How many lessons do you need?

[schefflera0101]

Hi everyone,
I am pleased to present the third part of my series. Ariel wants to inject some energy into your “relationship” and invites a few friends over.
How many lessons do you need?

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Please let me know what you think.
Have fun with it.

[Daragorn]

oh my! this has always been one of my most favourite series. i really loved the storytelling and the dialogues. i am really hyped to see a new chapter. i will try it asap!

[Lestat]

Five stars tease, a lot of work has been put in there.

I'd have like it a bit faster (but I know I'm the fast reader here)...
...and I'd have like more choices with consequences (but I understand how much more work that would have been. Maybe a few less chapters in balance?)

Nonetheless I really enjoyed it, well done!

[South_Pix06]

The great Schefflera is back with this new tease, on the top of the Milovana production.
Up to me, except the Netherworld series which a little bit apart (and not my cup of tea ), I'm playing quite regularly all the others (4 mazes, edge slave training, 3 lessons, you think you can edge).
Thanks a lot for this huge work!

[Daragorn]

So far, as expected, it has been great! I am only on chapter 2 yet because, for once, i am trying to go through it following the supposed timeframe narrated in the events (although i don't know if i will be able not to do more than one day at a time since i am thrilled to see how it goes forward eheheh)

[nsxoxy]

Did this in one session today, and really enjoyed it. Whenever I check for newly released teases, I'm always hoping to see a continuation from a personal favorite series, like this. I wish there were many more from this (I suppose I don't know how many lessons I need...) Because this is a story that is more fun, the more progress you make into it.

My feedback would be, for anyone who wants to break this up into multiple days, would be to give an indication at the end of a chapter if that chapter is the end of that "day" until tomorrow, or if the next part is to be continued later in that day (and when).

And, one typo worth changing, because it's one of the passwords (it does work) and the name of the last chapter

Spoiler: show

"loyality" is probably supposed to be "loyalty"?

Also, I found myself surprised that it ended when it did:

Spoiler: show

It felt like it was still progressing toward something to me, for some reason.

Thanks for these, as always. And as a side note, I'm still hopeful someone has a collection of the older photo galleries from Ariel Rebel's site, before she took it down.

[kokos201]

Hello
I really really loved this teased.
To be honest, I registered just so I could comment here.

Most intense chapter for me was clearly the "ruined day": this was masterpiece for me (maybe a bit because I was edging for like 6 or 7 days lol)
Ruined JOI are not so frequent, and often a bit rushed.
Here we spend to much time converging slowly, building the thing, guiding... Amazing!

Also the choices of models are very good, to me at least.
And cherry on the cake, I discovered that Leona (I am not 100% sure of the name) did a lot of content, in video also

I spend great days, thanks
Please, continue this serie, I love it.

[edgelovin]

Your edging focused teases are some of the best ever on this site. This series is also very good.

For this tease in particular though I felt that there was a lot of dialogue and timer pauses to get through which hurt the pacing. I feel like it would play better if those aspects were more streamlined.

Also, and this is very subjective of course: it seems like the type of edging was about 80/20 for holding vs edge and stop. Personally I feel that flipping that ratio works better, with frequent and repeated stop-start edges, and occasional edge holds. Again, that’s subjective, but mostly holding can almost get numbing, while stop-start keeps it more dynamic. Adding in different techniques and speeds also helps a lot with that (e.g. one finger, light grip, slow stroke etc.)

Thanks for reading and being open to feedback!

[schefflera0101]

Hi all,
Thank you very much for your (so far very positive) feedback. Anyone who has ever written a tease knows how much work goes into it. That's why I appreciate every constructive opinion.

Five stars tease, a lot of work has been put in there.

I'd have like it a bit faster (but I know I'm the fast reader here)...
...and I'd have like more choices with consequences (but I understand how much more work that would have been. Maybe a few less chapters in balance?)

Nonetheless I really enjoyed it, well done!

I always tried to control the times in the dialog-only scenes by clicking. When it comes to the “action” scenes, timing plays a big role - I didn't want to make them skippable.
As you wrote, more options quickly increase the size of the release exponentially. I decided on a more linear tease to minimize my work on the one hand and on the other hand I would probably run out of creativity at some point :D

The great Schefflera is back with this new tease, on the top of the Milovana production.
Up to me, except the Netherworld series which a little bit apart (and not my cup of tea ), I'm playing quite regularly all the others (4 mazes, edge slave training, 3 lessons, you think you can edge).
Thanks a lot for this huge work!

Nice to hear that. Keep it up

Did this in one session today, and really enjoyed it. Whenever I check for newly released teases, I'm always hoping to see a continuation from a personal favorite series, like this. I wish there were many more from this (I suppose I don't know how many lessons I need...) Because this is a story that is more fun, the more progress you make into it.

My feedback would be, for anyone who wants to break this up into multiple days, would be to give an indication at the end of a chapter if that chapter is the end of that "day" until tomorrow, or if the next part is to be continued later in that day (and when).

And, one typo worth changing, because it's one of the passwords (it does work) and the name of the last chapter

Spoiler: show

"loyality" is probably supposed to be "loyalty"?

Also, I found myself surprised that it ended when it did:

Spoiler: show

It felt like it was still progressing toward something to me, for some reason.

Thanks for these, as always. And as a side note, I'm still hopeful someone has a collection of the older photo galleries from Ariel Rebel's site, before she took it down.

Thanks for your kind words. I corrected the spelling mistake.
The end is the hardest part. If it were up to me, I would never let it end. But then I could never publish a tease either :D

Hello
I really really loved this teased.
To be honest, I registered just so I could comment here.

Most intense chapter for me was clearly the "ruined day": this was masterpiece for me (maybe a bit because I was edging for like 6 or 7 days lol)
Ruined JOI are not so frequent, and often a bit rushed.
Here we spend to much time converging slowly, building the thing, guiding... Amazing!

Also the choices of models are very good, to me at least.
And cherry on the cake, I discovered that Leona (I am not 100% sure of the name) did a lot of content, in video also

I spend great days, thanks
Please, continue this serie, I love it.

What an honor
I hope it has the effect I intended.
The girls full name is Leona Mia. Found her a few years ago and had to implement her.

Your edging focused teases are some of the best ever on this site. This series is also very good.

For this tease in particular though I felt that there was a lot of dialogue and timer pauses to get through which hurt the pacing. I feel like it would play better if those aspects were more streamlined.

Also, and this is very subjective of course: it seems like the type of edging was about 80/20 for holding vs edge and stop. Personally I feel that flipping that ratio works better, with frequent and repeated stop-start edges, and occasional edge holds. Again, that’s subjective, but mostly holding can almost get numbing, while stop-start keeps it more dynamic. Adding in different techniques and speeds also helps a lot with that (e.g. one finger, light grip, slow stroke etc.)

Thanks for reading and being open to feedback!

Thank you for your opinion.
It will help me a lot when I write another tease. Everyone has different preferences which is very subjective, of course, and I can never match the taste of every individual. But I'm always grateful for (constructive) criticism like yours.


Thank you very much for your opinions.

[anewname_guy]

Agonizing, painful, and… amazing! Being pushed to limits I didn’t know I could make… and great conversation and description along the way. And, the girls were so hot! The black one piece and heels… WOW!

Magnificent work again! Thanks!

[South_Pix06]

What is the full name of Lilit? I'd like to find some videos with her.....

[PlayfulGuy]

Your edging focused teases are some of the best ever on this site. This series is also very good.

I second that! I am away from home at present, and have been for several weeks. By chance I did "Teaching You a Lesson" just before leaving and have been totally stoked to get back home and do "One Lesson is Not Enough", and now I have another sequel to look forward to. It's going to be a VERY good summer!

Also, and this is very subjective of course: it seems like the type of edging was about 80/20 for holding vs edge and stop. Personally I feel that flipping that ratio works better, with frequent and repeated stop-start edges, and occasional edge holds. Again, that’s subjective, but mostly holding can almost get numbing, while stop-start keeps it more dynamic. Adding in different techniques and speeds also helps a lot with that (e.g. one finger, light grip, slow stroke etc.)

I haven't done this tease yet, but generally I agree that more balance/variety between holding and edge & stop is better for me too. I love edge holding, but for me it gets exhausting if there's too much, or too many that are too long (like more than a minute or two). For me edges longer than a minute or two should be few and further between. I'd make most holds 30 seconds or less, with some in the the 1 to 2 minute range, and only a few longer than that.

Variety is what really gets me. Like a series of edge and stop edges, then change it up by hold one, or two or 3, then more edge and stop edges. And for really building intensity, a series of edge and hold, starting with a short hold time, then each hold getting longer and longer.

What I really can't handle is rapid fire edging. I need at least 5 seconds between edges, and 7 to 10 is better.

Thanks for reading and being open to feedback!

I second this too! Your teases have always been top notch, and among the best on Milovana. I'm always happy to see a new release from you.

PG

[labrat]

Amazing!

A long time ago I was thinking I would write a tease, and after seeing Lilit in "Iana's maze", I really wanted to use her in a starring role. With Miss Rebel already starring, two of my most favorite models in the same tease was euphoric. From the title page I saw Leona was also in the tease. I could only hope that was Leona Mia. The second day in the tease who did I see but Sofi Shane, OMGOMG.

After using Mila Azul in the second part of this series, it almost felt like someone had hacked my computer. I could say I like your choice of models, but it would be just as accurate to say I like my choice of models. You just wrote the tease series I always wanted to write if I could write.

Also the games you seamlessly include within the story really match my predilections. I hate to rate my favorite teases, but this has to be in the running for one of the best. Actually, many of the teases you have written would qualify for that honor.

Thank you.

[nausea21]

Very nice tease!
But I still have problems entering the last chapter via password, I suspect there's still a mistake? When I try the different spellings, I get an "wrong password"-message, or when entering the one version I think is correct, the tease freezes. Maybe you have changed the password check, but not the site/location it is refering to?
So I alway have to start at the chapter with the ruined day, which makes it quite hard for me to finish the tease in one session. It's rather frustrating not to be able to start with the password to the last chapter - or maybe this is even intentional?

[schefflera0101]

What is the full name of Lilit? I'd like to find some videos with her.....

um, she's known as "Lilit A" or sometimes "Ariel"

Your edging focused teases are some of the best ever on this site. This series is also very good.

I second that! I am away from home at present, and have been for several weeks. By chance I did "Teaching You a Lesson" just before leaving and have been totally stoked to get back home and do "One Lesson is Not Enough", and now I have another sequel to look forward to. It's going to be a VERY good summer!

Also, and this is very subjective of course: it seems like the type of edging was about 80/20 for holding vs edge and stop. Personally I feel that flipping that ratio works better, with frequent and repeated stop-start edges, and occasional edge holds. Again, that’s subjective, but mostly holding can almost get numbing, while stop-start keeps it more dynamic. Adding in different techniques and speeds also helps a lot with that (e.g. one finger, light grip, slow stroke etc.)

I haven't done this tease yet, but generally I agree that more balance/variety between holding and edge & stop is better for me too. I love edge holding, but for me it gets exhausting if there's too much, or too many that are too long (like more than a minute or two). For me edges longer than a minute or two should be few and further between. I'd make most holds 30 seconds or less, with some in the the 1 to 2 minute range, and only a few longer than that.

Variety is what really gets me. Like a series of edge and stop edges, then change it up by hold one, or two or 3, then more edge and stop edges. And for really building intensity, a series of edge and hold, starting with a short hold time, then each hold getting longer and longer.

What I really can't handle is rapid fire edging. I need at least 5 seconds between edges, and 7 to 10 is better.

Thanks for reading and being open to feedback!

I second this too! Your teases have always been top notch, and among the best on Milovana. I'm always happy to see a new release from you.

PG

Thanks a lot for your feedback. I'm thinking about doing a lighter version with less holding. Just if I find enough time - can't promise.

Amazing!

A long time ago I was thinking I would write a tease, and after seeing Lilit in "Iana's maze", I really wanted to use her in a starring role. With Miss Rebel already starring, two of my most favorite models in the same tease was euphoric. From the title page I saw Leona was also in the tease. I could only hope that was Leona Mia. The second day in the tease who did I see but Sofi Shane, OMGOMG.

After using Mila Azul in the second part of this series, it almost felt like someone had hacked my computer. I could say I like your choice of models, but it would be just as accurate to say I like my choice of models. You just wrote the tease series I always wanted to write if I could write.

Also the games you seamlessly include within the story really match my predilections. I hate to rate my favorite teases, but this has to be in the running for one of the best. Actually, many of the teases you have written would qualify for that honor.

Thank you.

It took me a long time to find my way into this part. Lilit gave me the push I needet to write the story. She's really amazing!
I've always wanted to have Leona in my tease. Now was the right moment.
And Sofi... She just fits perfectly into the story :)

Very nice tease!
But I still have problems entering the last chapter via password, I suspect there's still a mistake? When I try the different spellings, I get an "wrong password"-message, or when entering the one version I think is correct, the tease freezes. Maybe you have changed the password check, but not the site/location it is refering to?
So I alway have to start at the chapter with the ruined day, which makes it quite hard for me to finish the tease in one session. It's rather frustrating not to be able to start with the password to the last chapter - or maybe this is even intentional?

Well, it's definitely not intentional. I checked it and it should work properly.
After I had a spelling mistake, I changed it. The password should be

Spoiler: show

loyalty

. Please tell me, if it still doesn't work.


Thank you all for your feedback.
I hope you are as enthusiastic about it as I was when I wrote the tease.