1) "stroke X times in Y seconds" is pretty much the worst method to do stroking task. "Give me 50 strokes before the timer runs out". First I gotta read it. Then look at the time. Then divide the number by the ammount of seconds. Man! That's really annoying. You do either this math, which is hardly very sexy, or you end up stroking too fast/slow and either have to wait till the timer runs out or speed up. That's why I say it's the worst way to do stroking.
2) after a ruined orgasm the next one (or next edge) is harder to get. So closer to the end of the tease I simply failed edging in time. You need to make every next "round" longer, with more stroking before 1st edge. Instead, you do the opposite. I guess it's a minor flaw. The last part, after you choose you wanna cum for real is insanely short. I did not manage to get anywhere NEAR the edge, and the tease told me to, then told me to hold, then ended. Weeel, a hudge letdown really.
3) The decision in the end... You said it'll be optional cum eating. Instead you ask if a player wants to cum and right away command to eat cum. Where's the choice if I want to eat it? Ruins the experience a bit for me, because I have to skip that task against the tease story.
4) A minor thing that breaks experience a bit is that she SUDDENLY appears in a different panties. You'd better explain it next time.
On a brighter note I want to commend you about a very good tease, good choice of pictures, very good and consistent "story" you wrote.
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