Feedback for Squirt for Leia

[stormeagle]

Didn't see a feedback thread, so I thought I'd start one:

Loved this tease, loved the model, great text, good 'plot'.

My only suggestion would have been to make it a bit longer, but thats just a personal thing, as I can stand lots of edging

Would absolutely love to see a sequel

[all2true]

Well done
Thought it was very hot

I agree with stormeagle about more
perhaps in the sequal?

Rate it a five (if flashteases had ratings, sigh)

[cumhardy]

Hey thanks for the feedback guys :D
I appreciate it as it was only my second tease.

Yes I am indeed planning a sequel and will definately make it longer/tougher.
One problem I had was the preview didnt work in the nyx editor so I just published it and later realised it was kinda short... but sweet

Hopefully Leias parents will be out of the house again soon lol

[Devon113]

Haha that was cool, the ending was great^^ First I was a little disappointed (2nd to last slide), but the last slide really turned that around!

[stormeagle]

Loved the second part too

More! More!

[cumhardy]

Again, thankyou.

Until just now the ending of part 2 was messed up but its fixed now.

If you did this tease when I uploaded it about 12 hours ago you got a very different ending to how it should have been!
if so, try it again so that part 3 makes sense once its finished!

you will know you got the right ending because it will say THE END in big letters. have a go go go

[cumhardy]

Also...just changed part 2 so that you can read the text without a magnifying glass, or getting a kestrel with exceptional eyesight to read it for you.

I mean, using a glass would have been OK but using a kestrel would have been impractical. You would need to train it to sit on your shoulder and not peck your face off then you would have to train it to speak AND read english. Plus it would probably judge you while you masturbated... It wouldnt say anything about you wanking but you would know... from the look in its eyes. Then you would get paranoid whenever the kestrel was talking to your friends. You would be thinking like "whats that kestrel telling them?"
I thought it best just to make the text bigger. Sorry if you already invested in a bird of prey.

[forevrzero]

Perhaps it's just me, but it gets to the DO IT NOW! screen then just sits there. Tried it a few times now and even left it going when I went to work today. No change when I got back Is that the last screen? I never reached a "THE END" though...

Beyond that though, it's a very hot tease. Delays are a little on the long side for me but well worth it! (even if I haven't seen the true ending yet)

[cumhardy]

Hmm yeah, I dunno it does that sometimes I guess its just messed up still oh well that works as an ending i suppose. It worked last time I checked it.
Damn buggy flashteases and my bad scripting!

If it sticks there, just take that as the ending!

[cumhardy]

FIXED....hopefully.

who knows? I fixed this thing about 5 times now!

[cumhardy]

Part 3 is up and ... perhaps its working... I havent actually tested it because the nyx preview wont work for me but it should be fine.

There is a chance element in this towards the end, dont want to say too much incase it spoils it, but it has a randomly selected ending so it might be worth doing it more than once

[stormeagle]

Mmmm, just gets better and better!