[RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] Fae's little seedling V0.1

[Davo]

Hi everyone!

I just published my first tease ever!
I'm very curious what people think about it.
All feedback is welcome!

Here is the link: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=71031
Enjoy!

[manwithcape]

You did almost everything right.
Nice pictures suited for the story, the character and her vibe works.
Kept the protagonist simple enough.

The only thing that I am not a fan of is the longer timers with no changes.
Some are almost 3 mins with nothing really happening.
That's too long.

[Davo]

You did almost everything right.
Nice pictures suited for the story, the character and her vibe works.
Kept the protagonist simple enough.

The only thing that I am not a fan of is the longer timers with no changes.
Some are almost 3 mins with nothing really happening.
That's too long.

Thanks for your feedback!
The fact that the protagonist is simple is a positive thing in your eyes?
I fully agree with your last point and just added more images and text during timers.
Hopefully that will make the interaction with her feel more dynamic in these parts.

[Slave24]

Loved it! Really hope a sequel is in the works

[manwithcape]

Yes.
Some teases create complex main characters but they are so different from me that they take me out of the story.

Simple characters or stereotypes are actually better imo since you know what to expect.
The twists should be in the story, not in the absurd choices "yourself" makes.

[SethK]

How long does this tease roughly take to complete?

[anewname_guy]

Loved this fun tease! I am also hoping for a sequel and another chance to spend time with Miss Fae! Loved hearing how my actions made her happy, how she called me a good boy and how I felt cared for.