No cheating
No cheating
I've got another tease up, and I think it's pretty damn good. What do you think?
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Mz_Teneale
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Hey there..
Definately your best effort. You have really improved. The story was good and i absolutely loved the ending, definately my style
You can still improve of course, like everyone, i think with this tease you should have teased the guy without letting him touch for just a bit longer, just so that he was desperate to follow instructions no matter how frustrating. Also, i have had feedback for my latest tease that you shouldnt change location too much or it disrupts the fantasy. I think thats where this kind of tease fell down.
But, thats their opinion, I thought it was an awesome tease.
In my opinion the best teases dont let the guy cum at the end, because thats what they are there for.... To tease
Definately your best effort. You have really improved. The story was good and i absolutely loved the ending, definately my style
You can still improve of course, like everyone, i think with this tease you should have teased the guy without letting him touch for just a bit longer, just so that he was desperate to follow instructions no matter how frustrating. Also, i have had feedback for my latest tease that you shouldnt change location too much or it disrupts the fantasy. I think thats where this kind of tease fell down.
But, thats their opinion, I thought it was an awesome tease.
In my opinion the best teases dont let the guy cum at the end, because thats what they are there for.... To tease
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