FB: So, You're All Locked Up

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Ford
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FB: So, You're All Locked Up

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Continuing my trend of reviewing Amber Stone teases...

Loved this one. As always the dialogue was very 'real' and carefully-done, and had just the kind of innocent/cruel 'voice' I like. The little hint at cuckolding was very good too.
For a criticism, I'd say it could have been longer. When you're in chastity, the agony comes from waiting a long time. Here I only felt I had to for a while. But I'm keeping my cage on for a while anyways :-P

It's nice to see you writing again, Miss, I do hope you give us a few more!
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Re: FB: So, You're All Locked Up

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I enjoyed this tease. Well written, with a nicely cocksure lead character, if that's the right adjective. I agree with the previous poster that it is quite short ... maybe she should rub the chastity in just a little more!

Thanks for posting it though, the quality was good and from a personal point of view it is nice to see the chastity theme rather than the more common stroking theme.
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Re: FB: So, You're All Locked Up

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Ah Ford, such kind words as always :-D Thank you and MartinC both for your reviews.

I've recently taken an interest in focusing on chastity (the boys who aren't all caged up might want to take this time to practice some self-control and keeping their hands off! ;-) ) so my teases will get much longer and I'll start to work in more everyday chores. Some will be just like this one, no instructions and just teasing all the poor cocks that won't get any mercy from their keyholders :-D

I'll have one or two new teases up over the weekend, so keep an eye out :love:



-Miss Amber
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