[RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip

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Best girl?

Emily
42
53%
Miranda
5
6%
Skye
13
16%
Kayla
14
18%
Alannah
6
8%
 
Total votes: 80

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sonkcb wrote: Fri Aug 25, 2023 4:29 pm An other banger tease! Well done! :)

Any followup planned ? I can't get enough of Emily :)
Lilbroomstick42` wrote: Tue Sep 05, 2023 3:46 pm Excellent tease, i really like your work so far! Are you planning on making any new teases in this style?
A followup tease is in progress. My work and personal life are very busy this year so it will be a long wait until it is finished.
matex923 wrote: Wed Sep 20, 2023 3:11 pm Hi, I think I read in the feedback of beach vacation that you used stable diffusion. Are you still using it to generate the images? If you are, could you maybe tell us little more on the model/lora or some tips how you make your images look so good?
There are not really any tricks for getting decent images from stable diffusion. Just need a good model and a lot of patience. I don't keep track but I'd say only about 10% of the generated images are decent enough to use. I generally just run batch counts of 3 or 4 then save what looks good or see if any adjustments need to be made to the prompts. I can't really say anything about the model and lora, I found the model posted on 4chan about a year ago and couldn't find any other information on it and I haven't been using any lora.
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Any update on newer installment? ;-)

Big fan of your project.. :wave:
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stupiddogss wrote: Thu Feb 29, 2024 6:07 pm Any update on newer installment? ;-)

Big fan of your project.. :wave:
The next tease is still being worked on regularly, just taking quite a while. Since I'm too far in now to change the scenario, I suppose I can share a few details:
-Takes place over 7 days.
-Takes place several months after the events of EEBT
-3 main girls (Emily, a new girl, and a returning girl from EEBT)
-At least 4 endings with some different variations (I think I have 7 major variations planned for the final day).
-Players will be able to get more tease time with Emily, I know that was one disappointing bit from EEBT that there was really only the first day and then the ending with Emily.
-I'm working on a "save editor" functionality for the tease to help players see all the content or replay their favorite parts. This is in lieu of a pass code system which wouldn't be reliable with the abundance of stored variables I am using.
-A hopefully satisfying conclusion to the series... for now ;)

Thank your for your patience,
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OH can't wait for the release :-D Goodluck!! :wave:
-A hopefully satisfying conclusion to the series... for now ;)
Does it mean this is the final trilogy?
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stupiddogss wrote: Sun Mar 03, 2024 4:05 pm OH can't wait for the release :-D Goodluck!! :wave:
-A hopefully satisfying conclusion to the series... for now ;)
Does it mean this is the final trilogy?
Yep! Ending dependant of course, but the next tease will confirm if the MC and Emily become an official couple. I am working on a scenario for another tease with Emily, but that's far in the future (both in terms of a possible release date and in setting) so it may get scrapped.
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Lilbroomstick42` wrote: Tue Sep 05, 2023 3:46 pm Excellent tease, i really like your work so far! Are you planning on making any new teases in this style?
sonkcb wrote: Fri Aug 25, 2023 4:29 pm An other banger tease! Well done! :)

Any followup planned ? I can't get enough of Emily :)
stupiddogss wrote: Thu Feb 29, 2024 6:07 pm Any update on newer installment? ;-)

Big fan of your project.. :wave:
The next tease is fully finished! I'm still combing over it for possible bugs/spelling/grammar issues, but everything is feature complete now. I'm expecting to publish it on 04/29 (Monday is the first day of the tease) so keep your eyes out for the sequel!
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Can't wait.. :yes:
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Does anyone have all the codes to the different days? Changed phones recently and my progress didn't save since I forgot my milovana password. A dm would be awesome from someone
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Poliovacine wrote: Tue May 14, 2024 9:11 am Does anyone have all the codes to the different days? Changed phones recently and my progress didn't save since I forgot my milovana password. A dm would be awesome from someone
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221 day 2
332 day 3
913 day 4
867 day 5
743 day 6
426 day 7
888 day 8
Not sure how well the tease will function without having any data saved. At a minimum you should set a name on the first day unless you like being called "undefined"
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Thi tease was so good.
The entire series was great, characters, personalities etc.
But this one specifically was the best, amazing.
The ending i got REALLY surprised me in the hottest way.
Honestly i loved that bit so much that i kinda hoped the next episode would continue on with both me and emily as slaves but alas it didnt.

I REALLY want more, and i really hope you can make more and make them fast because damn I want more haha.
I have ideas and concepts i'd love to see, but honestly what youve done has been great so far
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deniedslave21 wrote: Fri May 31, 2024 1:40 am Thi tease was so good.
The entire series was great, characters, personalities etc.
But this one specifically was the best, amazing.
The ending i got REALLY surprised me in the hottest way.
Honestly i loved that bit so much that i kinda hoped the next episode would continue on with both me and emily as slaves but alas it didnt.

I REALLY want more, and i really hope you can make more and make them fast because damn I want more haha.
I have ideas and concepts i'd love to see, but honestly what youve done has been great so far
I did have a couple of concepts for a short tease following that ending but ended up scrapping them in favor of the concept that became EEFF.
  • The first would have been a tease where Miranda, Skye, Kayla, and Emily play a spoof of Dungeons and Dragons, where their characters would need the MC/player to edge to charge up their magic spells.
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    Skye would be the Dungeon Master and would become more and more belligerent against Emily and Miranda due to Skye's frustration at her infatuation with Miranda.
  • The next concept would have been a collection of three smaller three-day teases with the purpose being to train the MC to be a better sub for Miranda. One would be from Kayla who physically trains the MC. One with Emily, who would train the MC for CEI. The last would be with a new character, who would train the MC for domestic tasks, e.g. cooking, cleaning.
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    That character was repurposed as Sonia in EEFF, and Kayla's physical training tease was repurposed into one of her dates in EEFF.
  • The last concept was a maze tease that would find the MC and Emily trapped in a maze of supernatural design. It would reuse the images and characters from the past teases, but I decided I'd rather go with a traditional story tease. I do have my design document for it though, if you're interested (pasted below).
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Anyway, I am starting work on a new tease. If you want to send ideas you'd want to see, go ahead. I can't promise they'd get used though.

Glad you enjoyed the teases!

Cheers,
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  • The first would have been a tease where Miranda, Skye, Kayla, and Emily play a spoof of Dungeons and Dragons, where their characters would need the MC/player to edge to charge up their magic spells.

    Skye would be the Dungeon Master and would become more and more belligerent against Emily and Miranda due to Skye's frustration at her infatuation with Miranda.
Ohh.. this concept suit my taste the most. I think it's been a while, a hentai tease with good storytelling and unique concept being uploaded here on milovana.. not like 2-4 years back, when hentai contents almost likely being uploaded once/twice a month..

bytheway can you give us teaser what new tease you've been working up to? :rolleyes:
cant wait for your next teases though. Goodluck Nice-san :wave:
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stupiddogss wrote: Wed Jun 12, 2024 6:43 pm Ohh.. this concept suit my taste the most. I think it's been a while, a hentai tease with good storytelling and unique concept being uploaded here on milovana.. not like 2-4 years back, when hentai contents almost likely being uploaded once/twice a month..

bytheway can you give us teaser what new tease you've been working up to? :rolleyes:
cant wait for your next teases though. Goodluck Nice-san :wave:
I've only barely started so the scenario is still very likely to change. It's starring a brand new girl and MC, but you should still be able to tell that it follows ending S from EEFF. There should hopefully be 8 chapters spread across 7 days. I've also changed to a different stable-diffusion model, so the images will have a slightly different style, but quality should be at least as good.
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Howdy, I just wanted to come here and say good work on this series. I played through the EEBV and just finished Kayla's section. I absolutely loved her. I really liked the hard-soft method you used there, and her talk about masturbating like a girl and edging while soft was super hot. Before Skye was my favorite but I think she just stole first place. I would love to see a short tease about being her sub. It was her comment about keeping guys 'pussy free' that sealed it. I feel like she fits well into the prejac/chastity niche.

All that to say I liked her section a lot and had to share. Just the way she acts and talks is great. I think its the slight hostility she has that sells it. She can't find a girlfriend, so she will turn you into one. While feminization is not my favorite kink, I would make an exception for her. Chastity, prejac, pussy free. all she is missing is censorship :lol: :lol:

I know you are busy and working on other projects, very much looking forward to playing EEFF, but if you ever decided to make a spin-off with her I would be all for it.

Keep up the good work and thanks for all the effort you put into these.
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I usually don't log in, but that was superbly executed!

I did it all in one session, so maybe not the best way to experience these teases (they're pretty long and some challenges get REALLY difficult), but I wanted to share how good the Alannah and Kayla bits were. I've been lurking milovana a while and it's rare to find two challenges that are pretty unique.

1. Alannah

The whole character was pretty neat. Being dominated by a (very) submissive woman, and her comparing us the whole time? Yes please! I really like the "challenge" aspect of "can you do it faster than I did". Plus, I actually never encountered that type of challenge (or forgot I did). Being forced to keep stroking through edges has to be one of the most difficult way to edge... Like at least for quick succession edges, there's a break between. For holding, it's a constant type of focus, and usually not too long. But Alannah's challenge? Yeah, 4 mins of shifting focus between edging and getting back down while never getting a break... oof that was rewarding.

2. Kayla

From this thread, seems to be a favorite for others as well. The whole attitude, the script was great. A lot of stories/teases go straight into insults, are very direct, but Kayla is... more subtle? Like she's not insulting me, she's just telling me why she prefers women, and it feels even more real that I'm nothing but an outlet.

Also, I didn't think I was into feminization, but damnit, the whole "masturbate with your cock soft" thing got me playing in my head. It's a little annoying to wait between each, but if you can find something to sit on and "block" the erection, you can keep soft while edging and even while holding the edge! I ended up doing probably 70% of her edges while sitting on my couch's arm and playing with my soft clit with one finger, I really embraced "masturbating like a woman", and it felt excruciatingly good! I was a little scared of going over in that position, but I managed to survive :)

10/10, really loved it! It'll be a bit before I can do it, but I can't wait to play the third tease in the series
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