FB: Tease Club

[d3vi0n]

Made my first tease:
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=11425

Nothing extreme, mostly stroking, edging and chance to cum/ruin/denial.
Some random and interactive elements are in there too...

There is quite some text and a bit of a "story".
I hope its understandable... my english could be better.

Which was the best of the 10 Girls? (Repeat tease to see them all...)

Feedback is welcome (tell me if you find any bugs) :)

[jjsubslut]

great tease, would love to see it continued

[Incubo]

You've got a broken button on Carmen.
When she tells you to edge, hitting the edge button doesn't do anything.

[d3vi0n]

fixed... thx

[jayjaysub]

I love this type of tease.... The good points are:

1. No ridiculously long timers holding edges
2. Pictures change quickly enough (again no long timers)
3. Getting to the edge and stroking basically how I want -- I don't get anything out of such things as stroking once every 5 seconds... can anybody really keep excited at such a slow pace?
4. Incredibly hot girls with some attitude
5. No pain

So a big 5.0 Thumbs Up from me.

jayjay

[ThomasKu]

Great tease. Good timing and a nice concept. And what I've seen at the end were some more really sexy girls. So I will try to do the tease again soon and visit one of the other girls.
The only thing I didn't really like was that the receptionist had to be Capri. She's just not my type of girl...

[ap and jp]

A+ tease. Well written, easy to understand, and all of the tasks are reasonable (at least the ones I have come across). The only problem I have with the tease is that whenever I redo the tease, It seems like the same girl and the same outcome play out over and over. I dont know if its just my bad luck but every time I do the tease its Capri denying the orgasm. By the way, from what I saw the models and the possibilities are fantastic. Keep up the good work!

[d3vi0n]

thx for all the feedback.

Is the english ok?
Which of the 10 girls should become the next "main character" if i continue the tease?

@ap and jp
the tease has mainly 3 random elements:
* visiting 1 of 10 girls after initial teasing by capri (every girl including capri has the same chance)
* teasing after visit (slightly higher chance to longest path)
* result (slightly higher chance to no cum)
visiting the same girl over and over is bad luck...

[camel]

One thing I wish you had done was to make an index page where we could optionally jump to different parts of the tease. I know that breaks the story, but after the third or fourth time, it would help those of us who just want to see the other women there.

Or.. maybe after the first random person, Capri could say that she's ready for the last phase of the interview but offer to introduce you to another lady first... and then give us a choice of the ten girls plus "random".

Note: I wish I had done this for my own flash tease as well. I wish I had made a way to skip the intro or jump to any of the endings. Hmm... if I were to edit and fix that, does that change the date on the tease? mess up the current ratings on it?

[d3vi0n]

I understand your argument. I considered that myself when I wrote the tease.

But you said it... it would break the story (a "second visit" would do that too... f.e.: it could be the same girl). The experience of the tease would make no sense either (no balanced "teasing curve" if you can jump right to a phase you want). Hey... its tease and denial, right? You have to "suffer" the whole teasing, if you want the chance of another visit or a better outcome on the end. At least that were my reasons to do the tease the way it is.

[SimpleThunder]

Lovely, definately my style.

I have one remark though;
When at the end of the tease you get told that you can't cum, without there being a sequel or anything of the sort, the motivation to obey is fairly small (In my case, that is).

You don't know when/if there will be a sequel.

[lemming]

I think this is a great tease!! Well done!

The first time I did it, the second girl I went to said to cum, which was disappointing so early, so I skipped it, then the receptionist said to cum and i was surprised it was so 'easy' to cum.

Tried it again and got denied, so that's good it's random.

What I'd really like is the ability to choose up front if you are even allowed to cum at all, and if you just want it to be up to the girls (like it is today), or only have a chance at the end (only up to the last girl), or I suppose a 100% chance to cum at the end.

I don't know if it has logic to give ruined endings, but that would be good too.

I think that the chance to cum should increase the further you go along, and maybe early girls who would tell you to cum might tell you to ruin instead so you can keep going.

Anyway, great tease, I'll be trying it some more. Two times through and I've only seen the receptionist and one other girl so it has good reply.

Oh one last bit of feedback is that I personally prefer a metronome giving me stroke speeds instead of 1/sec etc. Or I also don't mind the way you do it where you say "medium but no slower than 1/sec" or whatever.
I personally like the metronomes.

Anyway I wouldn't have written so much if I didn't think this was a great tease already, and I look forward to the next one being even better!

[fvoyeur]

Hi!

Great tease. I tried it twice and both times, I saw Capri first, then one of the girls and then Capri again at the end. Since I played it only twice, I don't know if the pattern is always the same but, since there are 10 girls, it looks like only the middle part contains a random girl. To make this really random, I would much prefer to see a random girl for warm-up, another random girl for an endurance round and another random girl for the final round. It seemed a bit short so it might as well contain more than one endurance round.

Anyway, if I ever decide to take the time to make a tease I might go that way.

Bye!