Hey, hope everyone is well.
It's taken a while, but I've managed to finish a draft version of the second part of the series. It might well suffer from some lapses in style or repetition. I decided to publish it now without testing or editing as I'm not sure how much time I'll be able to dedicate to it this month. I'll probably end up having loads of time, but hey .
Any feedback would appreciated. It'll help when I get the chance to edit it
Enjoy!
Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
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Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
That fleeting awkwardness you get when someone mentions the abbreviation CBT in everyday converstion?
Yeah, that probably means you're a Milovanian
Yeah, that probably means you're a Milovanian
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Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
My oppinion : Bad model.
She looks like she is 14, come on..I dont yerk to my cousin -.-
But the tease itself is really fun. Ball crushing isnt my thing but in all really entertaining :)
She looks like she is 14, come on..I dont yerk to my cousin -.-
But the tease itself is really fun. Ball crushing isnt my thing but in all really entertaining :)
Es kann kein Zufall sein, dass sich Lust auf Frust reimt..
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Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
Name: Ariel
Age: 24
Birth Date: 14 march 1985
Location: Montreal, Quebec - Canada
http://arielrebel.com/english/?
Age: 24
Birth Date: 14 march 1985
Location: Montreal, Quebec - Canada
http://arielrebel.com/english/?
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Why do I have to stop being a KID now I can afford it.
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Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
Impossible.les wrote: Age: 24
Birth Date: 14 march 1985
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Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
It is possible, if the website manager hasn't looked at the website in the last 2 years to adjust the age manually.Alliteration wrote:Impossible.les wrote: Age: 24
Birth Date: 14 march 1985
Porn sites tend to be accurate about birth date, and wrong about age. For almost 4 years, Tawnee Stone was 21 years old, and I think the last two years she is now only 22.
Ariel Rebel is definitely 18 years of age or older. Anyways, why do you not yerk to your cousin?Philze wrote:My oppinion : Bad model.
She looks like she is 14, come on..I dont yerk to my cousin -.-
But the tease itself is really fun. Ball crushing isnt my thing but in all really entertaining :)
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Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
But Ariel looks younger.
For me its like legal child porn here.
Why I dont yerk to my cousin?
Because she is 14.
For me its like legal child porn here.
Why I dont yerk to my cousin?
Because she is 14.
Es kann kein Zufall sein, dass sich Lust auf Frust reimt..
Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
Perhaps you have a difficult time determining age groups. She certainly does not look underage. Young, yes - she most certainly looks youthful. But 14? No.
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Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
Trust me if Seraph0x had the slightest doubt the tease would be history.
I will have nothing to do with child porn either.
But guys be careful we act on a
View to a Kill
here.
If it looks under 18 its killed off.
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Why do I have to stop being a KID now I can afford it.
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Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
I never said she is under 18.
I just said it kills the tease for me because she LOOKS that young.
I just said it kills the tease for me because she LOOKS that young.
Es kann kein Zufall sein, dass sich Lust auf Frust reimt..
Re: Feedback - A Rebel's Yell: Part 2
I enjoyed the tease and did everything she said. I really enjoyed the ball tapping part. she looks of age and did it for me. one of my favorite teases. hope part 3 comes soon.Kalivan wrote:Hey, hope everyone is well.
It's taken a while, but I've managed to finish a draft version of the second part of the series. It might well suffer from some lapses in style or repetition. I decided to publish it now without testing or editing as I'm not sure how much time I'll be able to dedicate to it this month. I'll probably end up having loads of time, but hey .
Any feedback would appreciated. It'll help when I get the chance to edit it
Enjoy!
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