FB: Hot Summer at Model's Retreat

[cactusman]

My latest original tease is

Hot Summer at Model's Retreat: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=12210

Enjoy, and comments are very welcome.

[pbchillin]

Great fun, I liked the innocence angle to it too.

[strokerboy3]

Great Tease. The writing was really good and the model was smoking hot. The idea of the tease is awesome. Overall I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see what happens!

[cactusman]

Great Tease. The writing was really good and the model was smoking hot. The idea of the tease is awesome. Overall I really enjoyed it and can't wait to see what happens!

Thanks to you and to pbchillin for your kind words. I appreciate it.
I do think there can be more of a sequel...

[dolphkuellar]

Thoroughly enjoyed this - great work, cactusman! It was very well-written, as always, but what really made it stand out for me (pun intended) was the "innocence angle", as mentioned by pbchillin above. I think that gives this a lot of potential for some great tense moments in future, if you ever decide to do a sequel :)

[cactusman]

Thanks to you all for your positive comments. In appreciation, I have continued the Hot Summer at Model's Retreat series with:

"Hot Summer at Model's Retreat (Part 2): http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=12333

Enjoy, and comments are welcome!

[cactusman]

I have just published the third, and final part of the Hot Summer at Model's Retreat series:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=13029

Enjoy, and comments are welcome.

[cactusman]

I have just published the third, and final part of the Hot Summer at Model's Retreat series:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=13029

Enjoy, and comments are welcome.

I was very surprised just now to see that part three is now the highest rated tease on the site. It's rating is currently 4.62 (which you can see in the rss feed), with 100 people who rated it, and 4259 views. I'm sure this situation won't last, but it's encouraging. Too bad I am not going to be able to write many teases any time soon!