The Gypsy's Test [feedback]

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mu
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The Gypsy's Test [feedback]

Post by mu »

Hello, I just made my first webtease.

Hope you like it: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=1776
Tell me what you think.
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submatt
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Well ...

Post by submatt »

It's a bit much. It reminded me of the Impossible Tease - see http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=243

I, for one, have a hard time edging even a few times. I can manage it if I'm consistently being teased for each edge. But being told to edge 30 times all at once, without further stimulation ... well, it's just not for me.

I hope this was at least constructive criticism for you. And I do thank you for your contribution.
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Post by LNS »

First I would say thanks for posting your first tease quite an accomplishment.

It seemed fairly well done to me, especially for your first effort. I won't argue with submatt (He's sort of an expert) but I would point out you said near edges, not edges. I don't think your tease is anywhere near as impossible as the "impossible tease".

Best of luck and keep at it.

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Post by addictlion »

:w00t: :w00t: :w00t: I actually liked the heavy edging aspect. Not to mention that Priya Rai is mindblowingly hot. Tease or no tease I have fantasies about her. Good effert
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Post by markle »

Yeah, I bailed at the 30 near edges screen. Maybe some like that but I gotta keep it moving. Otherwise a nice job!
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