Feedback: The Interviews: Part 2

[WeakerS3x]

Again all feedback is welcome.

I'm guessing people will want these to go longer. I'm working on that. I really just need to stop trying to hammer out a tease starting a 11 pm on a work night...

[ThomasKu]

You don't need to hurry. Take your time writing the teases. And if that means that we have to wait a few days for the next part that's just fine.

To the tease itself: It's a nice idea and very well done and written. Part 2, though, seemed a bit short. Would have loved this expensive expert to play and tease a little longer. So she can show some more of her teasing-skills...

[droog]

First of all, a big thankyou to weakerS3x for creating these stories.

On a positive note: the pictures are stunning.

Personally I found the wife pictures more erotic than the domme in her crazy outfit. The way wife was carelessly showing her stockings in the first shot, the way you can see her nice legs through the skirt in the third picture. Those pics work very well - if the wife is teasing you in the story. Even better if you are locked in a chastity device per the story locked up (as I am now, so my reaction could be biased!).

Personally the way I would like to see this series go is the wife locks you up to ensure fidelity given that you are spending time with domme's. She starts going out enjoying her money and new lifestyle... drops hints about the fun she's having. Has you do more and more chores, gives you less and less sex, except for orally service... then gradually she starts to drop hints that you seem to be having she needs more.

I think one long tease where she does the "I need more", "you want me to be happy don't you?", "you understand I need a cock inside me, right....?" kind of thing and slowly, inorexably takes you down the path to full-blown cuckold.

-droog

Just my opinion... I recognize that others may have different ideas. The author seems to be going in the bondage/feminization route, but cuckold seems to fit the premise of the series much better to me...

[dtspam]

I like the idea of this series. The teases are a bit short, but since they seem only to be the introduction, that's fine. I like to be surprised by teases with a new plot (and maybe some new teasing ideas), so I won't make any suggestions for the plot. Just keep up the good work. At some point you have to develop the plot away from this "interview"-scheme of cause, but I think the series would lose, if you just use a common plot then and don't develop the ideas you started out with.

[WeakerS3x]

I'll be honest. Cuckolding isn't really my thing. But when I wrote the first tease I felt that it lent itself very well to going in that direction. Probably starting with the dungeon contractor... (perhaps it's some kind of subconsciousness coming through in my writing) IT may still go that way. I'll keep you guessing.

I like the idea of a jealous streak coming through. That may happen.

The length of these I'm really struggling with... When I gave Part 2 a test run last night I felt like it ended very abruptly.

Part of the problem is the picture sets I'm finding. I found a lot of 12 - 15 picture sets. In Part 2 I had to reuse some pictures a few time.

(I did a high and low search last night to keep myself in pictures of the wife which I think I'll be good with for few more teases.)

I also lack a lot of creativity when it comes to giving direction on the stroking. I find teases where they force to say use the non-dominant hand or something else distracting because those other ways don't usually work for me.

And edging, if I'm really, honestly on the edge... I'm probably going to finish. I won't lie.

When a tease tells me edge 289 times and then continue, I just continue.

So I'm finding it hard to keep you going long enough to be stay interesting and not force blatant repeat of pictures or an inexplicable change in characters. I've kind of walled myself into this interview thing for the time being.

Maybe once we make a decision I can get a few usable photo sets to keep the mistress going.

<Personally I found the wife pictures more erotic than the domme in her crazy outfit. >

I tend to agree with you. It's one of the great tragedies that porn industry feels they need to show a woman crudely displaying herself offering nothing to the imagination. To quote The Big Lebowski, "the mind is the biggest erogenous zone."

Having said that, I do love the outfits... I'm a sucker for a woman in leather or latex or a uniform or costume or bound or...crudely displayed... Okay, so I'm no purist.

I'm strongly believe that if you have good pictures are 80% toward good tease. Maybe good pictures just inspire the best storyline.

[Forevergallant]

I am excited to see the sequel already, and can't wait for more. Love the feminization aspect, and wouldn't be too fond of it going direction of cuckolding, but wouldnt change my opinion of your quality. I can't wait to see more teases from you, and just might..try to come up with one or two myself.

Oh, and I agree with the "edge this many times" I have trouble edging beyond..maybe three times.

[doggy]

+1 for the wife being more erotic than the domme. (in the first tease too).
I really love your story idea and am looking forward to more parts. If it tends towards cuckolding or feminization und chastity is your decision alone, an dont' we all love to be surprised?