I agree with "hakeem.wolfie." I can cope with inadvertent misspellings, or even with an author's inability to distinguish between "your" and "you're," or between "their" and "there". It's the "text speak" language of run-on sentences void of punctuation that I can't bear. There have been many great ...

Prematurejac:

We appreciate the effort. You're better than me, if only because you've posted a story.

Now, go get 'em...

Having spotted the keywords "chastity" and "virgin" in the description of the recent tease titled "Adult Virgin", I locked the door to my office, removed my belt, lowered my pants and assumed a comfortable, semi-reclined position next to my box of Kleenex for what I only assumed would be a rousing ...

MartinC,

I don't see it like Pissy-boy does. He's entitled to his opinion, of course - and he politely encourages your work. So, all respect to him...

However, my favorite "teases" are "stories" such as this one. Frankly, I find the instruction-based teases boring. Maybe it's just me, but I don't ...

I agree completely, Uberber01. This tease fires on all cylinders. Great job, Slave1025. Thanks.

Sub-Routine, I think you're the one of the very best tease authors on site. Certainly, you're my favorite. While others write teases more frequently, your story lines are well-conceived and very engaging. You're also an excellent writer. I'm sure my enthusiasm is inspired by the theme common to all ...

In principle, I'm with blueballer. Bad writing can often ruin a potentially good tease.

However, "Learn Your Place" doesn't fall into that camp. Blueballer could find countless better examples that are virtually unreadable due to any of the endemic problems that many teases suffer from ...

Thanks for the effort.

For my money, far more important than the pictures or even the major story line is the quality of writing. The original "If you Give a Mouse a Cookie" was brilliant because of its outstanding writing. Another of his works of art, "It Was Always Your Choice", is another all ...

What an unbelievably hot, well-written tease.
Thank you, Sub-Routine.

This will join another of yours (It Was Never Your Choice) as one of my 10 all time favorites.

In my opinion there's a difference between (1) fantasizing about sucking cock, or (2) fantasizing about a woman humiliating you by coaxing one to suck cock.

My guess is that lots of men here fantasize about (2), and some fantasize about (1).

I'm not qualified to speculate on any latent ...

I agree completely. The effort that authors put forth in making a tease is appreciated. This well-intentioned effort is appreciated, too. I just don't have the will to decipher the text in works like this. Perhaps this sort of laziness comes from text messaging.

Consider two different, but thankfully non-mutually exclusive objectives:

1. Find a woman to love that loves you unconditionally and treats you with respect;
2. Find a woman that excites you by catering to your sexual kinks.

Outside of obtaining both, I'd much, much prefer (1) to (2). And mark my ...

Woof!!!

The mere fact that she's participating in this fantasy of yours (and enjoying it!) is a gift. I would urge you to resist the temptation to nudge her, especially in any direction contrary to her nature. She sounds like a winner. Be patient, and it's likely that her open-mindedness, combined with her ...

This is easily one of the two or three single best teases I've enjoyed. You write so well - I couldn't be in greater agreement with joeliwan (above). Terrific.