First things first:
I did not write this story. I have a little bit of good writing under my belt (The Night Nurses, Simpler This Way) but Matt Moreau did this one.
Also, I was not able to learn what the rules are for posting Literotica links in this forum. If I have transgressed, I apologize.
I did this for two reasons:
One, I found this story incredibly erotic. (It's a bit slow, and it falls apart in the last two chapters, but up until chapter 4, it's smoking.) I want to know what other readers think of it, and the feedback on Literotica is unconstructive crud.
Which brings me to my second reason: I have an idea to adapt (read: rip off) this story into a version as I would have written it, (and post it here and on Lit) using the same general plot points: The husband who is stuck at home under house arrest, the wife who is really in love with him but has made it clear that she's going to bring home other men, and her increasing boldness--and his worsening humiliation--as her enjoyment of what she's doing to him grows, and he's forced to adapt.
I'd like to know what you all think of this idea. Here's the original story.
http://www.literotica.com/s/millie-and-jake-ch-01 (Or just go to search.literotica.com and put in the title, and it comes right up.)
(I'm also going to repost the two of mine mentioned above shortly.)
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