Dan's New Life 03: The Team Mascot

[KittyZateez]

Again, all I can say is WOW!

I had to read this during several sittings, because it's quite long and I tend not to want to devote enough time all at once to go through stories this lengthy (or shorter ones, for that matter). But I finally got to the end, and each time I read your works I am struck (and quite stunned) by your vivid imaginations of kinky bondage toys, associated teasing and mind games, and in general, all the little details of the action in your scenes.

All the different "main" characters have been very well developed, and this time you added all these other more minor characters that gang up on poor Dan and have their wicked way with him. And even though not all of the subject matter is in my preferred taste, I've always supported people's varying personal preferences - they fall very much into a "to each their own" kind of thing more so than any type of criticism of your writing. So...more power to you, there, teaseboy!!

Anyway, I wanted to post this complimentary message since there doesn't seem to be many replies to this story as of this moment, who knows why, I think it's a good demonstration of erotic, explicit teasing and kinky FemDom fantasy!

Kitty

[trelyy]

“I mean, don’t you think more women need to learn how fun it is to be in charge, Danny?” she had asked on the Thursday morning of his second week of denial, as she watched him shave his pubic hair with it and lotion his body under the steaming torrent of his shower, panting slightly as she touched her self. “Don’t you think more sexy young women need to know what it’s like to be on top? To be in charge? You like when I’m in change, don’t you Danny?” Dan had nodded obediently, and she had giggled as she purred, “See? Doesn’t it feel good to be a good, obedient boy and follow orders? Turn around and use that tingling mint body wash between those quivering cheeks for me while you think about it, okay baby? Do it the way i like.”

I spent a lot of time reading this, but you obviously put more effort into writing the story, picking up the pictures... simply amazing, I've never seen anything like it! It turned out very worthy! I like this paragraph, as if I see how she does it ...