[Feedback] Fun With Riley (For Women)

[Lydra]

Tease: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=49725

First tease, looking for any/all feedback! What worked for you? What didn't work for you? Too long? Not long enough? Hot? Not? All thoughts welcome.

Thanks!

[PlayfulGuy]

Holy smokes!

My initial reaction is

As you might guess from my username, I'm a guy, and even though the tease title said "for women", well, it's Riley Reid so I've gotta check it out . By the time she asked if I'd give her 30 to 40 minutes I was pretty much hooked, and then when I found out I'd get teased and edged and then have to deny myself for her. Hell yeah!

All in all I thought this tease was excellent, and I can see how women might find it even better. I found the initial dialog went on too long for my liking (cause I'm a guy) but the pictures you chose totally worked for me, and it's all exceptionally well written which is a rare thing these days, so I still enjoyed it and just allowed myself to stroke without edging while it played out. Mind you, I didn't do that well on the "without edging" part because the writing was so good it was turning me on (and I'm a guy and I was stroking) so by the time Riley told me to edge I'd already edged 5 or 6 times (17 by the time it all ended).

I absolutely loved the videos, and how they've been captioned specifically for use with this tease. It made the whole thing feel seamless and made it much more immersive. And the material works for me to. I'd love to be any of the women involved, particularly in the second video with Rosie and Alena (I'll be looking for more of them I can tell you Normally I don't care for having to switch between windows during a tease, but in this instance it wasn't even a bother. It was totally worth it.

The final video with Riley was excellent, and your instructions and timing were perfect. Having to stop touching when I did was, in a word, intense! Absolutely loved it! Mind you, I was on the edge waaaaaayyy before I was "supposed to be" and ended up basically riding that edge for a long time, but I love that too.

If I was to change anything it would be to shorten the "warmup" period a bit by reducing the delays in the dialog, but not reducing the dialog (like I said, it's exceptionally well written). And again that part might work better for women too, and I knew what I was getting into so.... The only other thing would be to increase the edges some. The intro left me expecting more edging, and more edging makes it that much more delicious when you have to stop!

I'm kind of shocked that this is your first tease. It's that good! I'm really looking forward to seeing more teases from you.

Thanks for this one! You made my day!

Hugs

[anonymister]

I am also a guy, and decided to try it anyway. I also found it too slow paced, and quit after a little while.
But thanks for making it, and hope others enjoy it.

[SomeWhatEdgy]

Im also a guy but didnt really care it's actually way closer to what im personally looking for than most of the hardcore dom stuff on this platform, way more sensual and teasing instead of humiliating. I really loved it and the writing was exceptionally, the idea with the videos was really sth special and really interesting but for some of the more impatient guys on this platform u might add an option to skip certain waiting times or dialogues cause sometimes it was a bit slow but its also an element of the teasing i suppose so I can see both ways. So in general i can say i loved your tease, i really did and i hope to see more like this maybe even for guys next time since there seem to be so many here but im fine with adapting to a girls tease. In the end it doesnt matter as long as its about tease and denial, some edging, and a hot young girl like Riley.

Keep up the good work, id hope to see more work from you in the future

[SarahService]

What a great tease! I have a vivid imagination and added something which wasn't included, but it really worked for me. In my mind, the three beautiful men who were nice enough to already post positive reviews and comments in this thread were watching as Riley teased me and left me dripping and hot; in tears crying at how I was just used for her pleasure then set aside when she was finished without the pleasure of my own orgasm.

[subslut98]

Mistress, you’ve made me so horny even though I’m straight that I’ve made an account to beg you to make many more of these teases, aimed at women. Alena and Rosie are such a discovery for me, my pussy was flooded with juices when that video started. Unfortunately I’m such a bad girl and I came during the third video, so I need to be punished mistress. Much love and keep up the good work and our pussies wettt