Feedback for Hurry Up!

submatt · Post by **submatt** » Sat Dec 22, 2007 9:54 pm

This one is long and fast, with lots of twists and turns. Let me know what you think.

submatt · Post by **submatt** » Sat Dec 22, 2007 11:43 pm

Had to fix a couple of things on the fly. Hope it didn't affect anybody.

bokkashule · Post by **bokkashule** » Sun Dec 23, 2007 5:29 am

Stuck after the palming bit -- mistress says "Alright you've made your point" then it stops. Waited for 10 minutes and nothing happens.

Makarov · Post by **Makarov** » Sun Dec 23, 2007 8:59 am

After the down stroking, you get the options of asking to cum, to stop, or to keep going. If you choose keep going, it goes into a loop with no exit. Is that supposed to happen?

submatt · Post by **submatt** » Sun Dec 23, 2007 9:33 am

Sorry about the bugs. My computer freezes halfway through when I preview it, so I missed a few things before publishing it.

The "stuck after the palming bit" - fixed (one little space between words - ugh!)

The endless stroking loop - yes, that is on purpose. I just thought it would be particularly evil.

If anyone notices anything else amiss, please let me know, so I can fix it.

subboytom · Post by **subboytom** » Wed Dec 26, 2007 5:02 pm

Im afraid I have no particularly useful feedback, beyond a loud bravo. I just had an awful lot of fun with that tease; one of the best on this site, without a doubt. The choice of model was good, the instructions to the point and the tasks exciting. I thought the use of timers was particularly well done - you really exploited the possibilities of the flash format. If we could vote, I would give it a clear 5.

Tobias23 · Post by **Tobias23** » Wed Dec 26, 2007 5:56 pm

I'm no clothespin expert, so no way in hell could i get them on and off fast enough. Without cheating i would have been stuck in a loop there :D

Other than that, greaaat tease :)

[x] Vote for vote system on flash teases :D

Feedback for Hurry Up!

Feedback for Hurry Up!

Fixes

Sorry about the bugs