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Feedback: A Day With D.Va

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Hello everyone!

Despite the regular Christmas stress, I've finally finished and published my tease "A Day With D.Va"! (https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=43191)
After my last game didn't have any story at all, I focused more on storytelling with this webtease.

This game includes many new features which I've personally never used before, so I'm really interested to see how you'll like those. One of the most interesting additions is the new chastity option which I've added since many people seem to enjoy and actively engage in chastity in these games. Whether I'll continue to work with that in the future depends mostly on the feedback on it in this game.

As always, there might be some issues and I'd really appreciate any reports of bugs and any other problems you have while playing the game.

In general, I really look forward to all feedback and critique. For weeks, I was constantly tweaking details and I'm not sure it worked out well. ^^

Anyway, I hope you enjoy "A Day With D.Va" and I look forward to your feedback.
Merry Christmas and happy holidays! :love: :santa:
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Tbh it's one of the best teases I've ever played, maybe the best. Pictures in this game are amazing. Many teases are just boring. While playing your game I was tense and eager all the time.
I was a little bit disapointed cause of a very short foot fetish part. If a player need to check additional option to have that part in the game it means that he likes it, so it should be longer. Also chastity addition was very good idea. I don't know if player can get it without missing every additional points, so implementation could be better.
Summarizing it's fantastic tease with possiblity to be even better. Keep a good work, Merry Christmas :-)
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Really loving this tease so far. I got to the phone call from Widowmaker and declined the call and now the sound from that page just keeps going throughout the tease and over the metronome.
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Thanks for your comments and feedback, I'm glad you like it!
I can see that the foot fetish part is too short, maybe I'll add some more foot content if I have some time.

And now for some bug fixes:
I got to the phone call from Widowmaker and declined the call and now the sound from that page just keeps going throughout the tease and over the metronome.
Ugh, I'm sorry. I sort the sounds by numbers and accidentally had the command stop "Skype2" instead of "Skype1". It should be fixed now.
sempaiii wrote: Tue Dec 24, 2019 2:28 am
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when I peeked at her boobs and pussy after the widowmaker part she kept on stroking me for ten minutes straight and never hit an end.

Is this a bug?
Oh god, that's one of the more or less gamebreaking bugs I was afraid of. EOS changed the timer range from "40s-50s" to "40s-50m". So you got off easy if your timer was 10 min long. :lol:
Well, thanks so much for pointing it out. I fixed that as well.

Thanks for the nice words and comments. Let me know if you find any more bugs. :-)
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a really successful tease, thanks for that. The end was also successful.

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I really like the tease.

I have 2 things, tho:

1. When completing the game it doesn't register that I have played the game (Incognito but still) and refuses to allow me to pick the revisited/skip to CBT button.

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Yesterday, I got 15 points (I was just skimming through) and today (seriously played it) I only got 6 points (randomized my decision) and both gave a full orgasm. I thought I would've had to ruin at the 2nd playthrough.
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Love the tease, amazing work. Despite being linear has fairly good replayability.
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I've had an issue where if I go through widowmaker, get ruined by her, and the get to the end with D.Va I get NaN as the amount of points that I earned. It was a return visit, with chastity disabled.
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I have a small update for the footfetish gang! ^^

Earlier today, I was working on the tease again and I added new foot fetish pages including new dialogue and 10 new images.

If you replay the game, let me know how you liked this late addition. :-D
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Small bug report: If you set a custom name the "Nevermind, I don't want a custom name."-Notification never disappears.
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Quarz wrote: Thu Dec 26, 2019 1:58 pm If you set a custom name the "Nevermind, I don't want a custom name."-Notification never disappears.
Oops, I forgot to add the remove command. Thanks for reporting the bug, I fixed it!
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Lojackload wrote: Thu Dec 26, 2019 11:23 pm I already tried two answers and the game just got stuck there...
Hm, that obviously shouldn't happen. Did you answer with a number or a word?
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Lojackload wrote: Thu Dec 26, 2019 11:30 pm
Morexis wrote: Thu Dec 26, 2019 11:26 pm
Lojackload wrote: Thu Dec 26, 2019 11:23 pm I already tried two answers and the game just got stuck there...
Hm, that obviously shouldn't happen. Did you answer with a number or a word?
Word, considering "how often" isn't really a question to answer with a number.
Ahh, damn it. I didn't think about what happens if you enter a number instead of a word.
I wonder how many people didn't get past that point... :-(

Well, thanks for asking about it. I added "As a number, ..." in the text and some commands for when you enter a word instead of a number.
I can't believe I didn't catch that issue earlier, stuff like that hurts... :weep:
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Hi there, I loved the game. Everything's crafted with care and got good writing.
A small idea, while D.VA shows her gaming station, she could mention how angry she'll get when she's losing - which could lead to some cbt or nipple play.
Other than that I also liked the Widowmaker path and did consider becoming a patreon, but 18โ‚ฌ with paypal for a section of a single game seems to be greedy (sorry). A healthy playerbase with 2-3โ‚ฌ patreons could be healthier than a bunch of disappointed and salty non customers.
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Hello Morexis!
I like giving a feedback to creators, so I thought I will write one for you :)

I was waiting for this tease since I found out you are working on it. I DM'ed you about teases with different characters than Ponies and it's here! Let's start with overall opinion about my whole session. I must say, that it might be the best tease I have ever played. :yes:

First, your attention to detail. It's nice to see that even before I started the session, I could learn something about it. It might be only me, but I love it when there's this 'professional' look. Starting Menu always works very well, we are playing a tease so we should treat it like a game :)

Second, pace of the game. It was perfect for my needs. There were plenty of stroking before hitting first edge, stroking parts were properly timed and there were no breaks that would last so long that you could lose your boner. Whole experience was super smooth, for which you deserves congratz :clap2:

Third, story and photos. Once again, on point. The plot was simple and straight forward. The idea of showing hotter and hotter photos is amazing! Also, Windowmaker part with letting player the choice makes the connection deeper. Again :bow:

To sum it up, wonderful job. Unfortunately I played it soon after release and the tease bugged, but I read that you fixed it already, so that's good news. I hope you won't stop doing teases, since you are great at this. I also hope that next one will again be with female-human characters :rolleyes:

I want to bring one last thing up, the windomaker ending. I totally understand, that you want to monetize your teases. You are doing incredible job with those and it must be time consuming. But it's a bummer I learned about it while playing the game. The tease builds up really well and it sucks that I find out about paid ending when I am playing it. It would spoil the game a little if you would said about it in the menu window, but I still would rather know earlier, so I could buy it before I started the tease without ruining my mood.
I must also bring the price. It's your decision how you value your time spent on this project. When I found out about this paid content, I thought to myself that I will pay for it, but after finding out it costs 15$, I had to pass :\'-( I had to share my thoughts about it, but of course it's your decision and I will respect it either you change it or not.


Once again, great work! Had much fun playing! :love:

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Damn, I wanted to ask one question! What do you mean by 'stroke'? Do you mean hand moving up and down, or one stroke means one move down/up? I wondered it while playing the game, since sometimes D.Va said "stroke slow" and if 1 stroke meant moving up and down it would definitely not be slow stroking :lol: sorry if I typed this weird, just want to know your understanding of 'stroke', so I can play the game properly :-D
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Thanks for the amazing feedback, eloelo!
Sure, I rembember our conversation; I hope the CBT and pain stuff was the way you imagined it. :lol:

Although I'm already working on a concept for an enormous game with "female-human characters", it looks like the next one will be a shorter tease with ponies.

About the exclusive ending, I was already writing a reply to playsafe9's comment who brought up similar points as you.
There are many factors that influence how I value a tier but I don't really want to get too much into that here.
However, I think it's important to mention that the Widowmaker ending is an additional ending which wouldn't exist without my patrons. The main ending is with D.Va. In fact, originally the entire Widowmaker path was intended as patron path but I decided to make most of it publicly accessible just shortly before the tease's release.

That being said, I always have an open ear and open mind for feedback, so I'll be thinking about ways to change this. Because Patreon and PayPal take a big cut out of my end as well, I've been looking for alternatives anyway. I've already set up a Ko-Fi page where you can make individual donations instead of monthly pledges; That might be a way to improve the current system. ^^

Thanks for the comments, you guys gave me a lot to think about. :-D
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