Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
- verysmallcar
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Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
Hi everyone, this was my first attempt, what do you think?
I know some people get irked by the lack of any user side objectives, but I tried to make it as interesting and stimulating as possible, especially for those who fantasize about chastity.
I know some people get irked by the lack of any user side objectives, but I tried to make it as interesting and stimulating as possible, especially for those who fantasize about chastity.
Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
I really enjoyed it, looking forward to the next part, keep up the good work!!!
Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
I also liked it. It was interesting and the girl is a total babe
One edit/suggestion, on page 9, you have "some surprised" and it should be "some surprises".
Also giving up the key to the ex is a bit too much to be plausible, I think. Perhaps just give her the spare key for now...
One edit/suggestion, on page 9, you have "some surprised" and it should be "some surprises".
Also giving up the key to the ex is a bit too much to be plausible, I think. Perhaps just give her the spare key for now...
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Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
I loved it!
What could be worse for the poor guy than letting the ex-wife in on the action!
Write. More. Now. Please.
What could be worse for the poor guy than letting the ex-wife in on the action!
Write. More. Now. Please.
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Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
I enjoyed it, hope you write more!
Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
that was nice! 
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Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
Well giving the key the the ex, is what shows that in fact she is laughing at him, and that he's so stupid to beleive her, she's playing innocent, while she's a really mean bitch at heart. An personnally I expect her to tell him she is lying on him and she was fucking other men long ago, maybe some close people to him and lower class guys. Why not being his ex slave. But she is oviously not into T&D or not into him, and she wants to let his ex torture him.cactusman wrote:Also giving up the key to the ex is a bit too much to be plausible, I think. Perhaps just give her the spare key for now...
For the spare key, it would be a double chance to get release, absolutely not a good idea. No harm can b done with the spare key.
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I suppose that depends on what the author had in mind. If the author does want her to be a heartless bitch,EternalLust wrote:Well giving the key the the ex, is what shows that in fact she is laughing at him, and that he's so stupid to beleive her, she's playing innocent, while she's a really mean bitch at heart. An personnally I expect her to tell him she is lying on him and she was fucking other men long ago, maybe some close people to him and lower class guys. Why not being his ex slave. But she is oviously not into T&D or not into him, and she wants to let his ex torture him.cactusman wrote:Also giving up the key to the ex is a bit too much to be plausible, I think. Perhaps just give her the spare key for now...
For the spare key, it would be a double chance to get release, absolutely not a good idea. No harm can b done with the spare key.
then your view could be right.
But I kind of like these things to be more subtle. The idea with the spare key is that once the spare key is in the hands of the ex, then the main key could get lost accidentally...
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Unless...... the girlfriend really is nice and trying to please her man, but the bitchy ex is so manipulative, she convinced the girl to give her the key and she will use it to control them bothcactusman wrote:I suppose that depends on what the author had in mind. If the author does want her to be a heartless bitch,EternalLust wrote:Well giving the key the the ex, is what shows that in fact she is laughing at him, and that he's so stupid to beleive her, she's playing innocent, while she's a really mean bitch at heart. An personnally I expect her to tell him she is lying on him and she was fucking other men long ago, maybe some close people to him and lower class guys. Why not being his ex slave. But she is oviously not into T&D or not into him, and she wants to let his ex torture him.cactusman wrote:Also giving up the key to the ex is a bit too much to be plausible, I think. Perhaps just give her the spare key for now...
For the spare key, it would be a double chance to get release, absolutely not a good idea. No harm can b done with the spare key.
then your view could be right.
But I kind of like these things to be more subtle. The idea with the spare key is that once the spare key is in the hands of the ex, then the main key could get lost accidentally...
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Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
Very interesting theories.
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Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
That was where my mind spun off to. I was envisioning, after a few weeks, the ex convincing the gf that you can't be a good top if you don't know what you're talking about, convincing the gf to get her own chastity belt (just to see what it's like, of course).cumhardy wrote:Unless...... the girlfriend really is nice and trying to please her man, but the bitchy ex is so manipulative, she convinced the girl to give her the key and she will use it to control them both
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Re: Girlfriend learns chastity with some unexpected help
This tease combined with this discussion are great film material
(as a concept of course)
