mistress x - kristina

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BoredOMK17
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mistress x - kristina

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amazing tease, i loved it.
i don't think i can wait to do the 2nd one....

My only suggestion would be to introduce Kristina more, so we feel like we know her..
and I'm really hoping you make days into the double digits with this series.

Your one of our good writers<3
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These teases are not for me, I'm not impressed withe writing nor the content - pretty sure I'll skip the series (which should definitely NOT make it out of the single digits!)
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hahaha I can see what your talking about now that it isn't 5am.

But I wouldn't mind the series going on and on for a while. The writing style isn't BAD.
Oh one more suggestion, 500 is an unrealistic number, you can't expect us to sit there and smack ourselves for 15 minutes every other page mistress X, we don't have that kind of time.

Also, saying "I'm a loser" after every stroke really killed the momentum and doesnt do much, especially if you say that we need to do that for 200 strokes.

Still a fun series so far, really, I enjoyed it.
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