Yeah, the tease can be finished in about 10 minutes. That is short, but it seemed like the right length of time given the scenario. I'm working on part 2 as we speak, and if anything it's too long, so I have to believe there's a balance there.
You're simply the best author on milovana.com in my opinion. Every single one of your teases is perfect and Flashback is no exception. I'm glad you're back and i can't wait to play the next part of your new series.
Try GuideMe to play Milovana Teases offline or create your own offline teases with highres images and videos...
Look at Hearts Club or Pilgrim Quest or My Succubus if you wanna see whats possible with GuideMe...
I created HD-versions for TeaseMe to play the available two parts offline in High-Resolution. I hope thats ok. Of course, everybody who likes the HD-Import into TeaseMe should rate your online teases at milovana.com! I already did... both earned a 5 star rating.
Try GuideMe to play Milovana Teases offline or create your own offline teases with highres images and videos...
Look at Hearts Club or Pilgrim Quest or My Succubus if you wanna see whats possible with GuideMe...
Another easy 5 star from me too - the second part was amazing
Specifically love the way you split the use of each picture into many, shorter duration pages... Makes it feel a lot more dynamic and interesting, and as far as I'm concerned it has no downsides at all. Wish more authors will inherit that idea in the future because it rocks.
It would be nothing without the great narrative tho, really amazing work.
With Decker gone, I'm truly glad we have new, great authors like yourself to fill their shoes
These people yearned for enlightenment. But who did they have to turn to? Who did they have to place upon a pedestal so that they may bask in the glow of their own essence? In short, there was no one. But now 1885 has returned. He is the bright beam of enlightenment that will serve as the avenging sword of taste and decency.
No longer will the unwashed masses suffer the injustice of grossly substandard teases. No longer will they be required to obtain impossibly rare items. No longer will they be forced to perform autoerotic acts to the ticking of a metronome; or worse, to vacuous pop music. No longer will they be presented with characters extracted as-is from Edwin Abbott's satirical novella "Flatland". No, now a new age is dawning. The future is upon us, and a glorious one it is.
Fantastic new series, 1885, and my thanks also for returning with such a strong tease! The 2nd part about drove me nuts, waiting when told, etc...but was totally worth it. I'm sure the finale will be just as great - thanks again!