(Feedback) Night From Hell With Mel

str0be · Post by **str0be** » Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:07 am

When I found this series of pics from Melanie I knew I had to do a tease using them. It doesn't have instructions, it's just more of a straight-up stroke piece.

pin-dicked sissy · Post by **pin-dicked sissy** » Mon Jan 07, 2008 2:49 pm

i was nodding vigorously to be her sissy slave.....and hard as too...it was great.

more please??

Marke · Post by **Marke** » Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:46 pm

Yes, great pictures and definitely improved by being put into a tease. Most enjoyable.

Pity the tease system doesn't permit a slideshow type of display, although I suppose the new flash generator has this, but I'm yet to check it out.

Oh yeah, and I was nodding vigorously too.

str0be · Post by **str0be** » Mon Jan 07, 2008 9:26 pm

Should I assume that there would be interest in doing a sequel?

I left it open ended for that purpose.

Marke · Post by **Marke** » Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:21 pm

I love series - so yes, definite interest.

pin-dicked sissy · Post by **pin-dicked sissy** » Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:18 pm

nods emphatically...hell yes there's interest

please more

jesse

topamart · Post by **topamart** » Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:34 pm

It'd be marvellous a serie, so... yes

bondageslave36 · Post by **bondageslave36** » Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:35 pm

I liked the story, but teases without much instruction aren't quite my cup of tea. I was excited when I saw the title and the tags. I am not putting down your tease, as it was a pretty hot fantasy, but perhaps you could also make a tease with that in real time instead of "reliving" the fantasy. I think that would bring it up to a 5 star tease for me.

str0be · Post by **str0be** » Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:49 pm

bondageslave36 wrote:I liked the story, but teases without much instruction aren't quite my cup of tea. I was excited when I saw the title and the tags. I am not putting down your tease, as it was a pretty hot fantasy, but perhaps you could also make a tease with that in real time instead of "reliving" the fantasy. I think that would bring it up to a 5 star tease for me.

I'm not sure exactly how the next part(s) will play out, but I have a bunch of ideas running around in my mind, so I'm gonna start working on something. I will more than likely include more instructions in future installments since I'm definately into that too. (see my previous tease Roommate Kate Makes You Wait).

What I was going for doing the flashback sort of thing was another way of conveying that feeling of helplessness. There's nothing you can do to stop it, since it already happened. I figure that since at this point in the story, the trap is essentially sprung, it would become much more present-tense, describing what happens from there.

I'm gonna get cracking on it though, I suppose it's possible I could have another part up tonight (Tue), but probably sometime in the next couple days is more likely.

In the meantime, keep the feedback coming!

-str0be-