This is a message for the author of this tease. This is a VERY good, quality tease. Good work on it. The only thing holding me back on adding it to my favorites is the English. There are a few parts that are almost beyond comprehension (understanding). It needs a little bit of editing, and I wouldn't mind helping you out with it. If you wouldn't object to it, I could correct the grammar of the tease and post my changes here so you can edit it and make it a truly five star tease.
Just say yes, and I will go ahead and start making these changes. Thanks Spain lugo!
Im Martine by Spain lugo
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bondageslave36
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Spain lugo
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Re: Im Martine by Spain lugo
YES.
You can correct the grammatical errors. And ill edit it corrected.
Post your corrected version and i will edit IM MARTINE. I need to improve my English.
Thank you. Maybe i need your help for future teases ( MASHA STAR).
Keep Wanking
You can correct the grammatical errors. And ill edit it corrected.
Post your corrected version and i will edit IM MARTINE. I need to improve my English.
Thank you. Maybe i need your help for future teases ( MASHA STAR).
Keep Wanking
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bondageslave36
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Re: Im Martine by Spain lugo
I won't mind helping you out in future teases at all. Just check back here soon, hopefully I can have it done in a few days.