[RELEASE]A unexpected type of training.

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StaminaGod
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[RELEASE]A unexpected type of training.

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Hello everyone this is my first tease hope you guys enjoy. :-D

If you want to leave any feedback or find a bug please report here, i'll appreciate a lot.

~A warning: English is not my first language, so if see anything really bad let me know too please.~ :lol:


Thanks for watching. :love:
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Jackall
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Re: [RELEASE]A unexpected type of training.

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Thanks for creating content! :yes:
I liked it overall, especially Lisas attitude, girls being a strict and pushing you is always fun.
Its a 4/5 for me, mainly because its one of the smaller teases compared to other multiple path / multiple hour larger projects.
There are lots of grammatical errors, most notably you wrote "fell" instead of "feel" consistently. Some problems with plurals: "that mountain" (singular) "those mountains" (plural) but you mix these up. also it should be "i was expecting a lot more from you" instead of "waiting a lot more of you"
There are more but these small things did not ruin the tease for me.
I can recommend trying it once for everyone.
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plenty of stroking then the latter half focuses on edgeholding. i did not measure the lenght exactly but it was over half an hour
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Re: [RELEASE]A unexpected type of training.

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Jackall wrote: Thu Mar 10, 2022 11:30 am Thanks for creating content! :yes:
I liked it overall, especially Lisas attitude, girls being a strict and pushing you is always fun.
Its a 4/5 for me, mainly because its one of the smaller teases compared to other multiple path / multiple hour larger projects.
I am glad you ejoyed. :-)
There are lots of grammatical errors, most notably you wrote "fell" instead of "feel" consistently. Some problems with plurals: "that mountain" (singular) "those mountains" (plural) but you mix these up. also it should be "i was expecting a lot more from you" instead of "waiting a lot more of you"
There are more but these small things did not ruin the tease for me.
I can recommend trying it once for everyone.
content:
Spoiler: show
plenty of stroking then the latter half focuses on edgeholding. i did not measure the lenght exactly but it was over half an hour
Thanks man for your feedback, i'll make some changes.
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