FB: Happy Birthday Mr. P

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FB: Happy Birthday Mr. P

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This is a post to catch any and all feedback for my new Webtease 'Happy Birthday Mr. P' ... I hope you all like it.
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the link for your tease is

Happy Birthday Mr. P

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Re: FB: Happy Birthday Mr. P

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i enjoyed reading this tease, and the pics are great, but this is more like a story rather than a tease. No instruction
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Re: FB: Happy Birthday Mr. P

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Les: D'oh. Thanks.

isaccs: Yep, some people like the instruction type Teases, others like the story type ones. I generally like to write the story type ones. But thanks for the feedback, maybe I'll try writing an instruction one eventually.
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