Softer Porn: Is it worth the two orgasms?

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loserDeniedPussy
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Softer Porn: Is it worth the two orgasms?

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This is the place to let me know what you did and didn’t like. I really appreciate all of you who read my teases, and I would love to hear what you would like to see in the new ones.
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loserDeniedPussy wrote:This is the place to let me know what you did and didn’t like. I really appreciate all of you who read my teases, and I would love to hear what you would like to see in the new ones.
This was pretty good. It was also an interesting concept.

However I found not completely involving, probably because it refers explicitly to milovana.com, which takes me out of direct involvement with the story. And some pages have too much text. Also in one place change "mussels" to "muscles."
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Re: Softer Porn: Is it worth the two orgasms?

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The girl in this is absolutely beautiful.

More teases with her in it if possible, please!

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