Evil Stepmommy v2.0 [release][feedback]

[ritewriter]

I've finally published the new version of Evil Stepmommy, v2.0 "Ill Will." This version of the tease features:

NEW WILLPOWER SYSTEM: An entirely new willpower system, which is much more flexible than the previous version, easier for me to adjust, and easier for players to tailor. Will is now rated from 1-100 and typical willpower loses are 2-12, which should make willpower last a little longer and makes luck a bit more of a factor. Willpower checks, gains, and loses should all now be much more transparent as well. Will checks are now 1d100 vs Will, with a 10% chance of automatic success and a 10% chance of automatic failure. I can easily adjust all these numbers going forward, though I think the way things are now works well.

NEW ADDICTION SYSTEM: To complement the willpower system, there's a new addiction system. Each addiction point now reduces the chance of a willcheck by 1%. Players can now set their default addiction gain to 1, 2, or 3 points per increase, allowing for addictions to matter more or less based on player taste.

2 NEW SCENES + 1 MASSIVELY EXPANDED ONE! Changing the willpower/addiction system meant going over every single scene line by line. That and some stuff going on in my personal life made this update very time consuming, which is why it took so long. Still, I didn't want to publish without at least some new content, so there are effectively 3 new scenes, 2 brand new branches and 1 branch that's been completely revised. To learn how to access the scenes, click spoilers:

NEW VIDEO GAME:

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Now you can play a superhero video game! Choose to stay in your room either in the morning or afternoon, play a video game, and choose the superhero game.

EXPANDED VIDEO GAME:

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The GTA videogame has been massively expanded! It's a whole new experience. Choose to stay in your room either in the morning or afternoon, play a video game and choose "Explore a Sandbox City Full of Crime"

NEW SHOWER FANTASY:

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You can now fantasize about Elsa in the shower! Choose to shower in the midday and fantasize about your ex. Warning NTR content.

SO MANY BUGS STOMPED: Going over ever line had one benefit. I fixed countless bugs! The nature of this game makes it very tough to bug detect, so this was my one real chance to find and fix hundreds of bugs, both big and small. That said, if you find more bugs (and I'm sure I missed some), please post them in this thread or PM me.

STILL TO COME: Now that the bones of the game are fixed (and I'm NEVER changing them again), I'll be adding new scenes. v2.0 will be updated with bug fixes and more Bridgette content. Then I'll start v2.1 which will return to adding endings.

ESM CLASSIC: Finally, I'll probably delete v1.8 sometime soon. I'll then update v1.7 to 1.8, which will preserve the old will system (and, sadly, all those old bugs) for those that prefer the "Classic" version of ESM. Classic ESM won't be updated anymore after that because it would be WAY too much work.

That's about all the news I can think of. Sorry for the wait. Enjoy!

[ritewriter]

Also, I'd love to hear feedback, including any bugs, especially dead ends. Please post here or PM me!

[Sissycow]

If she calls you a sissy and you visit her at the pool, she starts to refer to her self as your bridgette. She also refers to her self in the 3rd person. It's like you meant for her to say mommy but she says bridgette instead.

[ritewriter]

If she calls you a sissy and you visit her at the pool, she starts to refer to her self as your bridgette. She also refers to her self in the 3rd person. It's like you meant for her to say mommy but she says bridgette instead.

Oops. Thanks. I didn't realize someone could get to that point as a sissy and still be calling her Bridgette. Fixed!*

*I hope.

[Magenta0285]

Looks good - I enjoyed v1 but never finished so looking forward to playing through v2!

I opted to play a videogame and it seems to have frozen - maybe it's just me, but posting in case it's a bug

This is the dialogue: You fire up Resident Devil Online. It's a survival game. Explore, kill, loot, that kind of thing.

[ritewriter]

I opted to play a videogame and it seems to have frozen - maybe it's just me, but posting in case it's a bug

This is the dialogue: You fire up Resident Devil Online. It's a survival game. Explore, kill, loot, that kind of thing.

Found it. There was a bad variable in an IF/THEN right after that. Should be fixed. Thanks!

[putkarak]

Thanks for update, its took long time to get to v2.0, i hope you will add more content and less text, i just love story with ms. Brigette, but in story with Ms. White there is 90% text and 10% images in late game.

[ritewriter]

Thanks for update, its took long time to get to v2.0, i hope you will add more content and less text, i just love story with ms. Brigette, but in story with Ms. White there is 90% text and 10% images in late game.

Hmmm, there are quite a lot of images if you run to Mrs. White's house and take the right paths, including some hypno sequences which are very image heavy. If you ran to Mrs. White, I'd love to know more details. Did you access the hypno or the foot worship sequences? Were you a boy or a sissy when you arrived? It might just be the path you took was short. For example if you pissed her off repeatedly before you ran away, she might've refused to take you in? Let me know and I'll check to make sure images are displaying correctly in whatever path you took.

[Magenta0285]

I opted to play a videogame and it seems to have frozen - maybe it's just me, but posting in case it's a bug

This is the dialogue: You fire up Resident Devil Online. It's a survival game. Explore, kill, loot, that kind of thing.

Found it. There was a bad variable in an IF/THEN right after that. Should be fixed. Thanks!

Awesome!

[BoundSquirrel]

There's a broken link in the shower scene.

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When you fantasize about Ms. White, she asks you:
"I really have got you all stirred up, haven't I, Junior?"
When you admit it, the tease hangs.

[ritewriter]

There's a broken link in the shower scene.

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When you fantasize about Ms. White, she asks you:
"I really have got you all stirred up, haven't I, Junior?"
When you admit it, the tease hangs.

Errr... I did something really dumb there. Doh.

Fixed. Thanks!

[spacerat]

Awesome! I haven't had time to try it out yet, but I can't wait. Thanks for all your hard work. This story is definitely one of the best I've ever read. Extremely hot.

[manager41]

Amazing work!
Thanks for the effort you put into this. Love the new willpower and addiction system. And the expanded scenes as well

[mangoman]

Amazing and hard work, but I do hope that you will create a new tease in the near future. You're such a good writer and it feels like you're stuck on this one, maybe because you're a perfectionist. Move on, the tease is amazing as it as, create a new experience or a real follow up sequel.

[ritewriter]

Awesome! I haven't had time to try it out yet, but I can't wait. Thanks for all your hard work. This story is definitely one of the best I've ever read. Extremely hot.

Thanks!

Amazing work!
Thanks for the effort you put into this. Love the new willpower and addiction system. And the expanded scenes as well

Glad you like the new system!

Amazing and hard work, but I do hope that you will create a new tease in the near future. You're such a good writer and it feels like you're stuck on this one, maybe because you're a perfectionist. Move on, the tease is amazing as it as, create a new experience or a real follow up sequel.

Hah! You're probably right, but I still have so many plans for this one. Also, I think, if I decide to do a new tease/game, I might try making it in Sugarcube or Harlowe so it can live places other than here. I love Milovana, but some of the outages make me worry it might not be around forever.