Feedback: Tiny Dick Losers Deserve Censored Porn

[androgyme]

Hiya guys, I'm back with a new tease involving Mistress Destiny. It's again catered to my tastes, but I hope some of you will at least enjoy it! I'd love to get some feedback here, or through PM if you'd prefer. I'm planning on writing more like it, so any feedback would be a great help.

I've not done the tease myself yet, so I'm not sure how it is for length and whatnot, but I'm thinking it'll be on the short side of things. Hopefully not too short though. Depending on how this goes, whether people like it or not, I'm planning on doing longer ones in the future, with more branching paths and stuff.

I did check it through for broken links and I think everything should be okay, but if anyone has issues, please let me know. Thanks and I hope you all enjoy it!

[Quarz]

Not a bad tease. The combination of light cbt together with stroking and some verbal components always makes for a nice tease with low commitment and few preparations required.

For my taste the content/time-ratio is too low, though. An average of 100+ strokes per slide, many of which slow strokes at that, is too much in my opinion. At least, unless the tease has a special reason for it. I think more slides with less strokes each would make for a better experience.

[ashplosh]

i agree with quarz i think having more pages and less strokes per page would be nice for the total length of the tease i think it's good though and also found no bugs. to answer the question the tease asks of is normal pixilated censored better or the boxes with captions i would say captions much hotter if even your wank material is humiliating you especially if you don't get to cum after all that wanking.

[Achab1851]

I had a lot of fun!
I agree with the above: maybe try with less strokes and more pages.
That said, I found this tease really frustrating ... as I like it!

In my opinion, pixel censorship adds more frustration. I also loved the images where you can see something more: I'm a lover of tits so I found unnderboobs pics really hard and hot!

I also suggest another type of censorship, consisting of a thin black bar which, however, lets us glimpse something, but obviously not everything. I find it much more frustrating and cruel, especially if put in the last stages of the game or in a "hold the edge" session. Personal opinion, of course.

An example:

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Anyhow you did a great job.
I look forward to the next one!

[androgyme]

@Achab1851: That's pretty interesting actually. I think I might have a few ideas for that already. Destiny would definitely make you work for those images though!!

[korminjin]

Welcome back.
I really like this series.

[Achab1851]

@Achab1851: That's pretty interesting actually. I think I might have a few ideas for that already. Destiny would definitely make you work for those images though!!

Glad you appreciated.
Also I think she would have a lot of fun ... and I do not run away from the challenges!
Let me know or sent me a PM if you need hint or help with your next job!