Penny from next door
Penny from next door
Can you spell, "p-u-n-c-t-u-a-t-i-o-n?" Even if it were otherwise worth my time, the text is too much work to get through. No way to enjoy this, cuz the reader is too busy trying to figure out where one sentence is supposed to end and the next one begins. It's like trying to read the poet, e.e. cummings.
Re: Penny from next door
I agree completely. The effort that authors put forth in making a tease is appreciated. This well-intentioned effort is appreciated, too. I just don't have the will to decipher the text in works like this. Perhaps this sort of laziness comes from text messaging.
Re: Penny from next door
doink wrote:Can you spell, "p-u-n-c-t-u-a-t-i-o-n?" Even if it were otherwise worth my time, the text is too much work to get through. No way to enjoy this, cuz the reader is too busy trying to figure out where one sentence is supposed to end and the next one begins. It's like trying to read the poet, e.e. cummings.
Agreed
Re: Penny from next door
sad too, because the story and the model are both hot.
i mean
sad too because the story and the model are both hot
i mean
sad too because the story and the model are both hot
Re: Penny from next door
I wanted the typing practice, so I cleaned it up. It took me 15-20 minutes. I'm a little rusty, I may have over or misused some punctuation; The sentence structure isn't mine though. I preserved as much of the wording as I could. I didn't spell check either, but I am self aware enough to catch most typos. I find that these poor grammar teases usually have poor idea organization. The inspiration for the story was pretty good but there are some inconsistencies that make you do a reality check ( I realize it's fantasy and I hesitated to use that phrase).
Perhaps if you want to really write a tease you should revise it after you rub one out. Grammar and structured themes can go out the window when you're on the edge.
Well enough of me being an english teacher.
Hi, what's up? I'm so sorry but I saw you masturbating from my window. It was disturbing because I got wet looking down at you. Do you always masturbate in the rear patio? I saw you looking at porn on your lap top. There's no need to be so worried. I'm Penny. I once house-sat for you and your girlfriend, remember? I dealt with her but I never got to talk to you until now. You are so nervous, is your girlfriend coming back soon? No, she's not? Good. Let me see that cock, we need to talk. Stroke it for me, ok...
Look at my slender little body. Does it get you hard? Keep stroking. I was wondering if we could get off together. You see my panties are all wet from watching you pumping earlier and I wanted to join you. I was also wondering if you could convince your girlfriend to, well, hire me for some more house-sitting. I could watch the house while you two are out at work. The 20$ I got last time was nice, but if I could get a little more I would be glad to help you get off and we'd all be happy. I'm 20, and getting ready for college. I need a lot of extra money for books and clothes...
Then it's agreed. Give me 25 slow strokes. Watch my body while you slowly stroke your cock from the head to the balls. Make each stroke count.
I had a boyfriend and, ever since we broke up, I had to masturbate my pussy all alone. It makes me so happy to have, well, a jerk buddy; and we don't need love. I mean, look, you're stroking and you have a girlfriend. Sometimes it's not enough.
You are making me so wet again. I've already changed my panties once and they're ruined again, stuck to my velvety lips. Stroke that hard cock. I want you to get it so hard that the skin pulls back on the head. Give me 50 strokes.
Look at my ass. Hey, your cock is leaking pre-cum. Wipe it up and put it in your mouth. I wouldn't want your girlfriend to see any stains of cum out here. She would be suspicious of that.... Well, your cock was getting hard for something else, like my tender ass maybe. Place your other hand onto your balls. Crush them for me. Get all the pre-cum out of your shaft. Lick it up. Stare at my ass. Oh Please...
Stop!
Here, look at my beautiful tits. They're such nice young tits, right? I want to ask you to do a few things for me. If you do them I will help you cum, but, until I say I don't want you to go overboard.
Good. Slap your balls 10 times each. Oh, thank you.
Next, crush your balls with both of your hands-do it, now, about 5 times...
You are making me want to come over there and crush those balls for you. But I can't have that...
Look what you did, my nipples are getting hard. Grab your nipples and twist them while look at my young body. Tighter than hers, right?! You don't have to bother your girlfriend to tell you to do kinky things to yourself. No, I will do it for you from now on. It's a secret and you can keep a secret. Twist your nipples 20 times each. Then, stand up; slap your ass 20 times. Bend over that lawn chair and slap each cheek 10 times. Then sit back down. I'll show you more.
Here, both my breasts are exposed for you. Please give me 100 strokes. That should get that cock hard again. I'll play with my tits and you just jack it in your hand back and forth. And then...
Aww, you're ready to cum. Stop now... DON'T TOUCH THAT COCK...
Oh, I'm sorry. I get really angry when guys don't listen right away. Now, don't you want me to let you cum? You wouldn't want me to keep all that cum in your balls. No. Listen, I want you to tug at your ball sack. Stretch it as far as you can pull. Do this until you can collect some pre-cum on your finger. Then let me know how my cock tastes. Ok...
Well, does it taste sweet or creamy? Good. Now, I want you to wet that finger in your mouth. Get it really wet, then hold your cock and out and just rub the pee-hole. Do it until your fingers dry. Then re-lube and do it again. Do it 5 times, and don't cum. Let the fire on the tip of your cock help you to resist.
That was so hot baby. My pussy was so wet I had to loose those dirty panties. Maybe I'll let you keep them after we're done. Or, I could have you shoot a load into them and I could take them home and wear your mess all night in my sleep. Then it will mix with my wetness. You like that idea. Give me an edge then.
Ooooh! My pussy is starting to spasm. You can stop. Watch me fuck my hole until you go soft. Pinch your nipples while your cock shrinks. Don't be mad, I have to give and take pleasure sometimes. It's just like that; you will learn in time.
Take that pre-cum, lick it up for me. Wow, so hot. Ok, I need you to beat that cock in your fist really hard. Do it like your being raped by a stranger's hand. Feel the jism flow inside your balls, but resist Cuming. Don't cum yet. I promise I will make that decision soon. All I can do is probe my pussy. Jack it fast.
I'm cumming, but don't you dare think of doing the same. Tug at your balls again and milk out some pre-cum, then taste what I have done for you.
Next, I want you to flick your cock tip with your fingers. Come on, do this 10 times. Feel the sting. Grasp your shaft and wank while you flick it. Get it hard and red.
That was good. Stop!
Spit in your hand and smear everything your mouth can produce onto your balls. Get wet!
Next, I want you to slap your balls 25 times each. Quick, the faster you do it the less pain. Let’s see what I have...
That's it? Are you tired out?
I hope you like my little toy. See, I would never want that big cock inside of me. I could get pregnant or my tight little pussy could get all, well... stretched out like your girlfriends. Then later it would dry out. Aww, did I say something mean? Do you still want to cum? Ok. Obey all I ask. You will cum. Ok.
Give me 20 cock slaps. Put your dick in your hand. Slap it. Oh, I'm getting so horny while you rape yourself.
Aww, beat it. Fucking pound your shaft. Don't forget all that pre-cum, lick it off that meat for me. Oh, I bet your girlfriend never kept you on the edge like this. Whack it harder. Ah, it's dry, spit on it. I'm lubing my dildo, you lube my cock, yes MY cock. Do it.
You about ready to cum?
Ok, keep the hand pumping, but decrease your speed. Medium strokes for me. Count to 50 while you do it. Please, because I think I'm going to cum again. My new cock that you are stroking is so hot...
I'm cumming again. You keep stroking, but go slower. Keep jacking. I want you to stay at that pace until you're ready to explode. Then, when you feel the cum surging through your balls I want you to jump to the next page. Stroke steady, you're going to give me some of that cum now. Are you ready to cum?
You're gonna cum. Hands off that dick. Put your finger under the tip as the cum drizzles out. Catch it in your hand, don't waste it. Feel better honey?
I hope so. I'll be seeing so much more of you now. I would like 50$ each I house sit for you and tell your girlfriend I'm worth it. You’re not sure? Eat that cum and that fell out of your dick and I will see you as soon as your girlfriend isn't around. I just wanted you to save some cum for later. You don't want me telling her, right? And you do want me to help you cum again, right?
LOL
End
That was pretty easy and I always liked cleaning up papers. I could possibly be obliged to do it again. I'm not great but f u tlk lik a txtr no wat im sayin?/ then I can at least make it legible.
Edit: Well I went and spell checked it. I'm glad I did, I made a bunch of mistakes. I'm rusty. I didn't find that phrase posted below me though. Here's a sentence I thought up as a kid: I'm writing a letter to two too many headed monsters.
Perhaps if you want to really write a tease you should revise it after you rub one out. Grammar and structured themes can go out the window when you're on the edge.
Well enough of me being an english teacher.
Hi, what's up? I'm so sorry but I saw you masturbating from my window. It was disturbing because I got wet looking down at you. Do you always masturbate in the rear patio? I saw you looking at porn on your lap top. There's no need to be so worried. I'm Penny. I once house-sat for you and your girlfriend, remember? I dealt with her but I never got to talk to you until now. You are so nervous, is your girlfriend coming back soon? No, she's not? Good. Let me see that cock, we need to talk. Stroke it for me, ok...
Look at my slender little body. Does it get you hard? Keep stroking. I was wondering if we could get off together. You see my panties are all wet from watching you pumping earlier and I wanted to join you. I was also wondering if you could convince your girlfriend to, well, hire me for some more house-sitting. I could watch the house while you two are out at work. The 20$ I got last time was nice, but if I could get a little more I would be glad to help you get off and we'd all be happy. I'm 20, and getting ready for college. I need a lot of extra money for books and clothes...
Then it's agreed. Give me 25 slow strokes. Watch my body while you slowly stroke your cock from the head to the balls. Make each stroke count.
I had a boyfriend and, ever since we broke up, I had to masturbate my pussy all alone. It makes me so happy to have, well, a jerk buddy; and we don't need love. I mean, look, you're stroking and you have a girlfriend. Sometimes it's not enough.
You are making me so wet again. I've already changed my panties once and they're ruined again, stuck to my velvety lips. Stroke that hard cock. I want you to get it so hard that the skin pulls back on the head. Give me 50 strokes.
Look at my ass. Hey, your cock is leaking pre-cum. Wipe it up and put it in your mouth. I wouldn't want your girlfriend to see any stains of cum out here. She would be suspicious of that.... Well, your cock was getting hard for something else, like my tender ass maybe. Place your other hand onto your balls. Crush them for me. Get all the pre-cum out of your shaft. Lick it up. Stare at my ass. Oh Please...
Stop!
Here, look at my beautiful tits. They're such nice young tits, right? I want to ask you to do a few things for me. If you do them I will help you cum, but, until I say I don't want you to go overboard.
Good. Slap your balls 10 times each. Oh, thank you.
Next, crush your balls with both of your hands-do it, now, about 5 times...
You are making me want to come over there and crush those balls for you. But I can't have that...
Look what you did, my nipples are getting hard. Grab your nipples and twist them while look at my young body. Tighter than hers, right?! You don't have to bother your girlfriend to tell you to do kinky things to yourself. No, I will do it for you from now on. It's a secret and you can keep a secret. Twist your nipples 20 times each. Then, stand up; slap your ass 20 times. Bend over that lawn chair and slap each cheek 10 times. Then sit back down. I'll show you more.
Here, both my breasts are exposed for you. Please give me 100 strokes. That should get that cock hard again. I'll play with my tits and you just jack it in your hand back and forth. And then...
Aww, you're ready to cum. Stop now... DON'T TOUCH THAT COCK...
Oh, I'm sorry. I get really angry when guys don't listen right away. Now, don't you want me to let you cum? You wouldn't want me to keep all that cum in your balls. No. Listen, I want you to tug at your ball sack. Stretch it as far as you can pull. Do this until you can collect some pre-cum on your finger. Then let me know how my cock tastes. Ok...
Well, does it taste sweet or creamy? Good. Now, I want you to wet that finger in your mouth. Get it really wet, then hold your cock and out and just rub the pee-hole. Do it until your fingers dry. Then re-lube and do it again. Do it 5 times, and don't cum. Let the fire on the tip of your cock help you to resist.
That was so hot baby. My pussy was so wet I had to loose those dirty panties. Maybe I'll let you keep them after we're done. Or, I could have you shoot a load into them and I could take them home and wear your mess all night in my sleep. Then it will mix with my wetness. You like that idea. Give me an edge then.
Ooooh! My pussy is starting to spasm. You can stop. Watch me fuck my hole until you go soft. Pinch your nipples while your cock shrinks. Don't be mad, I have to give and take pleasure sometimes. It's just like that; you will learn in time.
Take that pre-cum, lick it up for me. Wow, so hot. Ok, I need you to beat that cock in your fist really hard. Do it like your being raped by a stranger's hand. Feel the jism flow inside your balls, but resist Cuming. Don't cum yet. I promise I will make that decision soon. All I can do is probe my pussy. Jack it fast.
I'm cumming, but don't you dare think of doing the same. Tug at your balls again and milk out some pre-cum, then taste what I have done for you.
Next, I want you to flick your cock tip with your fingers. Come on, do this 10 times. Feel the sting. Grasp your shaft and wank while you flick it. Get it hard and red.
That was good. Stop!
Spit in your hand and smear everything your mouth can produce onto your balls. Get wet!
Next, I want you to slap your balls 25 times each. Quick, the faster you do it the less pain. Let’s see what I have...
That's it? Are you tired out?
I hope you like my little toy. See, I would never want that big cock inside of me. I could get pregnant or my tight little pussy could get all, well... stretched out like your girlfriends. Then later it would dry out. Aww, did I say something mean? Do you still want to cum? Ok. Obey all I ask. You will cum. Ok.
Give me 20 cock slaps. Put your dick in your hand. Slap it. Oh, I'm getting so horny while you rape yourself.
Aww, beat it. Fucking pound your shaft. Don't forget all that pre-cum, lick it off that meat for me. Oh, I bet your girlfriend never kept you on the edge like this. Whack it harder. Ah, it's dry, spit on it. I'm lubing my dildo, you lube my cock, yes MY cock. Do it.
You about ready to cum?
Ok, keep the hand pumping, but decrease your speed. Medium strokes for me. Count to 50 while you do it. Please, because I think I'm going to cum again. My new cock that you are stroking is so hot...
I'm cumming again. You keep stroking, but go slower. Keep jacking. I want you to stay at that pace until you're ready to explode. Then, when you feel the cum surging through your balls I want you to jump to the next page. Stroke steady, you're going to give me some of that cum now. Are you ready to cum?
You're gonna cum. Hands off that dick. Put your finger under the tip as the cum drizzles out. Catch it in your hand, don't waste it. Feel better honey?
I hope so. I'll be seeing so much more of you now. I would like 50$ each I house sit for you and tell your girlfriend I'm worth it. You’re not sure? Eat that cum and that fell out of your dick and I will see you as soon as your girlfriend isn't around. I just wanted you to save some cum for later. You don't want me telling her, right? And you do want me to help you cum again, right?
LOL
End
That was pretty easy and I always liked cleaning up papers. I could possibly be obliged to do it again. I'm not great but f u tlk lik a txtr no wat im sayin?/ then I can at least make it legible.
Edit: Well I went and spell checked it. I'm glad I did, I made a bunch of mistakes. I'm rusty. I didn't find that phrase posted below me though. Here's a sentence I thought up as a kid: I'm writing a letter to two too many headed monsters.
Last edited by miatly on Fri Feb 13, 2009 2:03 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Penny from next door
I think you hit the penis on the head, there.
Thats what it makes me think, that the writer is getting so excited, that they lose their way.
of course, it is hard to hit keys on two sides of the board with only one hand free.
And just for you, "I dont want you to get your little dick to hard with what your doing too it"
Thats what it makes me think, that the writer is getting so excited, that they lose their way.
of course, it is hard to hit keys on two sides of the board with only one hand free.
And just for you, "I dont want you to get your little dick to hard with what your doing too it"
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Oh goddamnit, now I have to spell check it.
"I dont want you two get you're little dick to hard with what your doing too it"
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"I dont want you two get you're little dick to hard with what your doing too it"
fixt