First Webtease

[chris1972]

Have really enjoyed this website. Just did my first tease entitled Owned By Goddess Kimmy. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.

[Chico]

I thought this was an excellent web-tease - simple in concept but very challenging with good use of time.
The build up of tension and anticipation of what was coming next just suited me - thanks a lot

I have one small comment which I will PM to you.

[chris1972]

Yeah, the 5 minutes of stroking should've had better directions. I also would've changed some things about the ending. Next time, I'll think things out a little more rather than just rushing through.