I had an issue with Nyx "Forgetting" my media and scripts when the original version was contained in one long tease. (200plus pages). So I broke down sections into sub sections and went with shorter installments.
I will be uploading more "intallments" as I complete them.
Any comments or suggestions are welcome. This is my second ever attempt at flash though so play nice please.
I very much liked part one
good pacing, nice photoes.
Kinda reminded me of some of Anna Rice's Porn series, sleeping Beauty.
I am not a big punishment fan so I was very mildly upset at the 'forced' choice of being punished.
I loved the shaft/ head choice.
I liked the instructions about not tensing the penis
I think I did it correctly. (perhaps you could expian what you intended?)
Good tease. looking forward to part 3 (which I hope is similar to part one)
I loved this tease, and am swollen and desperate for more.
A sign of good tease is when you are so aroused that you discover a new part of the female body that drives you wild. The curve of crease that the top of the thigh makes with the stomach while squatting. So hard not to tense. And both mistresses had a pose that featured. Ohh and those red panties in the behind scenes..... what can I say I'm a mess at the mement, and keep hitting refresh waiting for part 3.
Loved the pace of the image changes. This is a key for me. Not a fan of the 5 edges then move on style
On the Ann Rice sleeping beauty novel, I almost bought that book at a second hand store, but I didn't. Now I regret it given others here seemed to enjoy it.
On a general tease note, the black background on flash teases makes the images *pop* more. Love them..,
Hurry up Tiggerly1 - you've found a new fan of your work.
I just finished part 2. One of the hardest things I've ever done in my life was putting my cock away at the end of that tease. Great job! I want to tense my cock up and stroke the whole shaft so bad I could barely stand it.
Big thank you for these! Love parts 4 and 5. Thanks for continuing the series! There is something about having a task to do within a time limit...having to focus both on the directions and the clock and the task at hand (ha ha) that really does it for me. I find these very challenging yet fun.