Sup guys,
i recently released my second tease The Sleepover
I worked on it for quiet a while and would love for you to check it out.
Tell me your favorite and least favorite parts so i can tune my stories better for the next tease.
Please report issues and bugs here.
I think it's completely fixed now.
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Amazing tease. Will there be a continuation? The story line kind of asks for it.
I didn't notice any real bugs, there are 1-2 cases where you're expected to get to edge, but there is no clear instruction. One was with Aidra if I remember correctly, when she plays the music. She makes you hold it for the first time, then tells you to stop and expects you to hold for the second time, but does not instruct you clearly to do that.
There are also a few instance where you should be able to skip a break by pressing space but can't.
thanks for the great feedback. Fixed the aidra part but every skip prompt i checked worked as expected, sorry you had to wait.
Guess i'll lower the timer just in case.
I put a picture of how i set all of them up below, that wrong?
Not really that experienced so tell me please.
Also i did setup a part 2 on purpose but i'm gonna take my time until i get a good idea how to execute it.
If you got one i'd be happy to read it.
I would be fine with a similar style sequel of the denial ending with the girl friend. You've settled into the live as a denied slave that gets teased and edged regularly. Friends staying over, being lent to friends for a night etc.
If you want to continue the plot somehow, you could make it the engagement, wedding, honeymoon trip. Or you could explore some of the more extreme ideas that came up, like renting the slave out to strangers, cuckolding etc.
Personally, I like the cruel side of her, I didn't like it too much when she was doubting it a bit, or I had to give a resisting answer. So I would love to see a sequel where this relationship has developed into her being the harsh domme she clearly wants to be.
Just playing along on day 2 so far but it's already been a very good experience. It is clearly visible you put a lot of effort in it and, if all days are as developed as ther first one, well, it will take me a while to finish it, yet, but i can already say it's a very nice tease.
If i had to make a small critique is maybe the short to non existant pauses between many of the edges; i mean, i kinda like repeated edging but being told to edge, then when i click on the "on edge" button being told to stop and 1 second later to edge again is pratically like havintg to hold a long edge in the end.
With such non existing pauses i could not even come down from the previous edge than i was asked to do another one (this was particularly evident in the introduction day when your girlfriend start to make you edge with just snaps. Honestly, i wasn't able to keep up even closely with the frequency of those snaps. I don't know if it was intended or not, but in the end i ended up edging maybe half the time she snapped)
Daragorn wrote: Mon Jan 05, 2026 1:02 pm
Just playing along on day 2 so far but it's already been a very good experience. It is clearly visible you put a lot of effort in it and, if all days are as developed as ther first one, well, it will take me a while to finish it, yet, but i can already say it's a very nice tease.
If i had to make a small critique is maybe the short to non existant pauses between many of the edges; i mean, i kinda like repeated edging but being told to edge, then when i click on the "on edge" button being told to stop and 1 second later to edge again is pratically like havintg to hold a long edge in the end.
With such non existing pauses i could not even come down from the previous edge than i was asked to do another one (this was particularly evident in the introduction day when your girlfriend start to make you edge with just snaps. Honestly, i wasn't able to keep up even closely with the frequency of those snaps. I don't know if it was intended or not, but in the end i ended up edging maybe half the time she snapped)
Oh shit so the snaps did catch people offguard. It was supposed to be a gag, she snaps a bunch of times and laughs at you even trying to keep up. I'll look at it, thanks.
Glad you liked it tho. Only gonna get harder from here.
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kerkersklave wrote: Sun Jan 04, 2026 8:48 pm
The settings you've shown are fine. It wasn't a big issue, it was like 2-3 times and the waits weren't very long.
I would be fine with a similar style sequel of the denial ending with the girl friend. You've settled into the live as a denied slave that gets teased and edged regularly. Friends staying over, being lent to friends for a night etc.
If you want to continue the plot somehow, you could make it the engagement, wedding, honeymoon trip. Or you could explore some of the more extreme ideas that came up, like renting the slave out to strangers, cuckolding etc.
Personally, I like the cruel side of her, I didn't like it too much when she was doubting it a bit, or I had to give a resisting answer. So I would love to see a sequel where this relationship has developed into her being the harsh domme she clearly wants to be.
those are some great pointers, i'll start work on a sequel right now
If you want harsh, you gonna get harsh
MrNadra wrote: Mon Jan 05, 2026 6:47 pm
Oh shit so the snaps dod catch people offguard. It was supposed to be a gag, she snaps a bunch of times and laughs at you even tryinfg to keep up. I'll look at it, thanks.
Glad you liked it tho. Only gonna get harder from here.
well, there are quite a few teases around milovana that uses that idea of her not even saying it but just condition you to edge to a snap of her fingers (and i damn love the idea ) so i thought you were going that route too... i just supposed you got the timings a bit way too fast ahahah
I played the tease a couple of days ago in one sitting (that was some event... xD) and now I finally get to give my feedback. I think the tease is really well designed. I like the continuity and especially the use of images from the same gallery on different days to showcase for example scenes in the bathroom. My guess would be that you thought this through quite heavily with lots of contemplation what would be fitting and it shows!
Really enjoyed the focus on headplay. At some point it was really freaking intense..
I noticed on the last day that some portions with Riley (when waiting) were unskippable even if the text mentioned it. It also would have been nice to choose her in the end for that "special" treatment that she alluded to quite a lot.
To give some constructive feedback/ideas: For a new tease, maybe you could add even more variations in the stroke styles and/or include more grip changes (there was grip strength increase but rarely something about decrease) or something similar.
In any regard: thank you very much for all the effort that you took! I think at some point, I am going to "role play" this over the course of a week :)
Good work mate, I played, and like this a lot. But there was some issue for me if you can help, I completed Day 1, clicked continue and Day 2 started. After some time, I closed it. Then started it again and options for Day 1 and Day 2 were available in start. But today, when I started it only Day 1 option was available.
divinedesire wrote: Tue Jan 13, 2026 10:47 am
Good work mate, I played, and like this a lot. But there was some issue for me if you can help, I completed Day 1, clicked continue and Day 2 started. After some time, I closed it. Then started it again and options for Day 1 and Day 2 were available in start. But today, when I started it only Day 1 option was available.
Same issue here, my progress isn't saved after Day 1. I think I found a cheat though:
go to the girls gallery and select Elle Alexandra, wait until the final picture and click "Cheat progress". Then reload the tease. It unlocked all days for me.
) so i thought you were going that route too... i just supposed you got the timings a bit way too fast ahahah