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For slave who disallow to Cum 2

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This tease is for slave who forbidden to cum. It's not just a flash version of my previous tease, but a totally new story. Not so easy this time. More random strokes and edges. More than one ending.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=20593

Please give me feedback.

You can post your report here or PM to me.
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I liked the pacing, the model you chose, and the length. I really liked everything about it, with one exception. I take it English is not your first language. Perhaps you could have someone proofread your material before you post the next one? I'd love to see another tease script from you. Please.
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elvisomar wrote:I liked the pacing, the model you chose, and the length. I really liked everything about it, with one exception. I take it English is not your first language. Perhaps you could have someone proofread your material before you post the next one? I'd love to see another tease script from you. Please.
Thanks for the tips :-)
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Did I got it right? Is it a loop to a "forced" orgasm in the end? Or did I just work on my stamia?
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I really, really liked this. The pacing was the best I've seen in quite awhile. It seemed a little long, but not by much. Really excellent work, and I wasn't bothered by the grammar.
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Re: For slave who disallow to Cum 2

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switch787 wrote:I really, really liked this. The pacing was the best I've seen in quite awhile. It seemed a little long, but not by much. Really excellent work, and I wasn't bothered by the grammar.
Thank you very much.

I will keep in mind about the pacing on my next tease :smile: (though I am not quite sure how it works out :w00t: )
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Thank you for this tease. i really enjoyed it. great model choice. very very sexy.

thanks for you hard work. cant wait to see more from you
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This is a perfect tease Mistress One !! Your timing is excellent really !! After 2 or 3 edges the pauses and the tempo of stroking keeps me on the edge almost all the time the rest of the tease. I did the tease 3 times and had to ruin 3 times, couldnt make it to the end .... Since i have no Mistress i promissed myself i may have a full orgasm if i can make it to the end ... i will keep trying and i really love Your work !!
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Re: For slave who disallow to Cum 2

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x_athos_x wrote:Thank you for this tease. i really enjoyed it. great model choice. very very sexy.

thanks for you hard work. cant wait to see more from you
Thank you.

I like the model too. I know i have to use her on my first sight ;-)
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Re: For slave who disallow to Cum 2

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jos_nl_2004 wrote:This is a perfect tease Mistress One !! Your timing is excellent really !! After 2 or 3 edges the pauses and the tempo of stroking keeps me on the edge almost all the time the rest of the tease. I did the tease 3 times and had to ruin 3 times, couldnt make it to the end .... Since i have no Mistress i promissed myself i may have a full orgasm if i can make it to the end ... i will keep trying and i really love Your work !!
It's great to know that you enjoy the tease.
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Re: For slave who disallow to Cum 2

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what is the name of the model?
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