and get going...

are you nice and lubed up?

do you want to fucking shoot that cum all over the place?

On my tits? EDGE

My pussy? EDGE

Why not both. Your load must be massive. I'm going to count you down right now...show me you are ready. show Sonya how worked up you really are. How ready you are for her...

EDGE SLUT....HOLD IT. 3...

2...GET READY TO COVER ME WITH YOUR FUCKING LOAD...

STOP!

haha that was to be expected wasn't it? You basically asked for it....let's spice things up.

for me...only thing better than one load is two loads...so EDGE again slut

HOLD IT! I want your loads so bad. I want ropes flying....3

2...

1....

STOP BEN....

follow me outside...

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I mean you must have expected these countdowns right?

But no way did you expect this...stop stroking...

...and don't you dare touch until you are told...

"he's ready"

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chastity, huh?

maybe then you wouldn't go around and fucking cum whenever and to whoever you like

This is a fresh start you said? Well you couldn't have messed up more could you? Fleshlight, vibrator on your balls and an orgasm while looking at me. As much pleasure as possible. I mean what the fuck were you thinking?

ValTax? pffff. You'd be lucky if I let you ever even touch that fucking cock again. So since you're so useless and can't even by a cheap chastity cage we are going to improvise...

connect that other quick shot. AND DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE GETTING ANY PLEASURE OUT OF IT

Now you are going to sit in that fucking corner...you are going to keep that fleshlight on that disobedient cock. it is going to serve as your chastity cage. AND YOU ARE NOT GOING TO MOVE IT AT ALL. THAT'S RIGHT.

You may clench your PC muscle to stay hard while I give this guy the ride of his life. THAT IS IT.

How hard is it, not to give that cock a quick stroke?

You're lucky. You can at least feel something tight wrapped around your hard cock.

Until the day I lock you up. When your cock will be in that cold cage, dying to get hard, dying to receive any type of stimulation as you watch me cover all these cocks with my juices and let them cum inside my warm and wet pussy....

I will make you desperate to even feel one single stroke, let alone an edge.

Now take one hand and stroke he outside those fleshlights without actually touching. Act as if you were stroking a giant cock lol. fake strokes on a fake pussy. NO FUCKING PLEASURE FOR YOU SLUT.

NOW WATCH ME GET FUCKED. DON'T YOU DARE EXPERIENCE A SINGLE STROKE. I JUST WANT FAKE STROKES OR PC MUSCLE FLEXING- NOTHING ELSE....GET CLOSER TO ME. KNEEL IN FRONT OF ME AN WATCH ME GIVE ALL THE JOY YOU ARE DIYNG FOR SOMEONE ELSE

(start at 4:00 and stop at 11:20).
https://de.spankbang.com/7v1u4/video/pu ... eele+hardx

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NOW SLUT. Do you want to give that cock a quick tug? FUCK NO. In fact. I believe you are enjoying the tight feeling too much huh? Take off the upper quick shot now. Fast. Don't cheat and enjoy that movement.

Remember your lovely orgasm the other day? We are going to replace that memory...

Take that vibrator and put it on your balls....but no stimulation for your cock...

FUUUCK THIS IS GOING TO BE AMAZING

TRY TO GET CLOSER....VIBRATION ON YOUR BALLS IS ALL YOU DESERVE. YOUR COCK PEAKING OUT OF YOUR CHASTITY-QUICKSHOT DYING FOR ATTENTION. EDGE SLUT EEEEDGE!

PUSH YOURSLEF OVER AND REMOVE THE VIBRATOR. GIVE ME THAT FUCKING VAL TAX AS HE EXPLODES INTO MY MOUTH. MAKE THAT COCK CRY

don't take that quickshot off yet...I want you orgasm thoroughly ruined first.

Now give it one quick tug. AND GET CLEANED UP. NO AFTERMATH FOR AT LEAST ONE DAY SLUT.

I can't wait to lock you up...

After Set

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Now this was a dicy experiment. I honestly don't know if it worked: the chastity-tease, the improv, the cucking, the ending. Ijust wanted to try it out. I don't know if that got you closer to chastity or away from it. But a) you had to pay for messing up with Val and b) I didn't no any other (safe) way how to try it out. Hope you still enjoyed...please be honest.

[FattsDynamo]

Last year, Helequin posted a themed “Canada Day” everyone set, and korashar just posted a themed “Pride Month” everyone set last week, so … I had some time and got inspired to post a themed everyone set of my own—since I never have —until NOW!

#EveryoneSet
#wbFattsDynamo
#Classic+

On July 4th, 1776, 56 delegates from the Second Continental Congress adopted the unanimous Declaration of the thirteen united States of America.

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On September 3, 1783, the United States would win its War of Independence against the British Empire, the world’s largest superpower of that time. Since its founding, Americans have made significant contributions to technical progress (Thomas Edison, Henry Ford, Bill Gates, Steve Jobs), science (Most of our best scientists fled from the Nazis or were stolen from Europe after WWII—so Einstein. ), music (Louis Armstrong, Chuck Berry, Michael Jackson), cinema (Walt Disney, Steven Spielberg), and most importantly, pornography (Hugh Hefner [Playboy], Larry Flynt [Hustler]).

Today, we’ll be recognizing the contributions of many famous Americans to the field of pornography. They do important work—work which we all admire and respect.

So please join me in celebrating America’s birthday by wanking like a degenerate fiend to some of her most beautiful and esteemed daughters, all hailing from “the land of the free and the home of the brave.”

God bless America. Happy Independence Day!


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This is a themed Classic+ everyone set made in the “korashar style” of Classic+ sets. The set features many familiar American porn stars. The set consists of a sequential series of parts—each with its own theme. The intensity of the set increases as you go along, since each part will be adding an additional edge trigger. (Feel free to substitute busting triggers instead if you wish.) Use your own rules. There is a video ending. It’s all solo girls and lesbians.

The set is long. [Open the spoiler to see the number of pictures in the set if you want to know.]

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141 pictures

I will be making suggestions along the way for “Easy Mode” and “Hard Mode” if you want fewer or more edges. If you go "Hard Mode", you can EASILY do a few hundred edges.

The Set:

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Part 1 - Warm Up Your Little Patriot
Theme: (Mostly) clothed ladies wearing patriotic apparel (or American flags).
Additional Edge Triggers: None.

Easy and Normal Modes: No edging allowed for this section.
Hard Mode: Use your “normal rules.”

If you want to embrace the "Spirit of American Independence Day," feel free to listen to the following song [contained in the spoiler], "Stars and Stripes Forever," written by John Philip Sousa and performed by the US Navy Band. Listening to it will make you 75% classier and 100% more American.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i9o6412lwGA

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Part 2 - Salute the Red, White, and Blue
Theme: Ladies wearing red, white, and blue bikinis/swimwear.
Additional Edge Triggers: Choose 1: red, white, or blue bikinis. Swimwear with an American flag pattern counts as all three.

Easy Mode: Additional edge only if bikini/swimwear has an American flag pattern.
Hard Mode: Choose two or more triggers.

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Part 3 - Let Your Heart Beat True for Ah-‘Murica[ns]
Theme: Ladies wearing red, white, and blue lingerie.
Edge Triggers: Your trigger from the last part is still in effect. If the model is one of your "Favorites" (currently or formerly on your “favorites list”) she gets one additional edge.

Easy Mode: Choose red, white, or blue as an edge trigger and forget that you have favorites, and/or, just selectively forget certain favorites.
Hard Mode: Add “new favorites” to “your list” on the fly.

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Part 4 - Recognize that American Exceptionalism
Theme: Nudity.
Edge Triggers: If you know the model’s name, give her an additional edge. Hint: You can open the spoiler to reveal the model’s name.

Easy Mode: Instead, ONLY give an additional edge to your “favorites.”
Hard Mode: Name recognition AND “favorites” edge triggers stack.

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Riley Reid

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Mia Malkova

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Karlie Montana

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AJ Applegate

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Leah Gotti

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Dani Daniels

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Aaliyah Love

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Kenzie Reeves

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Riley Reid

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Elsa Jean

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Abella Danger

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Malena Morgan

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Lana Rhoades

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Jada Stevens

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Naomi Swann

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Kenna James

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Alexis Texas

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Aidra Fox

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Lacy Lennon

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Ashley Doll

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Tori Black

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Riley Reid

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Celeste Star

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Blake Eden

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Part 5 - Freedom-Loving Americans
Theme: Lesbians.
Edge Triggers: If you know the model’s name, she gets an additional edge, but if she is on your favorites list, hold that edge for 15 seconds.

Easy Mode: Edge holding is encouraged but optional.
Hard Mode: Name recognition AND “favorites” edge triggers stack. The additional edges for your favorites should be held for 30 seconds, or, EVERY edge for a favorite MUST be held for 15 seconds.

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Part 6 - Finale: “Stars and Stripes Forever”
Theme: Lesbian videos.

Easy Mode: Choose your favorite video. Edge once. Edge twice. Edge a third time—and hold it for 15 seconds. Then you are allowed to cum to ANY part of the video you want.

Normal Mode: Choose your favorite video. Edge 6 times during the video, but THREE of these edges MUST be performed within a single 1 minute time interval. Then, do a 10 second edge hold, a 20 second edge hold, and then a 30 second edge hold. Then you are allowed to cum to ANY part of the video you want.

Hard Mode: You have to COMPLETELY watch and jerk off to TWO of the videos FIRST. THEN, at any time during the third video, you are allowed to cum. Jerk and edge however you like during the videos.

Kenna James, Abella Danger
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Aidra Fox, Naomi Swann
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Ask..and you shall recieve! This is an attempt to do several small sets along the way, with the chance to cum at the end. Maybe this works…maybe not. Either way, I hope it is fun!

Set

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You come home and see someone unfamiliar in your room! You do what any sane milovanian would do…and stroke 20 times per photo while listening to her!

Siredgealot? I’m Dakota tyler, and I’m a rising senior at the goon school…and a summer intern at the lust BnB! it’s every nice to meet you! I’m here to complete my internship, and you wanted to stroke and edge to your game. I think we can help each other!

You see…I’m a lingerie studies major, which means I study…hot lingerie! And I was tasked with finding 10 photos of 5 hot brunettes! so, I want to show you who I picked! And you?

You can pick them in any order. However, the last one you pick is the one you may have a chance to cum to! You can pick up to 7 rules and 1 special rule per round, your choice!. and the non Emily nation rule throughout? Lingerie, of course!

After each round, you must take an hour break at the minimum. And remember, no cumming until the last round! Thanks for helping me out with my internship! I won’t forget it!



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[FattsDynamo]

I have WAY too much free time recently ...

@SirEdgelot: I played your recent "everyone set" last night. I have some feedback ...

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Play time: 3 hours, 8 minutes, 32 seconds
Edges: 86
Rounds: 14

@Fatts: This is pretty much what you asked for in your last feedback. Believe it or not, I was planning on posting a replica / example game since forever for everyone to try anyways.

Nope! I believe it! We have great minds that think alike!

There were 28 pics to start. I decided to execute a "preliminary elimination round" before the game began. I only deemed THREE photos to be "not edgeworthy"—a testament to your superior taste in women—SirEdgelot!

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Warm up (free stroking while I opened up all of the tabs and decided which ones to eliminate for the prelim round) took 10 min 30 sec. I started with 25 pics.

Have you been hanging out too much with Emily, SirEdgelot? Has her "cheating ways" been rubbing off on you!?

But seriously, I WANT TO KNOW! Did you REALLY "randomly spin my favorite edge trigger"—or did you grease the skids for me because you KNEW I was hankering to play your game? Come on—you can be honest with me! And you EVEN REMOVED THE TRIGGER from the wheel at the start for me ... awwwww!

Yeah, 29 edges with 40 NE-trigger edges—yeah, they REALLY change the game ... and as I stated in my previous feedback, they WILL ramp edges up multiplicatively with Game Gallery size.

R1: 1 edge per woman
R2: woman fully clothed (suitable for everday use)

It was HARD to say goodbye to those legs ...

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A VERY productive first two rounds! My play time was 1 hr 41 min after R2 with 35 edges and 15 pics remaining.

I DID get distracted a LOT by thinking of more variants for your game.

R3: woman sitting

I did NOT want to say goodbye to Gloria Sol. She IS on my favorites list (one of them ), so ... She was racking up TWO WONDERFUL EDGES every round ...

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In the end, while I *did* want to "cheat" and claim that what she was doing was NOT sitting, I decided it was GOOD to get rid of one of the NE-trigger pics—so I had to say goodbye after 8 edges ...

I did 9 edges in 10 minutes for R3—kind of like a "rapid fire round" spurred on by the loss of BEAUTIFUL Gloria Sol!

After R3, I had done 44 edges with 13 pictures remaining.

R4: woman with a tattoo

Up to 50 edges with 11 pics remaining

R5: woman with her tongue out

During this round—about 2 hours in—I experienced a VERY strong desire to finish the game and cum—but there was STILL a LOT to go!

2 hr 10 min of play time, 53 edges. I STILL had 3 "naked ass pics" remaining, and R5 eliminated ZERO photos ...

R6: 1 edge per visible nipple

I managed to get rid of ONE MORE of the naked asses:

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Note: I realized TODAY that I "illegally" eliminated that photo, because "nipples" was multi-target, and ONLY ONE was showing there, so ... it should NOT have been eliminated, but ... mistakes like that are fine—so long as you aren't trying to cheat to get a specific outcome!

I was SO happy to edge for nipples and eliminate pics!

2 hrs 25 min, 67 edges, 5 pics left, with TWO NA-triggers STILL on the board ...

R7: woman in heels/boots

70 edges—4 pics left.

R8: selfie or mirror

For most of this round, my dick was flaccid. I had been playing for a while. My dick was fatigued. And just the edging over and over without a story meant my mind kept wandering. And there also wasn't stuff happening, really, so ... not enough "suspense" for my taste.

I STILL had 4 pics left, but ... they were ALL good "cum pics" ... BUT ... I STILL had NO IDEA *when* the game was going to end, so ... sigh ... there was like ... no incentive to get excited for the end, because it could be 5 or 35 more minutes away ...

2 hrs 44 min, 72 edges, still 4 pics left

R9: 1 edge per fully visible pussy

ANOTHER dead spin,

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I didn't re-read your rules, but ... IIRC, "1 edge per" is multi-target, and since I eliminated "1 edge per woman" during R1, there was nothing left to eliminate ...

but ... since the NE-triggers were my favorite—naked asses —and I KIND OF didn't count them properly and count "dead spins as rounds" during Kelly's game, AND ... having seen that YOU got 69 edges (Nice! ) from YOUR play through, I decided that (other than the 3 prelim pics), I would TRY to "play the game straight"—because it SHOULD be an acceptable number of edges for me (and not 200 ), so ... THAT meant that I "played the dead spin rounds."

R10: woman in thigh highs/knee socks
R11: woman kneeling
R12: woman completely naked no clothes, jewelry or accessories

I REALLY liked that you clarified round triggers VERY WELL—by the way.

FINALLY got a pic—and a NE-trig one at that ... I DID decided that I would "miss the sun", though.

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ALMOST 3 hours, 81 edges, 3 pics left ...

R13: 1 edge per woman with any other hair color

R14: woman in lingerie underwear/swimwear

And THAT got rid of ...

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Who was a quiet cutie—waiting at the TOP of the order EVERY round—patiently and silently waiting and wondering if SHE would be the one to collect my cum ... alas, it would NOT BE!

Then Melena Maria Rya is one of my favorites, so ... SHE took 2 edges.

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Okay ... and THEN the cum pic:

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THIS girl ... WOW! She teased me EVERY ROUND —14 edges in all!

R14 ended with 86 edges at 185 minutes, but ... I was NOT just about to "immediately cum" for her—oh no!

You see THAT LOOK in her eye! It's like she is TEASING you. Taunting you. DARING you ... ENTICING you ... SEDUCING you ... to edge for her ... again and again and again and again ... and she DID!

"Eyes and Ass" is my FAVORITE pose! I LOVE eye contact, and I LOVE asses, and ... THIS little lady was giving me BOTH—AND THAT LOOK!

When I was playing your game—I couldn't get "attached." You're just NOT IN CONTROL, so ... really, NO SENSE in "rooting" for someone—except for maybe the BEAUTIFUL Gloria Sol —but there is no sense in trying to create a feeling of expectation, because a random turn of the wheel can just take it all away in an INSTANT, but ... THAT GIRL ... and THAT LOOK!

So, after the round ... I took 3 minutes to "prepare myself" and work up the BIGGEST LOAD THAT I COULD MUSTER.

I came for her ass—OBVIOUSLY —but ... that look in her eyes is what TRULY excited me and took me up to the edge. got me up

I had a pretty big spurt that shot up several inches out from my dick. Didn't hit the ceiling or anything CRAZY like that (and keep in mind, since I cum ever day—and often multiple times—I usually don't have MONSTER loads saved up ) ... BUT ... for my dick being kind of fatigued from beating off for OVER THREE HOURS and 86 edges ... yeah, it was a FANTASTIC finish!

When I finally "won" and realized "she was my prize" ... the dominant half of my switch-self took over. She was teasing me and making eyes at me and TAUNTING and BECKONING me for 14 ROUNDS across 14 EDGES ... I was SO ready—and SO turned on ... I would have taken her and fucked her like a stallion RIGHT THEN—if she was in the room with me.

I NEVER would have expected THIS kind of reaction/outcome from playing the "Edgelot Game." ... but it was a VERY NICE outcome!

TELL ME HER NAME!

Seriously ... TELL ME HER NAME! I am going to special request a 1-2 scene mini set with her in exchange for a Classic+ set or a similarly long mini set with a model of the exchangee's choice ...

I'll give you "right of first refusal," so ... if want it—call dibs. If NOT, then I will put it to the thread and first come first served ... I just HAVE to meet that girl in a set! I've buried you under a MOUNTAIN of stories, sets, and feedback, so ... if you are NOT interested—TOTALLY FINE! But, since YOU were the one who made the introduction, thought I'd give you the option ... if yes, then I will follow up with more details.



Okay, so ... NOW for the "big picture" feedback on the set ...

For me, 25 pics was good. When *I* did the NE-triggers with Emily and Guerlain, I ALWAYS put then at NOT Round 1! But for ME—it worked out pretty well—because I just LOVE edging for naked asses! ... BUT—as you noted—more than ANYTHING ELSE—they add edges to the game.

One option, then, is to just have them hit at later rounds—like 3 or 4 once the Game Gallery has cleared out a bit. THAT would CERTAINLY help ...

On ONE HAND, I just LOVE that they are static and "always there", "staring you down"—as it was in MY case. ON THE OTHER HAND ... it DOES make the game play "pretty static"—which is why I had Guerlain spin that "bonus wheel" EVERY round ... it adds a LITTLE excitement and unpredictability about what will happen next—which is good for engagement ... ALSO ... it helps to "spread the love around" and interact a bit more with more of the pictures INSTEAD OF just the same ones EVERY time.

ANOTHER option would be to spin that bonus NE-trigger wheel EVERY round, and THEN—at the end of each round—one of the surviving pictures that matches the NE-trigger gets moved to the front of the set. JUST THAT PIC "becomes a permanent static edge pic" until it is eliminated ... THIS solution kind of addresses ALL of the issues ... you STILL have a "poison pic" that is FORCING you to edge each round, but ... it's not ALL the same pictures—and you can keep spinning the bonus wheel every round—which will be exciting, because that means MORE edges you have to do, but you just don't know for which ones ...



On a personal note, I don't like how YOUR "round trigger wheel" has SUCH SPECIFIC entries ... spinning that wheel and only eliminating 1, 2, or 0 pics each time got kind of frustrating ... Now, the meta has changed with NE-triggers, but ... even so, your base game before that just mostly seemed to me to be edging once for ALL of the pics in the gallery—but in a random order—and you don't know which one you will be cumming for ... that version you presented in the original rules seemed to have a LOT more variability ... it seems that there were more triggers active at once or something? idk ...

For me, the game was just too long and predictable ... I knew the ass pics weren't going anywhere, but ... it just took SO LONG to clear stuff it seemed ... Perhaps spinning the wheel TWICE and eliminating TWO round triggers at once might help? Idk. THEN the edges could stack or something ... you just need a better mechanism for hitting those combos—like 6 or 12 edges for one pic ... if THAT is OFTEN a possibility—even a SMALL one ... that makes the game a LOT more exciting!

The multi-targets were exciting. When I got multiple women and multi-nipples—THOSE were some EXCITING rounds!

The "quiet pics" still bother me, but ... I think with some more randomness we can get more interaction with them.

Once again, the static ass edges every round I VERY MUCH liked! Worked SO WELL for me ... I will probably just always take some version of "ass" to be my NE-trigger.


I lost engagement a LOT. It was just LOTS and LOTS of edges with a LOT of pictures to go through, and with not eliminating many pics with each spin, and then just knowing I which ass pics I was going to have to edge to EVERY round ... it was NICE and interesting to edge for them, but ... my cock kept getting tired. At times I lost BOTH my brain AND my cock—and then my brain just kept wandering to OTHER things—mostly brainstorming new ideas—because I didn't have enough to preoccupy it with while I was playing ... it felt more like an "endurance challenge" than "playing a game"—due to the lack of choices. Like Nancy said, it's kind of "deterministic" ...

I think I MIGHT introduce a "round time limit" for myself. If I have to "get through" all of the pics by a certain time, and I see that clock counting down, then I will DEFINITELY be more engaged, so ... THAT is a thing I might try at some point ...

Metronome stroking helped to keep me focused during korashar's Classic+ no-story set, so ... I might try that at some point as well and see if THAT helps to keep me more interested ... although BOTH of those are just "personal solutions" and NOT "global ones" that would be appropriate fixes for the "vanilla version" of the game ...


One of my old roommates at university told me something interesting about Xbox's "Halo" game. They were trying to improve it. One developer said to the other, "Okay, so ... take the 30 seconds of Halo that is MOST fun and MOST engaging—try to identify the elements that make it that way. THEN, try to make the ENTIRE GAME like those 30 seconds." It's a FANTASTIC PRINCIPLE when it comes to game design.

So, with Halo, the crazy firefights were the most intense and fun, so ... when you spend 5 minutes walking through empty hallways trying to find the last little flood bad guy to kill in order to complete the mission objective and cue the next cut scene—that's not fun. So, with Halo 2 and Halo 3, it was LESS of the stuff that WASN'T fun, and MORE of the stuff that WAS!

So, apply that idea to YOUR game. Identity the MOST FUN parts of the game, and then MAXIMIZE THOSE and make them MUCH more frequent.


Other ideas ...

At some point I WOULD like a "vibrator friendly" version of the game, but ... THAT is a "stretch goal" to save for later ...

YOU may like YOUR round trigger categories, and probably the suit YOU for the kinds of pictures that YOU like to search for and use to make your game, but ... for me ... *I* would prefer more expansive categories that eliminate more pictures and shorten the game by having fewer rounds, but ... PROBABLY the game "runs best" when EACH PLAYER constructs THEIR OWN "round trigger wheel", which ... THAT was one of the reasons I wanted to play with YOUR wheel and Game Gallery again, so that I could see more how YOU have been playing the game ...

I have decided that I am going to create "cumworthy folder" on my hard drive and save ALL of the pictures from the Edgelot games I play that I REALLY want to cum for, and ... SOMEDAY, use them ALL in some "all stars" game!

Another thought ... I am PRETTY SURE that I could handle MUCH larger Game Galleries IF I was allowed to cum during the game—and then spread the game out across multiple sessions. Do something like include an "end of round" wheel that has various "edge numbers" on it, and if I am under the quota, I have to play another round. THEN I don't HAVE TO play for 3 hours to complete a game, but ... if I WANT TO CUM REAL BAD, then ... MAYBE I will soon, but ... MAYBE I COULD ALSO spin a 50 edges quota and have to keep playing. (Spin it fresh at the end of each round.) I think THAT mechanic could work VERY WELL for me ... I would NOT be locked into some crazy long session to finish the game, but ... it would ALSO be unpredictable—a DIFFERENT way of "playing with my orgasm." Instead of "all or nothing"—"cum or denial"—it would be WHEN—now or later? And THEN I could potentially play those those silly long sets and it would kind of work for me.

When I play a set, I want to be FINISHED. When I get denied—I'm STILL PLAYING THE SET. I don't like that. I want to CUM and BE DONE—NOT finish "horny and distracted" and NOW I can't transition well to my NEXT task—which could be sleeping or going to work or having a conversation with a friend or family member ... I don't want to be "walking around horny all day." My work is VERY mentally taxing, so ... I NEED to have a clear head and not be distracted by my libido or erotic fantasies, so ... THAT is JUST ONE ANGLE about why I, personally, don't like denial ... there are MANY others, and I have FULLY explained it elsewhere, but ... just thought I would share THAT short little one with you, bud. :lol

But not everyone is like me, so ... I DEFINITELY understand the allure and how denial can turn up the foreplay and fantasy between sexual encounters, so ... I can lean into all of THAT in my denial sets for OTHER people, but ... yeah, figuring out ways to adapt your game for me—just shorter ... but ALSO that "cum more frequently" thing could work—edge quota end of round cum wheel—or something ...


TWO more things ...

Again ... my brain wandered a LOT during the 3 hour game, so ... I have continued developing TWO variants for your game. BOTH still need some more work ...

ONE variant will focus on increasing intensity and making the game shorter.

The OTHER variant will create a HUGE AMOUNT of interactivity—for the player.

Now, at the moment, I have buried you in narratives and feedback on your CURRENT game, AND ... I STILL need to write brian his multi-day set, so ... PROBABLY I will be taking a break from bothering you with shit—soon and for a while—HOPEFULLY! Give you a chance to catch up and process, but ... at SOME POINT ... I *do* plan to unveil TWO MORE VARIANTS of the Edgelot Game—and I think they will be a BLAST TO PLAY!

But just focusing on the "base game" and core mechanics has been SUPER useful ... even the Guerlain's "Favorites" Edgelot game—while a simple variant—still taught me some stuff, so ... THAT'S good.