The crazy bitch at the sperm bank - FEEDBACK

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Nezhul
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The crazy bitch at the sperm bank - FEEDBACK

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Strange this one has such a low rating. OK, there are teases better, but there are FAR worse, and I don't think the rating for this one should be as low. So I'v descided to post feedback.

First of all, I don't really view a lot of teases below 4 stars, but in this case I was actually interested what's pictures on the thumbnail - ass or pussy. Didn't spend much time trying to see the small picture I clicked it to see for myself.
Now the startof a tease is pretty depressing. The story and the pictures are a rather turn-off for me. That should also be said about the ending.
But the main action is pretty decent. Not an award-winner surely, but the author took time to find a good model and organise pictures in a good way, and even make it a few rounds. I would recommend doing something about "stroke 200 times" thing, as it's actually quite dumb and not sexual. But the tease left surprisingly good mood after itself (if not for the story, mind).
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The tease was also very short. A lot of story dialog followed by only a few pages looped of stroking instructions. Overall, it was a decent tease.
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Post by mr-max »

I agree. For me it was above average and I liked the idea. Although I have to say I knew what was coming. The thumb gave it away.

Still it was a bit short and especially the action part was a bit uncreative. But the storyline was something different and I liked the catch although it was predictable.
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Post by Malliearreal »

Although I have to say I knew what was coming. The thumb gave it away.
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