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lockgrid · Post by **lockgrid** » Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:02 am

So I've just published my first ever couple of stories/teases. Hopefully these will get more instructional as they go along, but at the moment they are just setting up the scenario really.

I'd appreciate some comments/criticism so I can make the future installments better.

elvisomar · Post by **elvisomar** » Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:16 am

Very well done. The set-up was well paced, and LexiBelle is a lovely girl. I'll be interested to see where the story leads us. Speaking for myself, I'd look forward to seeing something a bit longer and more involved, as long as the writing, pacing and tone are as good as your first efforts. Thanks for contributing!

billlr · Post by **billlr** » Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:13 am

Great tease. Great girl.

Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Bill

atatflo · Post by **atatflo** » Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:08 pm

I really like your style of writing, keep up the good work! :)

I'd like to know if you are going to publish a third tease in a few days :)

lockgrid · Post by **lockgrid** » Sat Mar 26, 2011 10:41 pm

Just published the third instalment of my Lexi series. Hope everyone enjoys.

cactusman · Post by **cactusman** » Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:19 am

Excellent work! I like the series a lot so far.

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