Hey everyone,
just published my first Tease.
Named "You'll obey me, right?" (and the german version "Du gehorchst mir, oder?")
What do you think?
What is good?
What is bad?
Thank you
-Ra
You'll obey me, right? Feedback
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sliten_men_vacker
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Re: You'll obey me, right? Feedback
realy good more like that and in english
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Ra
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Re: You'll obey me, right? Feedback
What especially did you like about it?
What else would you like to see in future teases?
What else would you like to see in future teases?
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Quiet Linda
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Re: You'll obey me, right? Feedback
Miss thought it was well made.
Good English with very nice pictures.
Decent plot.
I rated it 5 stars even though it is not my style.
But; it totally fits this site.
Keep UP the work.
Good English with very nice pictures.
Decent plot.
I rated it 5 stars even though it is not my style.
But; it totally fits this site.
Keep UP the work.
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zenlover
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Re: You'll obey me, right? Feedback
Loved it. The imagery choices were thrilling, and the instructions built nicely (I dislike teases that engage in anal before turning me on or edging me a few times) I like anal teasing, and there was a bit of that, but instructions to use lots of lube would have made it more fun. Thanks for doing this work, I hope you do more in the same direction! If you want to build one off of any of my erotic fiction, please let me know and i'll share it, or you can surf over to www.fetlife.com and find it there, where I am zenlover also.
Thanks again for a fun experience, visually and behaviorally!
Thanks again for a fun experience, visually and behaviorally!
KINKY FACT: I'm more of a tease and delay guy than tease & deny... prolong pleasure, but don't deny it! I submit to others on cam shows once a week or so. Contact me to be notified.