Webtease Tease and Denial

[dracket]

hi, I've just released my very first webtease:
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showflash.php?id=8660

Feedback are welcome!

[Phaenixeon]

Hey I just finished your tease and loved it. The ending was great, I love having to hold the edge not knowing if or when I'll be allowed to finish.

I'd definitely encourage you to make more, the site hasn't had any decent flash teases in a while. I just wish we got to see more of the model.

[dracket]

I'm glad you like it.

If there is something wrong with the language or maybe some hints to express something in a smarter way in the tease, just tell it, because english isn't my native language.

[JelloBoy]

How about a random ending?

[dracket]

How about a random ending?

I thought about. But I decided to use this one because I' haven't seen much of this kind.
Of course in order to replay a certain tease a randomized ending is more suitable.

[Chico]

Well done Dracket a nice tease, well balanced and well thought out