(Feedback) Hell with Mel part 2

str0be · Post by **str0be** » Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:45 am

Got part two up. Let me know what you think.

-str0be-

slavemo · Post by **slavemo** » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:31 am

it would be great to see that as a very long series!!!!!

Great job on the tease

chastbelt · Post by **chastbelt** » Mon Jan 14, 2008 1:39 pm

Wow,

a great tease ans a nice and cruel story.
i love it!

Marke · Post by **Marke** » Mon Jan 14, 2008 7:52 pm

Nice sense of foreboding and dread developing along with the constant edging.

seb_soumis · Post by **seb_soumis** » Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:26 pm

Nice tease, thanks, I hope also to be a long serie

str0be · Post by **str0be** » Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:52 pm

Due to the feedback I'm recieving on this, I think I'll definately be doing more parts. How many will depend on how long I can go with decent ideas. (and of course good pics)

But keep the feedback coming, anything that people want to see (different kinks) please let me know.

-str0be-

ninety · Post by **ninety** » Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:15 am

Really good tease, I like the involvement with the storyline, rather than just stroke n times. Mel is a great model to use, very sexy, and lots of pics to choose from. Kinkwise it might be nice for Mel to have to reinforce she's in control with a bit of punishment, tied balls, nipple torture etc. I'm loving the lingerie wearing! Later she could ask her friends to help train you. I'll shut up though as it's your tease! (I am now thinking about writing my first, hopefully it'll go further than the other similar thoughts I've had!)