F.B. Fire nation ruination

[Tury]

At it's core, I like the tease. I loved the Avatar series, and I love the fear of having to ruin an orgasm. Unfortunately, it appears that you put so little effort into making the tease that "Half-assing" it would have been a step up. Since I think it could have been so much more, I figured some constructive criticism couldn't hurt.

1. There is an insanely large amount of actual Airbender Pornography available. "http://rule34.paheal.net/post/list/Avat ... irbender/1" as a start. Merely using a handful of images from the show is borderline unforgivable. Not to say that you SHOULDN'T, mind you. Ty Lee's Smile, or Azula's smug condescension work well in a tease, as long as that's not all that we get.

2. We need more time. The pattern was predominantly Azula, with images of Ty Lee and permission to stroke as almost an afterthought. Rather than getting close to edging, I honestly started getting soft.

3. Mix it up a little. It became clear VERY quickly that nothing was changing. The tease followed the same repeating pattern with no changes. Even if I had the chance of edging, I would have easily been able to predict when Azula was going to appear and therefore knew when my best chance of cumming was. It's more fun to be made to keep guessing.

4. It had no real ending. If, along with Azula trying to ruin our orgasm, there was the chance of the Tease ending before we get to cum it would add a layer of excitement/panic to the experience. However, the pages not only kept repeating but the only way of reaching the end of the tease was to hit the "cumming" button on the Azula page. Implying that the only way to reach the end was to ruin your orgasm. Out of curiosity, I opened the tease in a separate tab and let it run for 2 hours and it was still going.

Hopefully, this helps in some way.