Feedback for Dark Dreams

submatt · Post by **submatt** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 5:34 am

Hmmm ... not my best work, but I figured I'd publish it rather than delete it. Maybe some of you will like it.

submale01 · Post by **submale01** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 11:59 am

I really enjoyed it but i seemed to get stuck in a loop. or was that the idea.

Keep up the good work

LNS · Post by **LNS** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:03 pm

I liked it. I like how you used the looping to allow it to go as long as the person wanted.

LNS

JelloBoy · Post by **JelloBoy** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:36 pm

I didn't really care for the looping, it got mind numbing after a while - The tease needs an ending...like ending in a wet dream, or getting caught by your current gf.

Marke · Post by **Marke** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 8:58 pm

I think it is a great tease - love the frustration of the loop. Great use of the pictures of the ex. Really had a dream like feel to it as well.