This is my first Tease, and i need some feedback. I know its a little bit short but that will change in the future. what i want to know is if there are any mistakes or what you like/ dislike in the tease.
The concept will be that you will have to earn in every session some more for privileges (watch better porn, stroke while the session, and so on...)
look forward to some criticism :)
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Slaveboy90
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Re: FB: Lanny´s Slave
I loved it, there arent many teases which manage to get the humiliation aspect right, but I think this series could be really good for that if you stick to your idea. Thanks!
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glad to hear that :) i will do my best !
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Part 2 is online, enjoy !
Let me know what you think about it !
Let me know what you think about it !
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Nice work, will there be a part 4?
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Re: FB: Lanny´s Slave
If you want I will make a 4. Part but actually I don't want to continue, cuz I don't got the time for a whole series ... but I want to make single teases...