3 hours of hell
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neloangelo1227
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Re: 3 hours of hell
Delightful! Maybe the stakes should be raised next time, and he becomes her slave if he loses. 
My only suggestion is to take your time when writing and pay more attention to detail. This felt a little bit rushed.
My only suggestion is to take your time when writing and pay more attention to detail. This felt a little bit rushed.
"Submission, like apology, is often mistaken for a sign of weakness."
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potveg
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Re: 3 hours of hell
i thought it was brilliant. although it does remind me that I'm probably never going to find a woman as wonderful as this.
Totally addicted to Miss Thompson