Feedback: A Day With D.Va

[playsafe9]

Hi there, I loved the game. Everything's crafted with care and got good writing.
A small idea, while D.VA shows her gaming station, she could mention how angry she'll get when she's losing - which could lead to some cbt or nipple play.
Other than that I also liked the Widowmaker path and did consider becoming a patreon, but 18€ with paypal for a section of a single game seems to be greedy (sorry). A healthy playerbase with 2-3€ patreons could be healthier than a bunch of disappointed and salty non customers.

[eloelo120]

Hello Morexis!
I like giving a feedback to creators, so I thought I will write one for you :)

I was waiting for this tease since I found out you are working on it. I DM'ed you about teases with different characters than Ponies and it's here! Let's start with overall opinion about my whole session. I must say, that it might be the best tease I have ever played.

First, your attention to detail. It's nice to see that even before I started the session, I could learn something about it. It might be only me, but I love it when there's this 'professional' look. Starting Menu always works very well, we are playing a tease so we should treat it like a game :)

Second, pace of the game. It was perfect for my needs. There were plenty of stroking before hitting first edge, stroking parts were properly timed and there were no breaks that would last so long that you could lose your boner. Whole experience was super smooth, for which you deserves congratz

Third, story and photos. Once again, on point. The plot was simple and straight forward. The idea of showing hotter and hotter photos is amazing! Also, Windowmaker part with letting player the choice makes the connection deeper. Again

To sum it up, wonderful job. Unfortunately I played it soon after release and the tease bugged, but I read that you fixed it already, so that's good news. I hope you won't stop doing teases, since you are great at this. I also hope that next one will again be with female-human characters

I want to bring one last thing up, the windomaker ending. I totally understand, that you want to monetize your teases. You are doing incredible job with those and it must be time consuming. But it's a bummer I learned about it while playing the game. The tease builds up really well and it sucks that I find out about paid ending when I am playing it. It would spoil the game a little if you would said about it in the menu window, but I still would rather know earlier, so I could buy it before I started the tease without ruining my mood.
I must also bring the price. It's your decision how you value your time spent on this project. When I found out about this paid content, I thought to myself that I will pay for it, but after finding out it costs 15$, I had to pass I had to share my thoughts about it, but of course it's your decision and I will respect it either you change it or not.


Once again, great work! Had much fun playing!

edit:
Damn, I wanted to ask one question! What do you mean by 'stroke'? Do you mean hand moving up and down, or one stroke means one move down/up? I wondered it while playing the game, since sometimes D.Va said "stroke slow" and if 1 stroke meant moving up and down it would definitely not be slow stroking sorry if I typed this weird, just want to know your understanding of 'stroke', so I can play the game properly

[Morexis]

Thanks for the amazing feedback, eloelo!
Sure, I rembember our conversation; I hope the CBT and pain stuff was the way you imagined it.

Although I'm already working on a concept for an enormous game with "female-human characters", it looks like the next one will be a shorter tease with ponies.

About the exclusive ending, I was already writing a reply to playsafe9's comment who brought up similar points as you.
There are many factors that influence how I value a tier but I don't really want to get too much into that here.
However, I think it's important to mention that the Widowmaker ending is an additional ending which wouldn't exist without my patrons. The main ending is with D.Va. In fact, originally the entire Widowmaker path was intended as patron path but I decided to make most of it publicly accessible just shortly before the tease's release.

That being said, I always have an open ear and open mind for feedback, so I'll be thinking about ways to change this. Because Patreon and PayPal take a big cut out of my end as well, I've been looking for alternatives anyway. I've already set up a Ko-Fi page where you can make individual donations instead of monthly pledges; That might be a way to improve the current system. ^^

Thanks for the comments, you guys gave me a lot to think about.