Feedback: Life Could Be A Dream
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Feedback: Life Could Be A Dream
Intended it to be longer, but I'm going to split it into two parts instead. I may have a SLIGHT chastity fetish - but then, none of these teases would exist without the CB-6000. Let me know what you think.
Currently spellchecking 490/490. ^ ^
Re: Feedback: Life Could Be A Dream
Awesome work, mate. Bloody brilliant!
Well-written, with a great twist between the tone of part one and part two.
It's clear to me that you'll remain one of my favourite tease authors.
If you ever need a beta tester or proofreader, please let me know.
Well-written, with a great twist between the tone of part one and part two.
It's clear to me that you'll remain one of my favourite tease authors.
If you ever need a beta tester or proofreader, please let me know.
Re: Feedback: Life Could Be A Dream
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Re: Feedback: Life Could Be A Dream
Sub-Routine, I think you're the one of the very best tease authors on site. Certainly, you're my favorite. While others write teases more frequently, your story lines are well-conceived and very engaging. You're also an excellent writer. I'm sure my enthusiasm is inspired by the theme common to all of your teases (the self-imposed but erotically nurtured, ever-intensifying sacrifice and humiliation), which definitely pushes all of my buttons. All four of your teases are in my list of 10 or 12 saved "favorites".
Another outstanding submission from Sub-Routine. Thank you.
Another outstanding submission from Sub-Routine. Thank you.

