Isabela
Isabela
"Messaging" is something I do with a phone in my hand and I put it to my ear to listen for something or someone. "Massaging" is what you meant. Very pretty model. The text is too much work to get through. Do they teach about commas and other punctuation marks anywhere in the schools these days?
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cbtslavemale
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Re: Isabela
Yike, now i aint one for normally makin comments on what others think of teases built on here.
But, on this occasion I gotta say, if the person who typed the tease aint english speakin then they aint done so bad. As for the text, maybe grammar wasnt to great, but at least it was broken into readable small para's. I believe the tease that you did had this exact problem but got a good rating.
In my opinion cudos to anyone who writes half decent teaes, even with the odd glitch.....
sorry to much caffeine today me thinks lol
But, on this occasion I gotta say, if the person who typed the tease aint english speakin then they aint done so bad. As for the text, maybe grammar wasnt to great, but at least it was broken into readable small para's. I believe the tease that you did had this exact problem but got a good rating.
In my opinion cudos to anyone who writes half decent teaes, even with the odd glitch.....
sorry to much caffeine today me thinks lol
Re: Isabela
Yikes, now I aint one for normally making comments on what others think of teases built on here.
But, on this occasion I gotta say, if the person who typed the tease aint english speaking then they aint done so bad. As for the text, maybe grammar wasnt too great, but at least it was broken into readable small paragraph ' s. I believe the tease that you did had this exact problem but got a good rating.
In my opinion kudos to anyone who writes half decent teases, even with the odd glitch.....
Sorry too much caffeine today me thinks lol
It's like you tried to do it wrong. Actually, since you used aint three times in two sentences I think you did. I think you're trolling. The other option is just sad.
But, on this occasion I gotta say, if the person who typed the tease aint english speaking then they aint done so bad. As for the text, maybe grammar wasnt too great, but at least it was broken into readable small paragraph ' s. I believe the tease that you did had this exact problem but got a good rating.
In my opinion kudos to anyone who writes half decent teases, even with the odd glitch.....
Sorry too much caffeine today me thinks lol
It's like you tried to do it wrong. Actually, since you used aint three times in two sentences I think you did. I think you're trolling. The other option is just sad.
Re: Isabela
Well I'm sure the tease writer is not a native English speaker and you are right that we shouldn't really have a go. But reading that I had to "Message my dick" just made me laugh and sort of ruined the tease.cbtslavemale wrote:Yike, now i aint one for normally makin comments on what others think of teases built on here.
But, on this occasion I gotta say, if the person who typed the tease aint english speakin then they aint done so bad. As for the text, maybe grammar wasnt to great, but at least it was broken into readable small para's. I believe the tease that you did had this exact problem but got a good rating.
In my opinion cudos to anyone who writes half decent teaes, even with the odd glitch.....
sorry to much caffeine today me thinks lol
There should be a holding area for teases like this where us native English speakers who don't have the imagination or ability to write a decent tease could help those who are struggling. I would certainly be happy to convert this type of English to something easier to read. Maybe it could be an option added at the end of the tease editor?