Hold It Back FB Thread
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frankendude
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Hold It Back FB Thread
I put it together over the course of one day and honestly didn't expect it to be all that good. It doesn't look like it affected it that significantly. As always, please share FB as I try to incorporate critiques and things you enjoyed into future teases.
Re: Hold It Back FB Thread
Loved this one!
Bug: The pages labelled TwelfthGirlX didn't lead anywhere. No problem though, I just used the debug mode to jump forward.
Critique: I don't like when each edge page has the same very fast beat on it, for the same reasons I said in your other thread. Also in my opinion, when you want the player to hold an edge, I think it's better to have a button or instruction saying "holding the edge" rather than a button saying "edge" and then "hold it!" in text on the next page. Otherwise I have to quickly get back to the edge after having let go for a second, unless I am supposed to be holding the edge for a second each time I click an edge button.
Bug: The pages labelled TwelfthGirlX didn't lead anywhere. No problem though, I just used the debug mode to jump forward.
Critique: I don't like when each edge page has the same very fast beat on it, for the same reasons I said in your other thread. Also in my opinion, when you want the player to hold an edge, I think it's better to have a button or instruction saying "holding the edge" rather than a button saying "edge" and then "hold it!" in text on the next page. Otherwise I have to quickly get back to the edge after having let go for a second, unless I am supposed to be holding the edge for a second each time I click an edge button.