Don't Worry about that

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bloatedballs
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Don't Worry about that

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what u think ?
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Too short. Not enough of a story.
The girl was hot, though.

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yes story was short, but strangely, I really enjoyed it
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I quite liked it .. nicely evil selfish girl, and none of that endless "ten strokes of this, 30 of that" stuff.

One thing though ... go into page 6 and change 'seamen' to 'semen' ... I break off being lost in the fantasy when I suddenly get an image of mariners!
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